假设你叫高迪，是高一（2）班的学生。你在10月16日晚上把一本《牛津高级英汉双解字典》丢在阅览室里，用英语写一则寻物启事，贴在餐厅前的留言板上，请捡到者交给你或你班班长。启事时间：10月17日
Lost
October 17th
On the evening of October 16th,I left my Oxford Advanced Learner’s English-Chinese Dictienary in the reading-room.It is new.Will the finder please send it to me in Class Two,senior Grade One or to our monitor?Thank you very much.
Gao Di
(Loser)
1. 审题不清
如2004年中考作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如何准确，都会被判为零分。
2.拼写错误
拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。
3.名词单复数问题：
误 My father and my mother is all teacher.
正 My father and my mother are both teachers.
4.缺少动词
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有 动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I'm tired.
误 I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.
正 I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo.
误 The apples cheap. I'll take some.
正 The apples are cheap. I'll take some.
5.缺少介词、冠词等
还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言*惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。
误 Because heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.
正 Because of the heavy rain we can't hold the sports meeting.
6.代词的误用
英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。
误 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father.
正 My mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for my father.
7.句子不完整
有的考生因为对句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。
误 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. For example, my friend in high school.
(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)
正 Many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my friend in high school.
8.前后不一致
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等.
例1. When one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do.
(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么.)
剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致.
改为 When one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)
9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。例：
误 When I get to the station the train leave.
正 When I got to the station the train had left.
10.综合性错误：
综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生*时知识的积累，所以考生应该从*时练*出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水*的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。
特别说明：由于各方面情况的不断调整与变化，新浪网所提供的所有考试信息仅供参考，敬请考生以权威部门公布的正式信息为准。
什么是提示性作文？
提示性作文：就是给出一个标题或无标题，给出具体的内容，规定一定的字数，让考生写出作文。由于这类作文已经规定了文章的中心思想和主要内容，因此考生可以不再列出提纲，只要把注意力集中在如何正确、完整地用英文词句表达出中心思想和内容就可以了。
写好提示性作文应注意的事项
1、仔细审题，明确要求。对所给信息反复阅读，弄清这个题目要表达什么，然后对所给信息进行整理、组织，按照自己的写作思路使之条理化。
2、确保语言精炼。在写作过程中，考生应时刻提醒自己按照已给出的信息点去写，不必有太多的发挥。但也不必按照信息点去逐句翻译。用自己熟悉的短语、句型去体现要点。掌握好文章的长度，不要字数过多或过少。
例题分析
一、汉语提示
根据中文提示和英文提示词语，写一篇意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。所给英文提示词语必须用上。字数60～70左右。
1、昨天晚上我和妈妈出去散步。
2、在路上我遇到了一个外国人。
3、他向我询问去温泉饭店（theHotSpringHotel）的路。
4、我告诉他沿着路往前走，在第三个转弯处向左拐就能看见饭店。
5、他非常感谢我，我也为能帮他而感到高兴。
提示词语：go out for a walk, on the road, the way to, walk along, on the left, thank for, be happy that（分析）
写作指导：根据提示我们了解到这是一篇记叙文，所以考生应马上想到时间（yesterday evening），地点（on the road），人物（I, my mother and a foreigner），事件（howto show the way）。其次观察信息点，我们确定这篇文章应用过去式来表达。然后，确定这个事件应用第一人称来叙述。最后，按照信息点合理组织文章，别忘用上提示词语。
（例文）
Yesterday evening,I went out for a walk with my mother.On the road,we met a foreigner.
He asked me the way to the Hot Spring Hotel.I told him to walk along the road and take the third turning on the left, then he could see the hotel.He thanked me very much for my help.I was happy that I could help him.
二、英语提示
你收到一封咨询信，请你以旅行社工作人员的身份完成任务。
Dear Ace Travel,
I'm Li Ming, from the east of China. For the coming winter vacation, my family and I want to spend our vacation in a foreign city for ten days. We would like to go somewhere not only warm but also interesting. We don't mind how far we have to go. It has to be a place where we can swim everyday, and it would be nice if our hotel is not expensive but clean and comfortable. We like to pay no more than $ 5,000 for the trip. Could you please give us your suggestions for vacation spots?
Thanks a lot.
Yours,
Li Ming
请你根据来信，从下列所给的`地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建议。（80字左右）Tokyo, Sydney, Hawaii, Shanghai
写作指导：这篇作文结合了提示性作文和应用文的写作要求。首先，我们要读懂英语提示的内容，也就是那封咨询信的内容。其次，我们要知道书信的写作方法。针对本道题，还要注意，这封信是以旅行社工作人员的身份来写的。最后，还要注意咨询信后的要求-从下列所给的地方中选择一个或两个符合Li Ming要求的地方，向他提出建议及字数限制。
下面，我们来看看范文是怎么写的。
One Possible version:
Dear Li Ming,
I'm Gina. It's my pleasure to give you some suggestions for your vacation spots. According to your letter, I think either Sydney or Hawaii is the best choice because they are both warm and interesting. There are some inexpensive hotels, which are clean and comfortable in both places. What's more, you can enjoy sunshine, walk on the beach and swim every day.
Besides, there are many good museums in Sydney. （It's also a wonderful place for shopping. ）And if you go to Hawaii, you could have a visit to Pearl Harbor, which is quite educational and historical. （And you can also enjoy exotic dances. ）
That's just my idea. I hope it would give you some help.
Yours,
Gina
对于，提示作文的写法大家都会了吗？不管什么作文的写作，都要要求我们对英语的词汇、短语以及常用的表达方法有一定的积累。所以，在学*写作的同时，不要放松对以上几个方面的复*。
——中考英语写作常见错误有哪些3篇
在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的`，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，一定要写成：I‘m tired。
误：I happy I can come to Beijing Zoo。
正：I am happy I can come to Beijing Zoo。
误：The apples cheap。 I‘ll take some。
正：The apples are cheap。 I‘ll take some。
所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。
误：When one have knowledge， he can do what he want to do。
(one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。
正：When one has knowledge ， he can do what he wants to do。
汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要。
误：When I get to the station the train leave。
正：When I got to the station the train had left。
——中考英语写作技巧3篇
对大多数学*英语的同学来说，英语的词汇量、句式的积累还极其有限，远不能达到用英文流畅表达，挥洒自如的境地。在这一阶段进行创作是不合时宜的，如果非要创造，只能写出“long time no see”这样的文字来。因此，模仿是这一阶段的必经途径。
谈到模仿，一些同学的办法就是背一堆范文，然后再到考场上进行一个“剪切”、“粘贴”的工作，效果可想而知。这不是真正意义上的模仿，充其量算是默写课文。如何模仿呢?
首先，模仿的目标要明确。模仿的重点永远要放在一定的句式结构上，而非个别的.词汇。道理很简单：一个词，随着文章内容的变换，可能就不能用了;而句式结构是放置四海而皆准的东西，适用的范围广，学来对写作的帮助也就明显。
其次，模仿的材料要地道。像新概念英语这样的教材就提供了很多原汁原味的英语表达法。盲目选择文章学*，记一些不中不洋的句子，以讹传讹，浪费时间。
最后，模仿要体现在实际动笔上。比如说，新概念第三册有一个句式说：“…for the simple reason that…”表示某种现象的原因是什么，用在大学英语考试中，我们就可以拿来解释为什么自行车在*如此的流行，表达为：“the bicycle is very popular in china for the simple reason that…”。然而，很多同学经常背了这些句式不用，一谈到原因仍然是“…because…”，等等。
要写好英语作文，还要带着敏锐的目光细心地观察，注意英语中一些表达上的*惯。
比如说，在正式文体的写作中，很少用 “it isn"t”这样的略缩形式，而往往是一板一眼地写作 “it is not”。同理，在正式文体中的日期一般不缩写，***数字一般会用英文表达(特别长的数字除外)。
再比如说，翻翻新概念第三册所有的课文，会发现凡是一段文章的段首句出现转折时，转折词however都放在句子结构中的第二部分，以插入语的形式出现。分析原因，是因为段落一开始就用转折词，会时转折显得较生硬、突兀。
最后，许多同学在写作文时，*惯于把 “since” “because” “for”这样的词放在句首引导原因状语从句。事实上，在我们见到的英语报刊杂志文章中，这样的从句一般都是放在主句之后的。另外, “and”也常常被误放在一句话的开头，表示两个句子之间的并列或递进关系。其实，经常留心地道的英语文章能发现，如果是并列关系，完全可以不用连词;如果是递进关系，用 “furthermore” “what is more”更为普遍。
一、巧用过渡句
所谓过渡词，就是表示先后顺序的first，second，…。at last，表示因果关系的as a result，dueto，because of…，表示分述关系的what‘s more，furthermore，besides，inaddition等等。为什么要使用这样的词汇?原因有二：其一，我们每个人写的文章虽然内容几乎千篇一律，但是每个人的写作风格和逻辑思路不尽相同。怎样在短时间内让阅卷老师进入自己的逻辑体系，快速而精准的判断你的文章呢?过渡词就是一个很好的“向导”，它能够引导阅卷人的思路，让其短时间内对你的文章做出公允的评价;其二，我们列好提纲准备下笔的时候，总有一个先后顺序，总有一个逻辑结构，如何使自己的文章结构清晰，要点明确，中心突出，答案还是过渡词，使用了过渡词，可以规范自己的逻辑思路，让我们在有压力的写作之下能够做到临危不乱，有条不紊，层次清晰，逻辑通畅。
二、句式多变
如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的“ithink”简单句，那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味，乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分?所以，我们在写句子的时候，要尽可能的变换句式和结构，让文章富于变化，错落有致。具体地说：中考作文中，我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句，主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如，20xx年中考北京卷作文题，以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做“他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。”例文给出的句子是“he saved two of his classmates. then he walked for seven hoursto safety."这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句：saving two of his classmates，lin haowalked for seven hours to safety.
如果再加上语态的变换，还可以改写成：being saved from the earthquake，two of linhao‘s classmates walked for seven hours to safety with lin hao.这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话，一定会增加阅卷人的青睐，从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。
三、善用名人名言
在中考作文中，很少有同学能主动写出名人名言为自己的文章画龙点睛。名人名言是精炼浓缩的，富有哲理和智慧的句子，经过数百年人们口耳相传到了今天，足以说明它的凝练和它的魅力。如果在文章中能成功使用合适的名人名言，那将会是怎样一番景象，其实不难想象。比如你在一篇讨论中学生该不该使用手机的文章中用了”just as the saying goes，‘every coin has two sides.‘“，那效果就相当于一个美国人在汉语水*考试作文里写出了”*人有句古话叫‘福兮祸之所倚，祸兮福之所伏‘“一样的震撼!因此，学会使用名人名言，将会使我们的文章大放异彩。当然了，使用名人名言的前提是我们得记得住一定数量的名言。很多同学在写作的时候没有办法写出漂亮的名言来衬托，这一是因为自己*时积累不够，写不出合适的名人名言，第二是对名人名言没有形成条件反射，联想不到。大家在接下来的文章中不妨可以尝试一下，看看效果如何。
——中考英语图画写作知识点3篇
1. 认真读图，把握中心。
一般说来，所给的几幅图都是围绕一个中心展开的。它们讲述的通常是一个小故事或小事件，这个小故事或小事件就是这组图画所要表达的中心。
2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。
在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。
尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。
3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。
运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。
串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
4. 反复审核，修改错误。
一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。
5. 宜详则详，该略则略。
对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。
如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。
6. 注意所给的汉语提示。
一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，有的还规定了文章所采用的体裁，如使用书信、留言、日记等。因此，在审题时我们一定要注意所给的汉语提示。
7. 文章中少用复句，多用单句;少用直接引语，代之间接引语。
图画式书面表达是高考英语书面表达经常采用的`形式，它是一种检查学生观察理解能力及语言运用能力的试题。主要特点有：
1、试题提供一幅或一组图画及提示，考生围绕给定的主题写出若干句语境相符、语法正确、意思连贯的句子。
2、此类题型关键是认真审题，从提示中了解所写的内容，列出提纲或拟个腹稿，然后分段表述，写出一篇脉络清晰、层次分明、文理通顺、意思连贯的短文。
3、图画提示类作文涉及的题材比较广，可以是故事、新闻报道、地点介绍或说明，也可能是书信或日记等。
要想写好图画式书面表达，同学们应注意以下几点：
1、仔细审题。确定文体、时态及人称。
看图书面表达以图画提供信息，但在汉语提示及“注意”中也蕴含着很重要的信息。如短文词数、文体及写作本文的原因或意图等。因此，在答题前一定要仔细审题，弄清文体、人称及所用时态。
2、找全要点，兼顾图内图外内容。
在动笔前，要认真读图、明确图示内容，把握好图中人物与人物、人物与地点、人物与画面以及图画内各部分的关系，以便做到既准确全面又详略得当。以多幅图作提示的，要注意图与图之间的关系，并注意图画内容的连续性及统一性(为统一主题服务，人称、时态等也要前后一致);若是以一幅图作提示，则要弄清楚图画中所有内容的联系，明确哪些与主题有关，哪些与主题无关，从而确定哪些该详写、哪些该略写或不写。
3、准确表达，尽量避免语法或拼写错误。
把要点列出后，要善于把分散的要点用正确、简明、地道的语句进行表达，并按一定的逻辑关系连接。正确用好时态，单词拼写正确，避免汉语式英语等。同时注意调整好要点的出场顺序。
4、仔细检查、修改。
核对图中要点是否遗漏。时态、语态是否正确。文章句、段、篇是否连贯。单词大小写、拼写、标点符号是否准确无误。书写工整、美观，一篇好的作文不但要内容写的好，字迹也要美观、工整、漂亮。
——中考英语阅读理解及解析3篇
When you want to go shopping, decide how much money you can spend for new clothes. Think about the kind of clothes you really need. Then look for those clothes on sale(销售).
There are labels(标签)inside all new clothes. The labels tell you how to take care of your clothes. The label for a shirt may tell you to wash it in warm water. A sweater label may tell you to wash by washing in cold water. The label on a coat may say "dry clean only." Washing may ruin(损坏)this coat. If you do as the directions(说明)say on the label, you can keep your clothes looking their best. Many clothes today must be dry cleaned. Dry cleaning is expensive. When buying new clothes, check(核实)to see if they will need to be dry cleaned. You will save money if you buy clothes that can be washed.
You can save money if you buy clothes that are well made. Well-made clothes last longer. They look good even after they have been washed many times. Clothes that cost more money are not always better made. They do not always fit(合身)better. Sometime less expensive clothes look and fit better than more expensive clothes.
1.If you want to save money you can buy clothes that _____.
A. don’t fit you
B. don’t last long
C. need to be dry cleaned
D. can be washed
2.The label inside the clothes tell you______.
A. how to keep them looking their best
B. how to save money
C. whether they fit you or not
D. where to get them dry cleaned
3.The first thing for you to do before you buy clothes is ______.
A. to look for well-made clothes
B. to see how much money you can pay
C. to know how to wash them
D. to read the labels inside them
4.We learn from the reading that cheaper clothes ______.
A. are always worse made
B. must be dry cleaned
C. can not be washed
D. can sometimes fit you better
5.The best title(标题) for the reading should be ______.
A. Buying Less Expensive Clothes
B. Taking Enough Money When Shopping
C. Being a Clever Clothes Shopper
D. Choosing the Labels inside New Clothes
【答案与解析】
1.此题为理解题，从第二段Dry cleaning is expensive. You will save money if you buy clothes that can be washed.可以看出C答案不对，又可以从第三段很容易判断出A和B不对。
2.此题为理解题，第二段的第二句话应该被看作主题句。从此句可以看出该题答案选择A。 一般说来，文章的段落常有概括中心思想的主题句，且多位于段首或段末，有时也会夹在中间。对无主题句的篇章，考生应对文章进行分析和归纳，然后概括中心思想。
3.此题为直接题，从文章第一段第一句可以看出答案选B。
4.此题为推理题，文章中虽然没有直接信息，但从文章第二段及第三段很容易推断出A，B，C答案都是错误的。又从第三段最后一句话可以推断出答案选D。
5.此题为概括题，此题考查文章的标题，主要针对文章的主题、中心思想、文章的结构层次(主题句或主题段)，要求学生在理解全文后归纳短文要点，概括中心思想。考生归纳各段的主题句不难发现此题答案选择C。
A couple from Miami, Bill and Simone Butler, spent sixty-six days in a life-raft(救生艇) in the seas of Central America after their boat sank.
Twenty-one days after they left Panama in their boat, Simony, they met some whales(鲸鱼). “They started to hit the side of the boat,” said Bill, “and then suddenly we heard water.” Two minutes later, the boat was sinking. They jumped into the life-raft and watched the boat go under the water.
For twenty days they had tins of food, biscuits, and bottles of water. They also had a fishing-line and a machine to make salt water into drinking water — two things which saved their lives. They caught eight to ten fish a day and ate them raw(生的). Then the line broke. “So we had no more fish until something very strange happened. Some sharks(鲨鱼) came to feed, and the fish under the raft were afraid and came to the surface. I caught them with my hands.”
About twenty ships passed them, but no one saw them. After fifty days at sea their life-raft was beginning to break up. Then suddenly it was all over. A fishing boat saw them and picked them up. They couldn’t stand up.
So the captain carried them onto his boat and took them to Costa Rica. Their two months at sea was over.
1. Bill and Simone were traveling _______ when they met some whales.
A. in a life-raft B. in Miami
C. in Simony D. in Panama
2. The whales hit the side of the boat, and then _______.
A. they brought in a lot of water
B. they broke the side of the boat
C. they pulled the boat
D. they went under the water
3. After their boat sank, the couple _______.
A. jumped into the life-raft
B. heard water
C. watched the boat go under water
D. stayed in the life-raft
4. During their days at sea, _______ saved their lives.
A. tins of food and bottles of water
B. a fishing-line and a machine
C. whales and sharks
D. Twenty passing ships
5. When they saw the fishing boat which later picked them up, _______.
A. they were too excited to stand up
B. they couldn’t wait to climb onto the boat
C. their life-raft was beginning to break up
D. they knew their two months at sea would be over
【答案与解析】
这是一篇关于一对夫妇如何遇到海难，然后在海上的救生艇上生活了66天后获救的小故事。
1. C。在第二自然段的第1句就告诉我们they left Panama, Simony, they met some whales 说他们是在Simony 旅游时遇见Whales.
2. B。我们从第二自然段得知They started to hit the side of the boat,也就是说是the whales broke the side of the boat。
3. D。在他们的船沉没之后，the couple是一直待在船上直至获救的，而不是一直都在jumped into the life-raft。
4. B。根据第3段的第2句They also had a fishing-line and a machine to make salt water into drinking water-two things which saved their lives可知：a fishing-line 和 a machine救了他们的命。
5. D。由最后一段After fifty days at sea...我们知道：the couple是太虚弱所以不能站起来，是由船长carried them onto his boat, 而救生艇早在出事后的50天就坏掉了，而不是获救当天坏的，所以A、B、C都可以排除，D项为正确选项。
Do you know how to play a game called "Musical Chairs"？ It is easy to play and most people enjoy it. All you need are some chairs， some people and some way of making music. You may use a piano or any other musical instrument， if someone can play it. You may use a tape recorder. You can even use a radio.
Put the chairs in a row. The chairs may be put in twos， back to back. A better way is to have the chairs in one row with each chair facing in the opposite direction to the chair next to it.
The game is easy. When the music starts， the players walk round the chairs. Everyone goes in the same direction， of course， they should walk in time to the music. If the music is fast they should walk quickly. If the music is slow， they should walk slowly.
The person playing music cannot see the people in the game. When the music stops， the players try to sit on the chairs. If a person cannot find a chair to sit on， he drops out. Then， before the music starts again， one chair must be taken away. When the music stops again， one more player will be out.
At last， there will be two players and one chair. The one who sits on the chair when the music stops is the winner.
根据以上短文内容，然后从每题所给的四个选项中选择最佳选项。
1. If ten people are playing musical chairs， you must begin with _______.
A. nine chairs B. ten chairs
C. eleven chairs D. one chair
2. Which of the following is not suitable for playing musical chairs？ _______.
A. A piano B. A radio
C. A tape recorder D. A telephone
3. The chairs should be put _______.
A. with the desks B. before the winner
C. all over the room D. in a line
4. When the music starts,the players must _______.
A. run about the room
B. get down
C. walk around the chairs
D. sit on the chairs
5. Which of the following statements is NOT true？
A. The game "Musical Chairs" is not difficult to learn.
B. The last one can sit on the last chair.
C. The winner can sit on the chair.
D. If the person plays music,he cannot be the winner.
答案与解析
——高考英语作文中常见的错误「必知」合集五篇
76. An orphan is a child who’s parents are dead.
定语从句中表“…的”引导词只有whose，所以把who’s 改为whose。
77. This is the very thing which I lost yesterday.
如果先行词为物且前有the only, the last, the very修饰时，定语从句的引导词只能用that。
78. This is the car for that I paid a high price.
定语从句的先行词为物，而且引导词放在介词后时，只能用which.
79. She is one of the students who has passed the exam.
定语从句修饰one of 加上复数名词时，复数名词是定语从句的先行词，因此把 has 改为have。
80. This is the place where we visited last year.
定语从句的先行词用关系代词还是关系副词要看定语从句中缺不缺主语或宾语，如缺用关系代词，如不缺用关系副词。此句中visit为及物动词，后无宾语，因此把where 改为which或that。
81. I，who is your friend, can understand you.
定语从句的谓语动词应与其先行词保持一致，因此把is 改为am。
82. China is a developing country, that is known to all.
非限定性定语从句的引导词永远不会是that，因此把that 改为which 或as。
及物动词用在主动语态时要有宾语，因此可以变为被动语态;不及物动词用于主动语态时不能接宾语，因此无被动语态。
51. The two thieves have been disappeared.
disappear 为不及物动词，因此不能用于被动语态。所以把 been去掉。
52. The building built now will be our teaching building.
表“现在正在建的”应用被动语态的正在进行时，因此在built 前加being。
53. He is being operated by the famous doctor.
主动语态变为被动语态时，应注意短语动词的完整性，别忘了介词或副词。“给...…做手术”应为operate on sb，所以在operated 后加上on。
54. I wonder if the doctor has been sent.
原因同上，应在sent 后加上for。
55. The book written by him is sold well.
说一本书畅销是指书本身的属性，因此不用被动语态。本句应改为：The book written by him sells well.
56. This history book is worthy reading.
“值得被做”可以有如下几种说法：be worth doing; be worthy of being done; be worthy to be done. 因此本句可改为：This history book is worthy to be read.
73. I will go unless he invites me.
此句意为“除非他邀请我，否则我不去。”而unless相当于if not, 所以本句应改成：I won’t go unless he invites me.
74. Although he tried, but he still couldn’t keep up with the others.
although 和but 不能同时用在一句话中，去掉任何一个都可以。
75. I won’t stay until he comes back.
含有not…until的句子的谓语动词应是点动词，含有until的肯定句的动词应是延续性动词，此句有两种改法：I will stay until he comes back.或I won’t leave until he comes back.
形容词和副词容易被误用，形容词和副词的比较级和最高级也是应注意的重点。
20. The patient appeared nervously when he talked to the doctor.
appear在此是个系动词，其后应接形容词作表语。所以应把nervously改为nervous.
21. The artist worked hardly to finish his drawings on time.
此句需要一个副词来修饰，hardly是副词，但意为“几乎不”，hard 也可以是副词，表努力，因此把 hardly 改为hard.
22. This shirt is more cheaper than that one.
more只构成比较级，而不能修饰比较级。因此把more去掉。
23. He is the most successful of the two businessmen.
两者相比较时，比较级前用定冠词，三者或三者以上才用most，因此把most改为more.
24. He works less harder than he used to.
表不如…...时用less加上形容词和副词的原级，因此把harder改为hard.
25. The book is fairly more interesting than that one.
fairly只能修饰形容词和副词的原级，可以修饰比较级的副词或短语有：much, even, still, far, a lot, a little, a bit, any, no, by far, rather等，因此把fairly改为rather.
26. This is as an interesting a story as the one in the magazine.
as … as中间的词序是as加上形容词加上a(n)加上名词再加上as，因此应改为as interesting a story as the one.
27. The weather here is nicer than Xizang.
同样的事物才能相比较，weather和Xizang不具有可比性，因此应改为The weather here is nicer than that of Xizang.
29. I would rather take a train than went by bus.
这个词组为would rather do… than do…，因此把went改为go.
30. Is there interesting anything at the meeting?
修饰anything, something, everything, nothing的形容词都要放在它们的后面。
31. I never have seen such a person before.
像never之类的副词在句中应放在be动词、助动词之后，实意动词之前。因为应改为I have never seen such a person before.
32. The book is worth to be read.
be worth doing意为值得被做。因此改为The book is worth reading.
33. It is sure that he will succeed.
sure的主语只能为人，而certain的主语可为人和物。因此把sure改为certain.
34. He is regarded as one of the best alive writers at present.
alive 为表语形容词，偶尔也做后置定语。因此把alive改为living，或把alive 放在writers后面。
35. I don’t know that he has finished the work yet.
yet用于否定和疑问句，already用于肯定句。把yet 改为already.
36. He said nearly nothing at the meeting.
nearly不与否定词用在同一个句子中，而almost可以。因此把nearly 改为almost。
