题目：请以“Everyone Needs Help”为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。
Everyone Needs Help
1 Did you get any help from others?
2 Did you give any help to people when they needed?
3 Tell your story
参考作文
In our daily life, we are dealing with different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.
在我们的日常生活中我们会遇到各种各样的人，无论是在家里、学校，还是在其他地方，我觉得我们都需要帮助。并且只有那些愿意帮助他人的人会获得别人的帮助。
One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily.
一天，我在街上看到一个背着沉重书包的小女孩，她正开心地走着。
Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm-hearted person.
突然，一位老人在穿过街道时摔倒了。她迅速地奔向老人，但是她太矮了，没法把老人扶起来。我过去帮助她把老人扶到安全地带。老人一再感谢我们。我觉得这个小女孩虽然年轻，但是一个很热心肠的
time is money. but in my opinion, time is even more precious than money. why? because when money is spent, we can earn it back. however, when time is gone, it will never return. this is the reason why we must value time.
it goes without saying that the time for our study and work is unusually limited. hence, even an hour is extremely precious. we should make full use of our time to do useful things.
Nowadays, working overtime is so common in many companies, especially in foreign companies, private companies, and joint ventures. As far as I am concerned, there are two main reasons of working overtime. For one thing, there is indeed too much work to do. If it is so, the boss should compensate staffs by paying them as overtime salary or giving them vacations. For another, some staffs are not suitable for their positions. In that case, the boss ought to help them to improve their working efficiency. If they are still not qualified, boss may change the positions for them, or to the worst, dismiss them. That's all what I think about working overtime.
你叫张鹏，林涛来信向你询问怎样才能学好英语。请根据下面的要点给他回封信。无论遇到什么困难，都不要放弃。每天都花时间学*英语。多记忆单词并且尽量使用它们。尽可能多地阅读英文书报等。听或唱英语歌能使你对英语更感兴趣。
Dear Lin Tao,
I am glad to receive your last letter. You want to know how to learn English well. Here is my advice:
You mustn't give up whatever you meet any difficulties that you meet. Every day you should spend some time in learning English. Remember as many English words as possible and try your best to use them.
Read English books, magazines or newspapers as often as you can. It is useful and important for you to improve your English. I think listening or singing English songs can make you more interested in English learning.
Hope you make great progress in your English learning.
Yours,
Zhang Peng
1
为了交流学*经验，提高学*效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
2
亲爱的同学，你的初中学*生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学*英语的心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学*中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学*感悟;2.词数80左右。
【优秀满分范文】
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
3
父亲节马上就要到了，但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的'提示进行适当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右，开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。
提示：1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西，如领带等：
2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
【优秀满分范文】
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?
4
请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
提示：1.春节是中国最重要的节日;
2.人们大多回家过年，家庭成员团聚;
3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);
4.孩子们喜欢春节。
【优秀满分范文】
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.
People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.
Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
5
假设Linda是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示：1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发;现在个子高多了，长发。
2.爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
3.性格：以前外向;现在有些内向。
要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥;
2.层次清晰，语言流畅;
3.80词左右。
【优秀满分范文】
Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.
She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.
I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
6
背景设定：最*，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件，想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏，请根据以下提示，给Miachael回一封电子邮件。
过去
生活条件差，道路狭窄，车辆少，住不好，吃不饱，联系不便......
现在
生活条件优越，道路宽，车辆多，住得舒适，手机普及......
要求：1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述;
2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;
3.词数80词左右，开头语以给出(不计入词数)。
参考词汇：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯)，telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Michael,
You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely
Kang Min
7
随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
优点
1. 足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累。
2. 价格通常比较便宜。
3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。
缺点
1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。
2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。
注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面;
2.80词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
【优秀满分范文】
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
All in all, I love shopping online.
8
假如你是李华，今年上初三了，现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数：60-80。
【优秀满分范文】
I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.
I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.
I really miss my old days.
9
某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学*成绩，不理解自己等问题;
2.你对这些问题的看法;
3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
第一篇：
范文：中学生该不该上网
最*你们学校要举行一次“中学生该不该上网”的讨论。你是赞成者之一，认为我们不应该因噎废食。请根据下表内容写一篇发言篇。 要求：字数100词左右注意：不要逐句翻译。 益处
1.看国内外新闻，获取信息。 2.发e-mail，打电话。 3.上网络学校，阅读各种书籍，自学外语。4.欣赏音乐，观看体育比赛，玩游戏，网上购物，丰富我们的生活。 5.提高我们操作电脑的能力 注意事项
1.不要沉湎于(be given to)上网以免影响生活和学*。 2.不要上不健康的网站。 参考范文：
In my opinion，the Internet is helpful rather than harmful as someone else thinks. As is known to all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the Internet，we can read news at home and from abroad and get as much information as we can. We can send e - mails or make phone calls to our family as well as to our friends. We can also attend the net school，read many books and even teach ourselves English. We can also enjoy music，watch matches and play computer games on the Internet. We can even do shopping on line. Besides，we can improve our ability to operate the computer.
But we should not be given to the Internet，or we'll get our life and study destroyed. Besides，we should keep off the harmful websites. Anyhow，this doesn't prevent the Internet becoming our friend. We can't throw away the apple because of the core，can we?
第二篇： 网购利弊
随着互联网的`发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了;相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如淘宝网，京东商城等;但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。
参考范文：
We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of internet shopping these days. Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping on the internet. The shops on Internet, for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.
However, some students disagreed with them. We can't see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.
第三篇： 电子图书
据报道，从2011年开始韩国除了向所有小学和初高中学生发放纸质的语文、英语、数学教科书之外，同时还将发放光盘形式的电子教科书。这表明，在韩国，电子图书即将走进寻常百姓家。某英文论坛发起了一次主题为“E-Books, Good or Bad?”的讨论，请你写一篇80词左右的短文，表达你对这件事情的看法。
参考范文：
E-Books Are Good
It’s reported that school students in Korea will use e-books from 2011. What good news this is! E-books have many advantages.
Most importantly, they are good for the environment, since they can save lots of paper and trees. Besides, they are very convenient. To get a paper book, one has to spend a lot of time searching for it in a bookshop. But we can find e-books very quickly on the computer.
In short, e-books can help us enjoy our life more.
1.为了交流学*经验，提高学*效率，《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动，请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to be a good learner?
As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning.
We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. It’s good to study in groups and help each other. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help. As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy.
I think all these above will be helpful to us.
2.亲爱的同学，你的初中学*生活马上就要结束了，请你以“My English Study”为题，谈一下三年以来学*英语的.心得体会。
要求：1.要点包括你在英语学*中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学*感悟;2.词数80左右。
【优秀满分范文】
My English Study
How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon. Looking back, I have many memories of my English study.
When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English. I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases. For a time I wanted to give it up. Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible. Step by step I made great progress in English.
In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well.
3.父亲节马上就要到了，但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展，并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右，开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。
提示：1.如果有足够的零花钱，可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西，如领带等：
2.还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。
【优秀满分范文】
Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father. Different people like different kinds of gifts.
If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie. I think your father will like it. But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea. When your father comes back from work, he can drink it.
No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day. Don’t you think so?
4.请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
提示：1.春节是中国最重要的节日;
2.人们大多回家过年，家庭成员团聚;
3.家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);
4.孩子们喜欢春节。
【优秀满分范文】
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival comes in wenter. It is the most important traditional festival in China.
People usually go home to spend the festival with their family. They have a big family get-together. The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival. They also visit their friends and relatives.
Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play.
5.假设Linda是你的好朋友，你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来，你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示，简要介绍Linda的变化。
提示：1.外貌：以前个子矮，短发;现在个子高多了，长发。
2.爱好：以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。
3.性格：以前外向;现在有些内向。
要求：1.不要逐字翻译，适当发挥;
2.层次清晰，语言流畅;
3.80词左右。
【优秀满分范文】
Linda is my best friend. She has changed o lot in the past two years.
She used to be short and have short hair. However, now she is much taller than before. She has long hair. She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends. But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now. She used to be outgoing. Now she is a little quite.
I think people sure change as time goes by. Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time.
6.背景设定：最*，康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件，想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏，请根据以下提示，给Miachael回一封电子邮件。
过去
生活条件差，道路狭窄，车辆少，住不好，吃不饱，联系不便......
现在
生活条件优越，道路宽，车辆多，住得舒适，手机普及......
要求：1.围绕以上内容进行合理表述;
2.所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;
3.词数80词左右，开头语以给出(不计入词数)。
参考词汇：living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯)，telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Michael,
You want to know sthe changes about my hometown. You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago.
In the past, the living conditions were very poor. There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow. Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house. Most families couldn’t get enough food. The communications were simple and slow. People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram.
Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years. The living conditions are much better and more comfortable. The roads are wide. Some people have their own cars. Most of the people have lived in big new houses. Quite a few adults have mobile phones. Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better.
Sincerely
Kang Min
7.随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。
优点
1. 足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累。
2. 价格通常比较便宜。
3. 可供选择的范围广，品种多。
缺点
1. 只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。
2. 容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。
注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面;
2.80词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：网购 shopping online; 避免做某事 avoid doing sth; 商品 goods; 导致 cause
【优秀满分范文】
With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group.
Shopping online has many advantages. Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.
Every coin has two sides. Its disadvantages are obvious, too. On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internert. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That’s a waste of money.
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All in all, I love shopping online.
8.假如你是李华，今年上初三了，现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数：60-80。
【优秀满分范文】
I am Li Hua. I am in Grade Nine this year. My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks.
I used to get up at seven in the morning. But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning. I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening. But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening. I used to play tennis in my free time. But now I have to spend all my free time studying.
I really miss my old days.
9.某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点，写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。
要点：1.父母规矩太多，过于强调学*成绩，不理解自己等问题;
2.你对这些问题的看法;
3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。
【优秀满分范文】
How to keep a good relationship with parents
In my opinion, I have too many rules at home. My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night. They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either. And they pay too much attention to my exam results. I think my parents don’t quite understand me.
However, I try my best to understand them. Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much presure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future.
In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them. I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles. I also help them do some housework.
10.今天是母亲节。假定你是李华，请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件，谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下：
1. 表述你与母亲间的情感;
2. 为母亲制作一张卡片;
3. 帮助母亲做点事;
4. 陪母亲散步等。
注意：1.词数80左右;
2.请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear John,
It’s Mother’s Day today. It’s a special day, isn’t it?
I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day. My mother and I are good friends. Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me.
Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it. Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening. Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much. I’m sure she’ll be very happy.
What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
When we go to school, we are taught that life is not always going well, we will meet all kinds of difficulties. Everyone hears the words, but when they meet difficulties, it is hard for them to be OK with it, they feel the life is hopeless, just as hearing is easy, while taking action is another thing.
当我们上学的时候，我们就被教育生活并不总是一帆风顺，我们会遇见各种各样的困难。每个人都听过这些话，但是当遇到困难时，对于他们来说是很难接受的，觉得生活无望，就如说起来是一回事，做起来是另一回事。
Once a famous business person said that the one who faced the failure and stood up, he or she will be successful. I absolutely believe it, we are in front of so many accidents, we need to face the setback and learn from it, every setback is a test for us, only the one who passes the test can succeed.
曾经一位出名的生意人说，谁面对困难，振作起来，他或她就能成功。我深信此话，我们面对很多的意外，需要面对挫折，从中学会东西，每一次的挫折就是一次考验，只有通过考验的人能成功。
Such as when we feel it hard to study, then give up, how can we make progress. Life teaches us lesson every minute, the adverse situation is a good chance to upgrade ourselves.
比如我们感到学*困难时，就放弃，怎么能进步呢。生活时时刻刻都在教会我们东西，困境是升级自身的好机会。
题目：请以“Everyone Needs Help”为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。
Everyone Needs Help
1 Did you get any help from others?
2 Did you give any help to people when they needed?
3 Tell your story
参考作文
In our daily life, we are dealing with different kinds of people, no matter at home, in school, or at some other places. Everyone needs help, I think. And only who are willing to help others will also be helped.
在我们的日常生活中我们会遇到各种各样的人，无论是在家里、学校，还是在其他地方，我觉得我们都需要帮助。并且只有那些愿意帮助他人的人会获得别人的帮助。
One day I saw a little girl in the street carrying a heavy schoolbag on her back. She was walking happily.
一天，我在街上看到一个背着沉重书包的小女孩，她正开心地走着。
Then suddenly an old man fell down while he was crossing a street. She ran towards him at once, but she was too short to help him to stand. I helped her and we together brought the old man to safety. He thanked us over and over. I think the little girl was, though very young, a very warm-hearted person.
突然，一位老人在穿过街道时摔倒了。她迅速地奔向老人，但是她太矮了，没法把老人扶起来。我过去帮助她把老人扶到安全地带。老人一再感谢我们。我觉得这个小女孩虽然年轻，但是一个很热心肠的
Money Doesn't Equal Success
Many people believe that a large income equal success. I believe,however, success is more than how much money you make.Measures of success also include fame, respect, and knowledge.
许多人认为有大量的收入等于成功。 然而,我相信,成功不仅仅是指你有多少钱。 成功还包括名誉、尊重和知识。
Becoming famous is one way to show one is success.So many scientists and researchers have made great contribution to our nation and they don't possess too much wealth. But they are awarded with fame and great honors and thus become nationwide well-known. No one could say they are not successful.I also believe that being respected by coworkers indicates success. Without that respect, money mean little.We just call people with big money and no respect "they are rich" and nothing more,while for those surrounded by respect, we'd like to say "This guy is really marvelous.He made it in his life."
成名是显示成功的一种方式。许多科学家和研究人员为我们的`国家作出了重大的贡献,虽然他们没有太多的财富，但是他们获得名望和伟大的荣誉,成为全国闻名的人物。 没有人能说他们不是成功的。 我也相信要尊敬同事意味成功。 没有尊重,金钱是小。 我们就叫人有资金仅仅说“他们是富人”而已,而对于那些被尊重包围的人说, “这家伙真的是了不起的，他的生活是成功的。”
In conclusion,we don't memorize people sim*** because they were rich. Overall,we remember people who were influential in politics,or contributed to science or art or religion.If history is the ultimate judge of success, then money surely isn't everything.
总之,我们不要仅仅因为别人有钱才记住他。 总的来说,我们记住人在政治上有影响力的人,或者记住那些对科学或艺术或宗教有贡献的人。如果历史是成功的最终的裁判，那么钱当然不是万能的。
——中考英语写作满分3篇
【写作要求】
现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。
内容包括：
1.地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。
2.你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。
3.号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。
作文要求：
1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的'真实姓名。
2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Low--carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today.
【优秀满分范文】
My Low-carbon Life
The environmental pollution is worse and worse today. Many trees are cut down, and water and air are polluted. As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution.
Firstly, I often walk to school. It can reduce air pollution. Secondly, I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom. Thirdly, I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water.
I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful.
【写作要求】
“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为一名绿色使者吗？请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边。请以“How to Be a Greener Person” 为题，写一篇短文。
注意：
1.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；
2.短文词数90 左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：draw, both sides of paper, plastics, water tap, collect, waste, can, sort
How to Be a Greener Person?
It’s our duty to protect our environment around us.
【优秀满分范文】
How to be a greener person
It’s our duty to protect the inviyonment around us.
When we go to school, we should ride a bike or take a bus. When we go out for activities, we shouldn’t step on the grass. We can’t draw everywhere. When we go shopping, we’d better use a cloth bag. At home we can save water and electricity. When we leave a room, we should turn off the ligts. At school we can collect wast paper and recycle things, such as bottles, cans and plastic bags. We shoudn’t listen to pop music or spit in pulic.
Let’s do something to protect our environment.
【写作要求】
你喜欢阅读吗？请你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。
内容包括：
1. 你的阅读*惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等）。
2. 阅读带给你什么益处（至少两点）。
3. 号召大家都读书。
作文要求：
1. 不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯，词数80词左右。
【优秀满分范文】
Reading---A good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us to think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are story books because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books on line for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with our family or my classmates. Since reading can benefits us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!
——中考英语写作 (菁华5篇)
在逆境中成长
When we go to school, we are taught that life is not always going well, we will meet all kinds of difficulties. Everyone hears the words, but when they meet difficulties, it is hard for them to be OK with it, they feel the life is hopeless, just as hearing is easy, while taking action is another thing.
当我们上学的时候，我们就被教育生活并不总是一帆风顺，我们会遇见各种各样的困难。每个人都听过这些话，但是当遇到困难时，对于他们来说是很难接受的，觉得生活无望，就如说起来是一回事，做起来是另一回事。
Once a famous business person said that the one who faced the failure and stood up, he or she will be successful. I absolutely believe it, we are in front of so many accidents, we need to face the setback and learn from it, every setback is a test for us, only the one who passes the test can succeed.
曾经一位出名的生意人说，谁面对困难，振作起来，他或她就能成功。我深信此话，我们面对很多的意外，需要面对挫折，从中学会东西，每一次的`挫折就是一次考验，只有通过考验的人能成功。
Such as when we feel it hard to study, then give up, how can we make progress. Life teaches us lesson every minute, the adverse situation is a good chance to upgrade ourselves.
比如我们感到学*困难时，就放弃，怎么能进步呢。生活时时刻刻都在教会我们东西，困境是升级自身的好机会。
题目：请以“Changes in Shanghai"为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。
Changes in Shanghai
1 300年前的上海
2 上海的'今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)
3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)
参考作文
Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.
300年前，上海只是个小镇，只有几千人居住在这里，其中很多人是渔民和农民。
Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.
今天，上海已变成一座国际大都市，并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。
Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.
上海已经取得了2010年世博会的举办权，我相信上海的环境会越来越好，并且越来越美丽。
点评：虽然2010年世博会已经结束，但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈，除了上海，像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。
题目：请根据以下提示写一篇文章，不少于60单词。
Growing Pains and Gains
1 一个戴深度*视眼镜的女孩面对一大堆的作业。
2 一个小女孩在弹钢琴，母亲站在旁边拿着尺。
3 小女孩和许多人在开生日晚会，脸上露出微笑。
4 小女孩孜孜不倦地在看书。
参考作文
I think I have a happy life, though I cannot do the things I like. For example, I like reading different books in my spare time, especially some detective stories. But my mum always asks me to practise playing the piano one hour every day. That's boring.
我觉得自己生活得很快乐，虽然我不能做自己喜欢的事情。比如说我喜欢在课外阅读不同的书籍，尤其是侦探类故事。但我妈妈总是让我每天练*一小时钢琴。这很无趣。
I like having parties with my friends during the holidays. But I have to do lots of homeworks. Teachers always give us more homework when we have holidays. That's my growing pains and gains.
我喜欢在节假日和朋友聚会，但我总是有做不完的作业。我们老师总是在节假日来临的时候布置很多作业。这是我成长中的代价和收获。
题目：请根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的文章。
An Accident
1 四个孩子刚出校门回家
2 一卡车经过，车速较快，掉下几只西瓜
3 一骑车人倒下，身边有血
4 孩子们有的打110，有的打120，有的保护现场
5 他们向警察陈述经过，救护车把伤者送医院
参考作文
Last Thursday afternoon, four students were on their way back home.
上周四下午，四个学生正在他们放学回家的路上。
Suddenly they saw a truck coming round the corner at a high speed and some watermelons fell off. At the same time, a middle-aged man on a bicycle fell to the ground. Blood came from his body.
突然，他们看到一辆卡车从拐角处快速地开过来，几个西瓜从上面掉下来。同时，一个骑车的中年男子摔倒在地，身上流血。
One of them called the policeman, one dailed 120. And the others were taking care of the cyclist. Soon the police came and they reported what they had seen and an ambulance took the cyclist to the hospital soon.
他们当中其中一人拨打电话报警，另外一人打120，剩下的两人则照顾伤者。不一会儿，警察来了，他们向警察报告了事情的经过，然后救护车把伤者送进了医院。
题目：请根据以下提示写一篇文章，不少于60单词。
Growing Pains and Gains
1 一个戴深度*视眼镜的女孩面对一大堆的作业。
2 一个小女孩在弹钢琴，母亲站在旁边拿着尺。
3 小女孩和许多人在开生日晚会，脸上露出微笑。
4 小女孩孜孜不倦地在看书。
参考作文
I think I have a happy life, though I cannot do the things I like. For example, I like reading different books in my spare time, especially some detective stories. But my mum always asks me to practise playing the piano one hour every day. That's boring.
我觉得自己生活得很快乐，虽然我不能做自己喜欢的事情。比如说我喜欢在课外阅读不同的书籍，尤其是侦探类故事。但我妈妈总是让我每天练*一小时钢琴。这很无趣。
I like having parties with my friends during the holidays. But I have to do lots of homeworks. Teachers always give us more homework when we have holidays. That's my growing pains and gains.
我喜欢在节假日和朋友聚会，但我总是有做不完的`作业。我们老师总是在节假日来临的时候布置很多作业。这是我成长中的代价和收获。
——中考英语写作 (菁华5篇)
在逆境中成长
When we go to school, we are taught that life is not always going well, we will meet all kinds of difficulties. Everyone hears the words, but when they meet difficulties, it is hard for them to be OK with it, they feel the life is hopeless, just as hearing is easy, while taking action is another thing.
当我们上学的时候，我们就被教育生活并不总是一帆风顺，我们会遇见各种各样的困难。每个人都听过这些话，但是当遇到困难时，对于他们来说是很难接受的，觉得生活无望，就如说起来是一回事，做起来是另一回事。
Once a famous business person said that the one who faced the failure and stood up, he or she will be successful. I absolutely believe it, we are in front of so many accidents, we need to face the setback and learn from it, every setback is a test for us, only the one who passes the test can succeed.
曾经一位出名的生意人说，谁面对困难，振作起来，他或她就能成功。我深信此话，我们面对很多的意外，需要面对挫折，从中学会东西，每一次的`挫折就是一次考验，只有通过考验的人能成功。
Such as when we feel it hard to study, then give up, how can we make progress. Life teaches us lesson every minute, the adverse situation is a good chance to upgrade ourselves.
比如我们感到学*困难时，就放弃，怎么能进步呢。生活时时刻刻都在教会我们东西，困境是升级自身的好机会。
题目：请以“Changes in Shanghai"为题，写一篇不少于60单词的作文。
Changes in Shanghai
1 300年前的上海
2 上海的'今天(东方明珠、金茂大厦)
3 上海的明天(2010年的世博会)
参考作文
Shanghai was a small town three hundred years ago. There were only a few thousand people living here. Many of them were fishermen and farmers.
300年前，上海只是个小镇，只有几千人居住在这里，其中很多人是渔民和农民。
Today, Shanghai is becoming an international city. Many tall building have been built. Some bridges have been put up over the Huangpu River. More and more foreigners come to Shanghai for a visit every day.
今天，上海已变成一座国际大都市，并建成了很多高楼大厦。黄浦江上架起了很多桥梁。每天都有越来越多的外国人前来旅游。
Shanghai has already won the bid for holding the World Expo 2010. I think the environment will be better and better and the city will be more and more beautiful.
上海已经取得了2010年世博会的举办权，我相信上海的环境会越来越好，并且越来越美丽。
点评：虽然2010年世博会已经结束，但关于城市发展的话题依然热烈，除了上海，像广州、北京、深圳等大城市也有可能是考试的热点。
题目：请根据以下提示写一篇文章，不少于60单词。
Growing Pains and Gains
1 一个戴深度*视眼镜的女孩面对一大堆的作业。
2 一个小女孩在弹钢琴，母亲站在旁边拿着尺。
3 小女孩和许多人在开生日晚会，脸上露出微笑。
4 小女孩孜孜不倦地在看书。
参考作文
I think I have a happy life, though I cannot do the things I like. For example, I like reading different books in my spare time, especially some detective stories. But my mum always asks me to practise playing the piano one hour every day. That's boring.
我觉得自己生活得很快乐，虽然我不能做自己喜欢的事情。比如说我喜欢在课外阅读不同的书籍，尤其是侦探类故事。但我妈妈总是让我每天练*一小时钢琴。这很无趣。
I like having parties with my friends during the holidays. But I have to do lots of homeworks. Teachers always give us more homework when we have holidays. That's my growing pains and gains.
我喜欢在节假日和朋友聚会，但我总是有做不完的作业。我们老师总是在节假日来临的时候布置很多作业。这是我成长中的代价和收获。
题目：请根据以下提示写一篇不少于60单词的文章。
An Accident
1 四个孩子刚出校门回家
2 一卡车经过，车速较快，掉下几只西瓜
3 一骑车人倒下，身边有血
4 孩子们有的打110，有的打120，有的保护现场
5 他们向警察陈述经过，救护车把伤者送医院
参考作文
Last Thursday afternoon, four students were on their way back home.
上周四下午，四个学生正在他们放学回家的路上。
Suddenly they saw a truck coming round the corner at a high speed and some watermelons fell off. At the same time, a middle-aged man on a bicycle fell to the ground. Blood came from his body.
突然，他们看到一辆卡车从拐角处快速地开过来，几个西瓜从上面掉下来。同时，一个骑车的中年男子摔倒在地，身上流血。
One of them called the policeman, one dailed 120. And the others were taking care of the cyclist. Soon the police came and they reported what they had seen and an ambulance took the cyclist to the hospital soon.
他们当中其中一人拨打电话报警，另外一人打120，剩下的两人则照顾伤者。不一会儿，警察来了，他们向警察报告了事情的经过，然后救护车把伤者送进了医院。
题目：请根据以下提示写一篇文章，不少于60单词。
Growing Pains and Gains
1 一个戴深度*视眼镜的女孩面对一大堆的作业。
2 一个小女孩在弹钢琴，母亲站在旁边拿着尺。
3 小女孩和许多人在开生日晚会，脸上露出微笑。
4 小女孩孜孜不倦地在看书。
参考作文
I think I have a happy life, though I cannot do the things I like. For example, I like reading different books in my spare time, especially some detective stories. But my mum always asks me to practise playing the piano one hour every day. That's boring.
我觉得自己生活得很快乐，虽然我不能做自己喜欢的事情。比如说我喜欢在课外阅读不同的书籍，尤其是侦探类故事。但我妈妈总是让我每天练*一小时钢琴。这很无趣。
I like having parties with my friends during the holidays. But I have to do lots of homeworks. Teachers always give us more homework when we have holidays. That's my growing pains and gains.
我喜欢在节假日和朋友聚会，但我总是有做不完的`作业。我们老师总是在节假日来临的时候布置很多作业。这是我成长中的代价和收获。
——中考英语作文写作指导「荐读」3篇
学生在初中学*阶段，对标点符号的用法极不重视，因此，考试中明显的标点错误屡有发生，在一定程度上影响学生的成绩。另外，大小写错误也常有发生。有的甚至一篇文章从头到尾没有一个大写字母，再加上标点不正确，让人看了不知所云，以致直接影响考试成绩。
时态是学*英语语言的难点。考生务必系统地学*初中出现的各种时态，做到灵活运用。在同一篇作文当中，时态要保持一致。
一些学生因缺乏写作技巧，往往在写英语作文时，根据中文意思堆积英文单词，编造出许多中式英语，结果错误百出，意思表达不清楚，直接影响考试成绩。
——中考英语写作技巧3篇
对大多数学*英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。
谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?
首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的.词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。
其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学*，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。
最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在*如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。
要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的*惯。
比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，***数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。
最后，许多同学在写作文时，*惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
一、巧用过渡句
所谓过渡词，就是表示先后顺序的first，second，…。at last，表示因果关系的as a result，dueto，because of…，表示分述关系的what‘s more，furthermore，besides，inaddition等等。为什么要使用这样的词汇?原因有二：其一，我们每个人写的文章虽然内容几乎千篇一律，但是每个人的写作风格和逻辑思路不尽相同。怎样在短时间内让阅卷老师进入自己的逻辑体系，快速而精准的判断你的文章呢?过渡词就是一个很好的“向导”，它能够引导阅卷人的思路，让其短时间内对你的文章做出公允的评价;其二，我们列好提纲准备下笔的时候，总有一个先后顺序，总有一个逻辑结构，如何使自己的文章结构清晰，要点明确，中心突出，答案还是过渡词，使用了过渡词，可以规范自己的逻辑思路，让我们在有压力的写作之下能够做到临危不乱，有条不紊，层次清晰，逻辑通畅。
二、句式多变
如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“ithink”简单句，那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味，乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以，我们在写句子的时候，要尽可能的变换句式和结构，让文章富于变化，错落有致。具体地说：中考作文中，我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句，主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如，20xx年中考北京卷作文题，以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. then he walked for seven hoursto safety."这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句：saving two of his classmates，lin haowalked for seven hours to safety.
如果再加上语态的变换，还可以改写成：being saved from the earthquake，two of linhao‘s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with lin hao.这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话，一定会增加阅卷人的青睐，从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。
三、善用名人名言
在中考作文中，很少有同学能主动写出名人名言为自己的文章画龙点睛。名人名言是精炼浓缩的，富有哲理和智慧的句子，经过数百年人们口耳相传到了今天，足以说明它的凝练和它的魅力。如果在文章中能成功使用合适的名人名言，那将会是怎样一番景象，其实不难想象。比如你在一篇讨论中学生该不该使用手机的文章中用了”just as the saying goes，‘every coin has two sides.‘“，那效果就相当于一个美国人在汉语水*考试作文里写出了”*人有句古话叫‘福兮祸之所倚，祸兮福之所伏‘“一样的震撼!因此，学会使用名人名言，将会使我们的文章大放异彩。当然了，使用名人名言的前提是我们得记得住一定数量的名言。很多同学在写作的时候没有办法写出漂亮的名言来衬托，这一是因为自己*时积累不够，写不出合适的名人名言，第二是对名人名言没有形成条件反射，联想不到。大家在接下来的文章中不妨可以尝试一下，看看效果如何。
——中考英语作文写作指导 (菁华5篇)
有些学生虽然在词汇运用书面表达方面能够达到基本要求，但由于句子之间没有添加适当的衔接成分，使句子之间和文段之间缺乏必要的过渡和连贯，影响了信息的传递和表达效果。
正确的指导和规范训练对培养学生良好的学*和写作*惯举足轻重
1. Pre-writing：教师要指导学生对题目所提供的信息要认真分析整理，使之更加条理化，为开始动笔做好前期准备。还要让学生搞清楚所提供的题目是要求写短文、日记还是便条等，以根据不同的题材、体裁，写出不同格式、风格各异的文章。在这个阶段教师要充分估计到学生可能产生的差错和出现的问题，尽量将其消灭在萌芽状态。
2. While-writing: 在这一阶段学生所犯的错误有两个①逐句逐句汉译英②受汉语的干扰，写出汉语式的英语句子，教师应指导学生避免犯这两个错误。
3. Post-writing：在这一过程中教师应指导学生全面检查全文，看看是否存在下列的问题：格式、拼写、标点、扣题，不规范英文、时态、语态、主谓一致、大小写等用法错误或使用不当。
切忌只看表格中或所列1、2、3中的信息点。一定把题读全，找齐信息点，建议用铅笔标出，写完后再涂掉。
根据题目，可适当增加合理内容。
特别注意文章要有开头和结尾。
切忌与汉语提示的一一对应，使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。
首先考虑句子结构(如主谓宾，主系表等)。
同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写，最好使用课本上学过的短语和句式。
考虑文章的篇章结构，使用适当的连接短语，使文章结构紧凑。
常用连接词：
1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second…
And then，Finally，In the end，At last
2.表并列补充关系的：What ismore，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，Inaddition
3.表转折对比关系的：However，On the contrary，but，Although+clause( 从句)，In spite of+n/doing，On the one hand…，On the other hand…，Some…，while others…
4.表因果关系的`：Because，As，So，Thus，Therefore，As a result
5.表换一种方式表达：In other words
6.表进行举例说明：For example，句子;For instance，句子;such as+n/doing
7.表陈述事实：In fact
8.表达自己观点：As far as I know，In my opinion
9.表总结：In short，In a word，In conclusion，In summary
文中正确使用两三个好的句型，如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。
宾语从句举例：I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous。
状语从句举例：If everyone does something for the environment， ourhometown will become clean and beautiful。
动名词做主语举例：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes。It’s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。
常用状语从句句型：
1)时间when，not…until，as soon as
2)目的so that+clause;to do( 为了)
3)结果so…that+clause，too…to do(太……以至于……)
4)条件if，unless(除非)，as long as(只要)
5)让步though，although，even though，even if
no matter what/when/where/who/which/how
6)比较as…as…，not so…as…，than
——中考英语写作常考话题 (菁华5篇)
理想是中学生们经常谈论的.话题，说它一直是热点话题并不为过。
预测题目
为了解同学们的理想，我们在学校的l00名学生中进行了一次调查采访。采访主要是围绕“What do you want to be when you grow up?”和“Why?”这两个问题进行的，请你根据以下调查数据写—份以“the dream jobs”为主题的报告。并谈谈你自己的理想与原因。词数80个左右。(报告开头语已给出，不计人作文总词数。)The Dream Jobs
In order to help us form good ideals (理想)， we made a survey among 100 students in our school。 Here are the results。______________________________________________________
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参考范文
The Dream Jobs
In order to know about the students‘ ideals， we made a survey among 100 students in our school last week。 Here are the results。
Most of the students want to be businessmen， because they want to be rich and buy what they need in the future。 More students are dreaming of being doctors， because they are proud of saving the sick people 。 And being good teachers is some students’ dream。 They think it’s a pleasure to make students learn more from them。
Different students have different ideals。 As for me， I want to be a policeman， and make our society much safer。
*是每个时代都会倡导的主题。一个充满爱心的人无论走到哪里，都会像火光一样，温暖和照亮他/她周围的世界!
预测题目
假设你是李明，你们学校正在举办主题为“付出既是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己*时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。
要求：1。 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。
2。 80—100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Giving is Receiving
I’m a student from Green Middle School。 My name is Li Ming。____________________________________________________
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参考范文
Giving is Receiving
I’m a student from Green Middle School。 My name is Li Ming。 I like helping others because I think it makes me very happy。
I often help my classmates with their schoolwork。 Sometimes I help clean up city parks。 I go to the old people’s home and do some cleaning for them once a month。 So I’m pretty popular there。 I often visit the children’s hospital to cheer the sick kids up。 I read stories and sing songs for them。 I am good with children。 I also give money to charities to help people in trouble。
I think giving is receiving。 Helping others is helping ourselves。 Do you agree with me?
健康的身体是我们成就一切事物的根本，没有健康，什么都无从谈起。
预测题目
健康的生活*惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活*惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示，写一篇短文，首句已给出。
信息提示：健康饮食;早睡早起，不熬夜;参加运动，强身健体。
要求：根据信息提示，把握要点，适当发挥，不逐字翻译。字数在80词左右。
I think healthy habits are very important for us。
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参考范文
I think healthy habits are very important for us。
All of us want to be healthy。 First， we should get enough sleep during the night。 We can go to bed early and get up early。 Staying up late is bad for our health.Second， we must have the right kinds of food。 We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat。 We should drink a lot of water。 We should have healthy eating habits。 Third， we should do more exercise to build up our bodies.Finally， we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day。 If we don’t feel well， we should go to see the doctor at once。
If we can do all above， we can live a healthy life。
国家开放二孩政策后，很多同学都面临着即将做哥哥或姐姐的情况。
预测题目
假如你是学生李华，在家是独生子女，国家开放二孩政策后，你的父母想再生一个孩子，征求你的意见。恰好你的美国笔友Peter来信询问我国的二孩政策。你给他回一封信，内容要点如下：
1。 简单解释国家二孩政策;
2。 得知父母打算生二胎后你的想法;
3。 征求Peter的看法。
注意：
1。 词数100左右;
2。 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的;
3。 开头语已为你写好，不计入字数。
Dear Peter，
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy inChina。__________________________
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Yours
Li Hua
参考范文
Dear Peter，
I have received your letter and I’m glad to explain to you the two-child policy inChina。
The Chinese government recently plans to change the one-child policy into two-child policy， meaning that every family in China is allowed to have two children。 Now my parents have made a decision to give birth to a second child， which worries me a great deal。 Though it is good to have a brother or sister to grow up with， I have to share everything with him or her。 Most importantly， what if the love from my parents is totally switched to the new child? As you have a younger sister， did you have similar problems? What’s your opinion about this?
I am looking forward to your early re*。
Yours
Li Hua
共享单车无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了极大的便利。今天，小简老师选择的2017中考英语写作预测话题是：共享单车。
预测题目
假定你是红星中学初三学生李华。你的美国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对*新*出现的一种共享单车“mobike”很感兴趣，并请你做个简要介绍。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：
1。 这种单车的使用方法(如：APP查看车辆、扫码开锁等);
2。 这种单车的优势;
3。 你对这种单车的看法。
注意：1。 词数不少于80;
2。 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示词：智能手机 smartphone， 二维码 the QR code
参考范文
Dear Jim，
I’m writing to tell you more about the new form of sharing bike--mobike mentioned in your latest letter。
It’s very convenient to use if you have a smartphone。 What you do is to find a nearest mobike through the APP， scan the QR code on the bike， and enjoy your trip。
——中考英语作文写作技巧通用5篇
英语作文是最考察同学们英语功底的一类题型，也是在英语考试中所占分值很大的一类题型。所以在写英语作文的时候要掌握中考英语作文写作技巧才能够在中考的时候写出一篇优秀的英语作文。
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQis extremely strong。观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten mealseveryday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day!详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑：这里的`逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，what'smore，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好*惯。
英语作文依靠的是同学们的语感和*时的积累，但是在面临中考的紧要关头，要想在短时间内提高英语写作水*不是一件容易的事情，这就需要同学们掌握中考英语作文写作技巧。
一、给写作留有充分的时间
在小升初英语题中，“书面表达”往往是最后一项，有的学生把最后几分钟用在写作上，匆匆了事，这是很不明智的。学生用在写作上的时间应不少于10分钟，力争不丢分，少丢分。
二、认真审题，先打草稿
写之前一定要认真阅读写作要求，切忌见题就写。小升初英语作文主要有两种类型：“提示作文”和“看图作文”。 “提示作文”一般已经给出要点，而“看图作文”则需根据图画及提示在很短的时间内将要点列出。把要点列出后，在草稿纸上写提纲，打草稿，就可以看出大概有多少字。在正式往试卷上写之前，根据题目要求适当增减内容，保持卷面整洁。
三、写好简单句，慎用长句
考生要根据所列要点，运用相应的提示词及正确的动词形式在稿纸上写出简单句。考生应熟悉简单句的五种基本句型，尽量使用简单句。在简单句的基础上，根据各句之间的关系适当加上一些连词，使得整文章结构紧凑，行文流畅。套用句型，能显示考生的英语基础扎实，提高作文档次。慎用长句是因为其成分多，结构复杂，所以出错的机会也多。考生在没有十足的把握时最好少用或不用长句，以免给自己的作文带来不必要的损失。
四、熟悉各种时态，灵活运用
时态是学*英语语言的难点。考生务必系统地学*初中出现的各种时态，做到灵活运用。在同一作文当中，时态要保持一致。
五、切忌中式英语，避免生搬硬套
一些学生因缺乏写作技巧，往往在写英语作文时，根据中文意思堆积英文单词，编造出许多中式英语，结果错误百出，意思表达不清楚，直接影响考试成绩。
六、认真检查和修改，减少错误
做完写作题后要从头至尾读一遍，检查一下文章是否通顺，有无逻辑错误，标点符号、单词拼写和时态运用是否正确，避免笔误。
以下是有关写作的注意事项以及写作技巧。
在写作文时，作文本身的要点已经很明确，重点也很突出，只要把所学材科加以发挥，注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会因为审题不清而偏离主题。
1.为了保证文章层次分明，务理清楚，要把时间固定下来，如：记叙一件事要用过去时;写经常发生的事或对人的描写，要用一般现在时，整个文章中的人称要一致，首尾呼应，不要随意改动，以免造成误解。细心审题细读题目中每一项提示，明确文章的中心思想，弄清题意，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点，做到心中有数，避免随心所欲，文不对题。
2.不要为了追求“一鸣惊人”而去找一些生冷的词汇，对这些一知半解的词同学们不会用，不知道如何搭配，结果可能适得其反，使文章星的生硬、不协调，甚至错误百出，所以要使用有把握的词，避免不必要的失分。比如说发生了一起意外事件，我们通常用“havean accident”来表示，不要错误的使用“have an incident”。组织句子时用自己最熟悉的短语或句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来，多用简单句，用有把握的复合句。要扬长避短，避难就易。若遇到表达障碍，可换一种说法，将一句变成两、三句，只求达意。
3.注意不同语言的表达*惯，也是写好英语作文的重要环节，如“我的理想是做一名歌手”，很多同学写成“Mywish is to do/make a singer，”“to do”表示“做”或者“干”，“to make”表示“制作”，而“做一名歌手”刚表示“成为一名歌手”应该用“be/become a singer”，又如“看书、看报”应用“read a book/newspa-per”，而不是“see a book/newspaper”。因此，*时应该注意不同语言的表达*惯，切忌望文生义或一味生搬硬套。
4.有些同学因怕出错而只写短句或简单句，写出的文章空洞乏味。要使文章有血有肉就把*时学的知识用进去，如：定语从句、宾语从句、非谓语动词和比较级等句型，关键时用上一、二个，就能使文章不同凡响，更有文采，特别是对关联调的使用，如“so that”、“not....but”、“not only....but also”等，会使你的文章逻辑结构紧密、层次解明、条理清楚，更能显示出你的英文功底，可运当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联调语，使文章层次分明，过渡自然。如：
①as a result....(导致结果)[as a result做插入语]
②My suggestion to deal with/solve theproblem are as follows.In the first place，....sec-ondly，....Finally.[常见句型]
③More and more people are realizing theimportance of....[进行时态，more and more比many好]
④It is important/necessary for sb.to do sth.[It is....for....to do....句型]
⑤....as soon as possible[常见句型]
⑥sth.be of the most importance[be of n.结构，比sth.be much important好]
⑦Just as the popular saying goes，“Everycoin has two sides”.From one side....from theother Side....正如一个谚语所说的，“每个硬币都有两面(事物都是一分为二的)”。“从一方面看……从另一方面来看……”但要做到这些并非一日之功，要靠*时的不断训练和积累。
5.最简单的增分点就是认真的书写。工整漂亮的书写会给评卷老师留下美好的第一印象，在扣分时自然会“手下留情”，写作上有1分的书写分。只要*时多下点功夫，得到达一分并不难。
6.文章覃成后，默读1～2遍，检查修改，尤其要注意人称、大小写、拼写、*惯用语、格式有无错误，要点有无遗漏，文句有无语病，词数是否恰当，行文是否连贯。同时注意是否有两种时态。
现介绍几个应注意的地方。
1.好的开头和结尾。
好的开头与结尾往往给人队好的印象。一般开头不要写得太啰嗦，要找着恰当的切入点，快速入题，简洁明快。结尾同样不拖泥带水，最好还能适当评论，写出点睛之笔。
2.用好关联词。
在写作的过程中，以下关联调的应用非常关键。比如，表并列的and，be-sides，as well as，in addition to，not on-ly....but also，when;表递进的what’smore，what’s worse;表转折的but，while，on the other hand，however;表选择的ei-ther....or....筹。有了这词的连接，就会使文章变得语句通顺，层次清楚，有声有色，考生勿需用很多的复合句也能让评卷人感觉到你的水*不同一般。
3.用好标点符号、大小写，安排好段落。
4.书写清楚，整洁，规范。
例文：
HEALTH AND SPORTS
Good health is very important to ev-eryone.A healthy person can always beactive and enjoy life.Poor in health，aperson can not get much success thoughhe is well educated.
Sports help everyone to keephealthy.Physical exercises can improveour health.A person who takes exercisesspends more energy.The more energy he spends，the more blood he uses.New blood needs food to keep it pure.Sports can also make our minds sound.Whileplaying we take our minds off work orstudy.As a result，our minds are relaxed.
Since sports can result in goodhealth，we should join in sports for a whileevery day no matter how busy we are.
初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分;二等文：9-12分;三等文：5-8分;四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。
要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点
要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。
结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQ is extremely strong.观点明确，这一句足矣。
第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday!详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。
第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is!I hope to be him one day!
逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first，second，third，finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition，what's more，moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word，all in all(表示总结的)。转折：but，yet，however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。
语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。
亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful，good-looking，B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好*惯。
英语写作是中考中检测学生语言应用能力的最重要部分。提高中考写作水*，需要有效的训练。正确无误的造句能力和各种文体的写作技巧，两者缺一不可。
正确无误的造句能力
这得从初中一开始就抓起，首先可以从替换单词、扩词造句训练，做到有效积累，扩大视野，灵活运用。
如：如何修饰一个最简单、最常用的“说”?我们就可以写出许多：say some thing gladly(merrily excitedly sadly kindly worriedly loudly sweetl ytimidly bravely confidently)
还可说say some thing in a friendly way.替换了一个副词，生动地表达了说话时的不同心情。
扩词有：play football——play foot ball in the play ground——play football in the play ground with my friends——play football in the play ground with my friends after school.对其中的动词我们还可替换成playgames，play the piano…等，后面的状语都可以有相应的更换。
又如：a friend——my friend——my close friend——my close friend named Mary.以此类推，我们可以模仿着进行扩句训练。The students love life.——The studentsof Class One love enjoyable school life verymuch.为了避免句型的重复，我们还可以转换不同的句型，来表达同一内容。如：The dictionary is so big that it doesn’t fit in tomy pocket.——The dic ti on ary is too big to fit into my pocket.——The dictionary is not small enough to fit into my pocket.
这样训练写句的方法，可以帮助学生克服心里先想好中文，然后逐字翻译的不良*惯，从而造的句子符合英语表达的*惯。
在*时的学*中，我们可以试着用课文中所学的句型和词汇，设计一些中译英句子，虽然对初中学生有一定的难度，但长此以往可以有效地掌握正确的句子结构，巩固所学词汇，做到活学活用，为中考作文作好铺垫。
在《牛津》7B开始，我们针对所学的句型和学生日常学*生活的真实情景，设计了许多中译英，如：
1.尽管我的爷爷奶奶已80多岁了，他们还能每天早上坚持锻炼。(although…)
2.你与其他同学不同，你总是喜欢独自一人呆在家里。(be different from)
3.去天目山参观是一件很开心的事。(It’sfun…)
4.我有个建议，把我们旧的书报杂志送给班级阅览角，这样同学们就会有更多的书可以分享。(suggestion)
5.在暴风雨中，我们最好不放风筝，因为它可能让我们触电。(because,get a electric shock)
6.新的隧道将把上海和崇明岛连接起来。(linkup…with)
7.这位驾驶员从这次事故中吸取了教训。(learn a lesson)
8.我们赢了这场比赛，他们看上去很失望。(win，look)
9.你们校运会准备工作进展如何?(get on with…)
10.我们盼望着2008年的北京奥运会.(look forward to)有了扎实的组词、造句能力，要写好一篇中考作文，就如同裁缝做服装准备好了上等的面料，如果学生对中考中可能出现的各种文体的格式，一般行文规律能了解掌握，那么中考作文定能获得满意的成绩。
掌握各种写作技巧
掌握各种文体的写作技巧，我们可以分两步走：
考前准备
1.分析类型 纵观*年中考写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写景，日记，书信，通知，广告，便条等文体。题型基本是：命题作文，应用文写作，看图写话。
2.积累素材 *时注意日常生活观察，关注社会热点，关心周围的人和事。
3.及时记录 如果*时能有心及时写下所见所闻，或有写日记的*惯，写作水*会提高更快。
动笔过程
1.细心审题，细读题目中每一项提示，或观察每一幅画，弄清题意，明确中心，确定体裁。特别是对于我们看来非常熟悉的内容，更要仔细推敲，有自己独特的立意。
2.根据所给的提示，按照一定的规律，如事件的先后顺序，地点的更换等内在的联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图说话，注意文在图中，意在图外，抓住每一要点，使表达的内容有条理性。
3.理清篇章结构，构成短文的整体框架。
文章要素起——它是文章的主旨，或提出主题句，列出事情的要点
对主题开展叙述，讨论收——是对全文的总结和概括
4.有了框架，就可以收集积累的材料，用最恰当的短语、句型把你要表达的意思逐句表达出来，多用简单句和有把握的复合句。
5.为了使短文有浑然一体的感觉，优秀作文少不了的是恰当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等连词。
6.学生最容易忽视的是检查。
时态的前后呼应，人称与动词的变化，单词拼写，标点符号，规定字数等，所有这些都可以通过仔细检查，避免低级错误出现。
英语短文的提高，需要组词、造句语言基本能力的提高，多读文章，多加思考，就能在中考中写作取得理想的成绩。
1. 叙述的人称
英语的记叙文一般是以第一或第三人称的角度来叙述的。用第一称表示的是由叙述者亲眼所见、亲耳所闻的经历。它的优点在于能把故事的情节通过“我”来传达给读者，使人读后感到真实可信，如身临其境。如：
The other day, I was driving along the street. Suddenly, a car lost its control and ran directly towards me fast. I was so frightened that Iquickly turned to the left side. But it was too late. The car hit my bike and I fell off it.
用第三人称叙述，优点在于叙述者不受“我”活动范围以内的人和事物的限制，而是通过作者与读者之外的第三者，直接把故事中的情节展现在读者面前，文章的客观性很强。如：
Little Tom was going to school with an umbrella, for it was raining hard. On the way, he saw an old woman walking in the rain withnothing to cover. Tom went up to the old woman and wanted to share the umbrella with her, but he was too short. What could he do? Then hehad a good idea.
2. 动词的时态
在记叙文中，记和叙都离不开动词。所以动词出现率最高，且富于变化。记叙文中用得最多的是动词的过去的，这是英语记叙文区别于汉语记叙文的关键之处。英语写作的优美之处就在于这些动词时态的变化，正是这一点才使得所记、所叙有鲜活的动态感、鲜明的层次感和立体感。
3. 叙述的顺序
记叙一件事要有一定的顺序。无论是顺叙、倒叙、插叙还是补叙，都要让读者能弄清事情的来龙去脉。顺叙最容易操作，较容易给读者提供有关事情的空间和时间线索。但这种方法也容易使文章显得*铺直叙，读起来*淡乏味。倒叙、插叙、补叙等叙述方法能有效地提高文章的结构效果，让所叙之事跌宕起伏，使读者在阅读时思维产生较大的跳跃，从而为文章所吸引，深入其中。但这些方法如果使用不当，则容易弄巧成拙，使文章结构散乱，头绪不清，让读者不知所云。
4. 叙述的过渡
过渡在上下文中起着承上启下、融会贯通的作用。过渡往往用在地点转移或时间、事件转换以及由概括说明到具体叙述时。如：
In my summer holidays, I did a lot of things. Apart form doing my homework, reading an English novel, watching TV and doing somehousework, I went on a trip to Qingdao. It is really a beautiful city. There are many places of interest to see. But what impressed me most wasthe sunrise.
The next morning I got up early. I was very happy because it was a fine day. By the time I got to the beach, the clouds on the horizonwere turning red. In a little while, a small part of the sun was gradually appearing. The sun was very red, not shining. It rose slowly. At last itbroke through the red clouds and jumped above the sea, just like a deep-red ball. At the same time the clouds and the sea water became redand bright.
What a moving and unforgettable scene!
5. 叙述与对话
引用故事情节中主要人物的对话是记叙文提高表现力的一种好方法。适当地用直接引语代替间接的主观叙述，可以客观生动地反映人物的性格、品质和心理状态，使记叙生动、有趣，使文章内容更加充实、具体。试比较下面两段的叙述效果：
