Dear David,
I’m glad that you've noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern. As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our govenment encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them. I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place.
Yours, Li Hua
亲爱的戴维，
我很高兴你已经注意到我们的努力对环境保护的努力。谢谢您的关心。过多使用塑料袋已经造成了严重的白色污染，我们的*鼓励我们使用环保购物袋。这些塑料袋是由各种材料制成的，它们可以在垃圾变成垃圾时容易处理。此外，他们可以重复使用。在*，越来越多的`人已经意识到了这些袋子的优点并开始使用它们。我相信这些购物袋的广泛应用可以大大改善我们的环境。这是我们为使我们的国家更清洁的地方之一。
你的，李华
一、出题内容
六级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的`内容。具体说来可以分为两个方面：
(1)关于大学生的话题：
(2)关于社会问题的话题：
二、出题形式
六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等。
根据具体特点六级考试作文可以分为以下五个类型：对立观点型、解决问题型、谚语警句型、图表图画型、应用写作型。
(一)对立观点型
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on
the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The First sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline below:
1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是......
2. 也有人持不同意见，......
3. 我的看法和打算
(二) 解决问题型
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
提出建议
1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
"It is high time" 打头，为该句增色。注：that 后跟虚拟语气，后跟动词的一般过去式，表示“是某人做……的时候了”或者“是某人不做……的时候了”
2、It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ... 该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予非常重视的时候了。
去掉一个"high"，画风完全不一样，不用过去式，只需用"to do"来替代。
3、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ... 毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够的重视。
"there is no doubt that"+被动还是蛮经典的组合。
4、Obviously,.... If we want to do something... , it is essential that... 显然，如果我们想做某事，我们需要……
这句有些老生常谈，稍微不“常”的就是"essential" 替代了"important"。
5、Only in this way can we... 只有这样,我们才能...
Only+倒装，经典万能句式，还能看出点水*呢。
6、It must be realized that... 我们必须意识到...
把人人都会的"I realized"升格为被动语态，省略了主语，监考老师绝对会眼前一亮的'!
1. 电子商务 electronic commerce
造句练*：在数字时代，电子商务在经济领域扮演着越来越重要的作用。
参考答案：In digital era, electronic commerce plays an increasing role in the field of economy.
2. 投资 investment
造句练*：按照国际惯例，在一个国家教育投资应该占其国民生产总值的4%。
参考答案：In line with international convention, education investment in a country should account for 40 percent of Gross Domestic Product (GDP for short).
3. 购买力 purchasing power
造句练*：经济的发展使国民的.购买力大幅提升，从而有更多的钱用于教育、旅游、日常开销等。
参考答案：Economic growth brings citizens greater purchasing power which makes it available for them to cover education, travel，daily expenses and so forth.
4. 消费 v. consume ;n. consumption
造句练*：在人们生活水*大幅提高的今天，更要倡导理性消费。
参考练*：Today while living level are greatly advanced, rational consumption should be advocated even more.
开头：
Recently, the problem of has aroused peoples concern.
最*,问题已引起人们的关注.
Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
Nowadays, has become a problem we have to face.
如今,已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
It is commonly believed that / It is a common belief that
人们一般认为
Many people insist that
很多人坚持认为
With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为
A lot of people seem to think that
很多人似乎认为
结尾：
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that
考虑所有这些因素, 我们可能会得出合理的结论
——大学英语六级作文600字9篇
catch one's breath 喘气,松口气;屏息
catch one's eye 引人注目
catch sight of 看到,发现
come into effect 生效;实施
come into operation 施行,实行,生效
come to one's senses 醒悟;苏醒
come true 实现
could not help 禁不住,忍不住
cut short 中断,打断
do one's best 尽力,努力
enjoy oneself 过得快活
fall in love with 爱 上
find fault(with) 找岔
gain an advantage over 胜过,优于
get hold of 得到,获得
get rid of 丢弃,摆脱,
get the best of 战胜
get the better of 战胜,占上风
get together 会面,装配
give rise to 引起,导致
give way 让路,让步
admission of sth 承认
advance in 改进,进步
advantage over 优于……的'有利条件
affection for/towards 爱,喜欢
answer to ……的答案
anxiety for sth 渴望
apology to sb for sth 道歉
appeal to sb for sth 恳求,呼吁
appeal for 魅力,吸引力
appetite for 对……的欲望
application 把……应用于……
approach to 类似,办法,通道 of sth/to sth
argument 赞成/反对……的理由
arrangement for 对……的安排
for /against attack on 对……的进攻,评击
百变句子开头使你的句型多变
1.以同位语作为句子的开头。
The most popular teacher in Neworiental, Ma Zihui, will attend the party. 2.以单个修饰语作为句子的开头。
这个修饰语可以是形容词、分词或副词。
Young and ambitious,JieYu works hard to teach Englsih.
Secretly, the girl entered the room.
With a book in her hands, Fang Meng talked to a foreigner.
Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.
3.以短语修饰语作为句子的`开头。
短语修饰语可以是介词短语、不定式短语、分词短语以及独立主格结构。
In front of me stood a beautiful girl.
To pass the exam, the students worked hard.
Confused about the problem, he went to ask for his teacher.
Your homework finished, you may go home.
4.用从句作为句子的开始。
If I am free, I will attend your lecture.
Whenever one goes, whatever one does, one needs money.
英语小作文开头常用短语句式
With the growing popularity of in China, the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.
With the growth of , many problems such as are beginng to surface
百变句子开头使你的句型多变
1.以同位语作为句子的开头。
The most popular teacher in Neworiental, Ma Zihui, will attend the party. 2.以单个修饰语作为句子的开头。
这个修饰语可以是形容词、分词或副词。
Young and ambitious,JieYu works hard to teach Englsih.
Secretly, the girl entered the room.
With a book in her hands, Fang Meng talked to a foreigner.
Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.
3.以短语修饰语作为句子的.开头。
短语修饰语可以是介词短语、不定式短语、分词短语以及独立主格结构。
In front of me stood a beautiful girl.
To pass the exam, the students worked hard.
Confused about the problem, he went to ask for his teacher.
Your homework finished, you may go home.
4.用从句作为句子的开始。
If I am free, I will attend your lecture.
Whenever one goes, whatever one does, one needs money.
英语小作文开头常用短语句式
With the growing popularity of in China, the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.
With the growth of , many problems such as are beginng to surface
1. 电子商务 electronic commerce
造句练*：在数字时代，电子商务在经济领域扮演着越来越重要的作用。
参考答案：In digital era, electronic commerce plays an increasing role in the field of economy.
2. 投资 investment
造句练*：按照国际惯例，在一个国家教育投资应该占其国民生产总值的'4%。
参考答案：In line with international convention, education investment in a country should account for 40 percent of Gross Domestic Product (GDP for short).
3. 购买力 purchasing power
造句练*：经济的发展使国民的购买力大幅提升，从而有更多的钱用于教育、旅游、日常开销等。
参考答案：Economic growth brings citizens greater purchasing power which makes it available for them to cover education, travel，daily expenses and so forth.
4. 消费 v. consume ;n. consumption
造句练*：在人们生活水*大幅提高的今天，更要倡导理性消费。
参考练*：Today while living level are greatly advanced, rational consumption should be advocated even more.
1. 电子商务 electronic commerce
造句练*：在数字时代，电子商务在经济领域扮演着越来越重要的作用。
参考答案：In digital era, electronic commerce plays an increasing role in the field of economy.
2. 投资 investment
造句练*：按照国际惯例，在一个国家教育投资应该占其国民生产总值的4%。
参考答案：In line with international convention, education investment in a country should account for 40 percent of Gross Domestic Product (GDP for short).
3. 购买力 purchasing power
造句练*：经济的'发展使国民的购买力大幅提升，从而有更多的钱用于教育、旅游、日常开销等。
参考答案：Economic growth brings citizens greater purchasing power which makes it available for them to cover education, travel，daily expenses and so forth.
4. 消费 v. consume ;n. consumption
造句练*：在人们生活水*大幅提高的今天，更要倡导理性消费。
参考练*：Today while living level are greatly advanced, rational consumption should be advocated even more.
At 4 pm on March 4th, Monday, 20xx, in front of the Student Canteen, more than 900 teachers and students participated in the activity with the theme “Fight against wasting but encourage to eat up everything on your plate” organized by the Students’ Union. First, we saw pictures on the boards which had recorded the terrible phenomena of wasting in the campus. After that, we watched video clips, from which we have learned that every year about 10 million people are dying of food shortage. Therefore, if we reduce food waste by 5% every day, we can save 4 million lives. And then everybody signed up to show our determination so as to cultivate our good habit, save food and refuse waste.
在三月四日下午4点，星期一，20xx岁的学生食堂，900多名教师和学生参加了活动，主题是“反对浪费，但鼓励吃了你的盘子”，由学生会组织的一切。首先，我们在董事会上看到了一些在校园里浪费的可怕现象的照片。之后，我们看了视频剪辑，从中我们了解到，每年约有10000000人死于食物短缺。因此，如果每天减少5%的.食物浪费，我们就可以节省4000000的生命。然后，大家都报名，以显示我们的决心，以培养我们的良好*惯，节约食物和垃圾废物。
1. 电子商务 electronic commerce
造句练*：在数字时代，电子商务在经济领域扮演着越来越重要的作用。
参考答案：In digital era, electronic commerce plays an increasing role in the field of economy.
2. 投资 investment
造句练*：按照国际惯例，在一个国家教育投资应该占其国民生产总值的4%。
参考答案：In line with international convention, education investment in a country should account for 40 percent of Gross Domestic Product (GDP for short).
3. 购买力 purchasing power
造句练*：经济的发展使国民的.购买力大幅提升，从而有更多的钱用于教育、旅游、日常开销等。
参考答案：Economic growth brings citizens greater purchasing power which makes it available for them to cover education, travel，daily expenses and so forth.
4. 消费 v. consume ;n. consumption
造句练*：在人们生活水*大幅提高的今天，更要倡导理性消费。
参考练*：Today while living level are greatly advanced, rational consumption should be advocated even more.
中心句放开端
文章中心句是整个文章的主题和写作围绕的中心，通常应该放在段落的开端，这样一方面能够让阅卷老师一眼看出文章表达的.主旨意思，起到开门见山的作用;另一方面可以使文章条理层次更加清晰，逻辑性强，文章的整体结构合理。中心句在作文中可以起到承接上下文的作用，放在段尾也可以起到总结全文的作用。这一方法对于写作初学者来说还是有一定困难的，因此在六级考试中，为了减少不必要的错误和损失，大家尽量将中心句放到文章的开头以保万无一失。
关键词要具体
文章的中心句一般是通过关键词来表现和限制文章的主旨思想的，所以为了突出主题，关键词需要尽量写得具体些。这里对“具体”的要求主要体现在两个方面：一方面是要具体到能限制和区分文章段落层次的发展;另一方面是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。精确仔细地突出关键词是清楚地表达文章主旨、写好段落中心句的重要前提之一，这对考生来说有一定难度。
设问扩充内容
中心句及关键词确定后，文章的大概框架已经清晰了，这时候就需要选择和主题有关的信息和素材来填充这个框架。实质上，针对关键词测试每一个所选择的素材就是一个分类的过程。有一种常用的行文方法就是句子展开前加以设问，然后解答，即设问-解答(why-because)的方法，利用问题引出自己需要的话题再加以解答表现自己的观点，同时紧紧围绕主题。
所以，要想写出一篇高质量的六级英语作文，就要从中心句、关键词以及设问扩充内容三方面出发，当然还不要忘记词汇量和语法上要有一定的积累，把技巧运用于文章中，你的文章必然会让读者眼前一亮。希望上述的内容对你备考六级英语作文写作有所帮助。
一、出题内容
六级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。具体说来可以分为两个方面：
(1)关于大学生的话题：
(2)关于社会问题的'话题：
二、出题形式
六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等。
根据具体特点六级考试作文可以分为以下五个类型：对立观点型、解决问题型、谚语警句型、图表图画型、应用写作型。
(一)对立观点型
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on
the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The First sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline below:
1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是......
2. 也有人持不同意见，......
3. 我的看法和打算
(二) 解决问题型
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
——大学英语六级作文9篇
一、观点对比型文章
比如说六级20××年已经考了两次观点对比型文章，所以本人认为靠这种问题的可能性不是很大，但是即使考到也没什么可以担心的，因为写作的思路是确定的。
下面我们以下面的题目为例，来讲解观点对比型文章的写法。
养宠物。有些人认为养宠物很好，有些人认为养宠物不好，你的观点是什么？
本文共分三段。
第一段（3—4句话）
第一句话：提出主题
比如：
1. Recently with the development /advance/progress of science and technology, the phenomenon of pets has aroused wide concern.
2. Nowadays, it is undeniable that pets has almost become the biggest concern of the present-day world.
第二句话：翻译第一个提纲
比如：a part of citizens cling to the idea that keeping pets is beneficial to their daily life.
第三第四句话具体说明原委，为什么养宠物好
比如：
1. first, keeping pets can reduce the loneliness of many people ,especially the old and the children, who have to stay alone.
2. in addition, the pets are lovely, they can make you feel delighted when you go back to home.
第二段（3—4句话）
第一句话：过渡语
比如：although the former is reasonable to some people, there are still these who claim that having animals at home is unacceptable.
第二句话：翻译第二个提纲
比如：they are of the opinion that keeping pets should be banned.
第三第四句话：说明原委，为什么养宠物不好。
比如：
1． On one hand, they will give rise to serious pollution, which exists not only at their onwers’family but also the public places.
2． On the other hand. Not only will they be responsible for some injuries to the innocent children but also lead to some terrible noise which can be horrible at night.
第三段（3—4句话）
第一句话翻译第三个提纲：
比如：Personally, I insist that keeping pets is a two-edged weapon which can be used for good or evil.
第二句话具体论述：
比如：I intend to stand on the side that pets is our friends, without them. We would witness a gloomy future.
第三句话总结：
In conclusion , it is high time we poured attention into the phenomenon—feeding pets.
这样，一篇观点对比性文章就写出来了。不管主题是什么，只需要变换一下中心词罢了。
二、解决问题型作文
同样，写成三段，分别是提出问题，分析问题，解决问题。
第一段（2—3句话）
第一句话：提出主题
Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious problem. Fake advertisements have become a concern of the public.
第二和第三句话：举例或数据列举
Although there are countless illustrations arround us,the following one is sufficient. Not only on TV but also on newspapers can we find dozens of bad ads which are cheating the consumers.
第二段（4—5句话）
第一句话：翻译提纲二（一般说一个东西的`危害性是什么？）
Fake advertisements definitely have led to some consequences.
第二句—第五句：具体危害
First and foremost, individuals may buy some bad food and drink. It is really unfavorable for their health. Besides, some old people like to buy medicine，Sometimes, which are harmful. Last but not least, the enterprise of fake advertisements can earn much illegal money. It will cause serious problems in government and the society.
第三段（3—4句话）
第一句话翻译提纲三（一般是如何解决问题）
To alleviate this problem, we are hoped to take effective measures.
第二句三句话写如何具体如何解决
On the one hand, the government must control a multitude of advertisement in media, and find out fake advertisement in them. On the other hand, people ought to learn how to identify fake advertisement. So fake enterprises cannot earn profits from individuals anymore.
第四句话总结
Only in this way can we have a harmonious life.
综上，我们可以看出，写作不是准备某个具体的题目考什么的。主要注意写作的结构，以及语法单词的正确性。谢谢同学们，预祝大家四六级考试成功。
1. Although we do not know the long-term consequences of separation or deprivation , we do know that they can produce acute immediate distress .
虽然我们不知道分离和丧失亲人的长期后果，但我们知道它们能立即引起剧烈的`悲痛。
2. One can raedily trace the disappearance of dinosaurs to a major cataclysmic event .
人们很容易把恐龙消失的原因归结为重大的灾难性事件。
3. The raesons for poverty are many , but for the most part center on illiteracy , the lack of opportunities and in some cases pure laziness .
贫困的原因很多，但主要是因为缺少教育、缺少机会，有的情况下纯粹是由于懒惰。
4. Child development depends on a number of factors , both physical and psychological . Correct parental nurturing from infancy through adolescence determines both the physical and mental profile of a mature individual .
儿童的发展取决于很多因素，包括生理的和心理的。从婴儿期到青春期的正确的家长教育决定一个成熟的个人的体质及智力的状况。
5. Factors such as self-condidence and ambition , combined with determination and willpower , contribute to eventual success or failure .
自信、雄心，加上决心和毅力等因素是造成最终的成功或失败的原因。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: What does friendship mean? You should write at least 120 words and you shouldbase your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1.友谊是人生永恒的主题
2.友谊到底意味着什么
3友谊的重要性。
What does friendship mean?
There is no definite answer. An eternal theme in literature, friendship is also indispensable in daily life.
Friendship is to our life what salt is to dishes. When you are happy, friendship is just like adding flowers on the brocade; when you are sad, friendship is a dose of consolation; if you are in trouble, friends will surround you and remove the barriers for you; if you have a hard nut to crack, you can turn to friends for help. We admire the great friendship between Marx and Engel, which firmly combined them and pushed them forward on the road to exploring and fulfilling Communism.
Friendship isnt almighty, but no one can live happily without it.
On Overseas Study
1.有人认为出国留学是个人发展的'最佳选择
2.也有人坚持在国内也能实现自己的理想
3.我的看法
With the deepening of reform and opening-up of our country, many people dream of going abroad for further study. They insist that the modern research facilities, world famous professors and excellent environment in those foreign co11eges and universities can help lay a perfect foundation for their future development.
一、背诵必不可少
写作的过程最后是一个输出的过程，它跟同学们大脑的语料库的积累，还有英文素材的积累和长期的修养是密不可分的。写作就跟银行存钱一样，零存整取，一点点的存进去，最后取出来的时候可以一大把一大把的取。如果我们*时背范文、背句子、背单词、背语法、背句型、背结构背得少，考前也没有进行练*的话，那考试中肯定会遇到很多的困难。所以这里建议大家去背诵考前背诵范文，背五篇左右是打底的，背到滚瓜烂熟，脱口而出。
挑代表性范文
考前应该大范围的进行准备，而不是把题目押到一两个上面。但是也不要求全部背诵，只要把里面的作文大部分进行精读和预览就可以了，可以挑出代表题型，图画作文、英语作文、还有图表作文以及提纲作文，至少每种各背一篇或者两篇，加在一起背五到八篇的范文就可以了。
二、背诵加默写
范文内容很多也很枯燥，大家背了之后不一定会写，会写不一定能写的粗来，所以大量的背诵之后，还要在草稿纸上，笔记本上自己练一下。将背诵的内容诉至笔下，只需要这一遍的过程这篇内容就会在脑海里留下深刻印象，考生便无需再担心背完又忘了的烦恼，同时一些常见的固定组合或者语法在默写的过程中也会无形加深了印象。
默写后查缺补漏
——大学英语六级作文600字6篇
At 4 pm on March 4th, Monday, 20xx, in front of the Student Canteen, more than 900 teachers and students participated in the activity with the theme “Fight against wasting but encourage to eat up everything on your plate” organized by the Students’ Union. First, we saw pictures on the boards which had recorded the terrible phenomena of wasting in the campus. After that, we watched video clips, from which we have learned that every year about 10 million people are dying of food shortage. Therefore, if we reduce food waste by 5% every day, we can save 4 million lives. And then everybody signed up to show our determination so as to cultivate our good habit, save food and refuse waste.
在三月四日下午4点，星期一，20xx岁的学生食堂，900多名教师和学生参加了活动，主题是“反对浪费，但鼓励吃了你的盘子”，由学生会组织的一切。首先，我们在董事会上看到了一些在校园里浪费的可怕现象的照片。之后，我们看了视频剪辑，从中我们了解到，每年约有10000000人死于食物短缺。因此，如果每天减少5%的.食物浪费，我们就可以节省4000000的生命。然后，大家都报名，以显示我们的决心，以培养我们的良好*惯，节约食物和垃圾废物。
百变句子开头使你的.句型多变
1.以同位语作为句子的开头。
The most popular teacher in Neworiental, Ma Zihui, will attend the party. 2.以单个修饰语作为句子的开头。
这个修饰语可以是形容词、分词或副词。
Young and ambitious,JieYu works hard to teach Englsih.
Secretly, the girl entered the room.
With a book in her hands, Fang Meng talked to a foreigner.
Exhausted, the students reached the top of the mountain.
3.以短语修饰语作为句子的开头。
短语修饰语可以是介词短语、不定式短语、分词短语以及独立主格结构。
In front of me stood a beautiful girl.
To pass the exam, the students worked hard.
Confused about the problem, he went to ask for his teacher.
Your homework finished, you may go home.
4.用从句作为句子的开始。
If I am free, I will attend your lecture.
Whenever one goes, whatever one does, one needs money.
英语小作文开头常用短语句式
With the growing popularity of in China, the quality of our lives has been considerably changed.
With the growth of , many problems such as are beginng to surface
一、出题内容
六级考试的作文内容为社会、文化或日常生活的.一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。具体说来可以分为两个方面：
(1)关于大学生的话题：
(2)关于社会问题的话题：
二、出题形式
六级考试作文的出题方式有：命题作文，看图画或图表作文，根据所给文章(英文或中文)写出文章摘要或大意，给出关键词作文等。
根据具体特点六级考试作文可以分为以下五个类型：对立观点型、解决问题型、谚语警句型、图表图画型、应用写作型。
(一)对立观点型
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on
the topic Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? The First sentence has already been written for you. You should write at least 120 words, and you should base your composition on the outline below:
1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是......
2. 也有人持不同意见，......
3. 我的看法和打算
(二) 解决问题型
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a short essay entitled Reduce Waste on Campus. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
At 4 pm on March 4th, Monday, 20xx, in front of the Student Canteen, more than 900 teachers and students participated in the activity with the theme “Fight against wasting but encourage to eat up everything on your plate” organized by the Students’ Union. First, we saw pictures on the boards which had recorded the terrible phenomena of wasting in the campus. After that, we watched video clips, from which we have learned that every year about 10 million people are dying of food shortage. Therefore, if we reduce food waste by 5% every day, we can save 4 million lives. And then everybody signed up to show our determination so as to cultivate our good habit, save food and refuse waste.
在三月四日下午4点，星期一，20xx岁的学生食堂，900多名教师和学生参加了活动，主题是“反对浪费，但鼓励吃了你的`盘子”，由学生会组织的一切。首先，我们在董事会上看到了一些在校园里浪费的可怕现象的照片。之后，我们看了视频剪辑，从中我们了解到，每年约有10000000人死于食物短缺。因此，如果每天减少5%的食物浪费，我们就可以节省4000000的生命。然后，大家都报名，以显示我们的决心，以培养我们的良好*惯，节约食物和垃圾废物。
提出建议
1、It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了。
"It is high time" 打头，为该句增色。注：that 后跟虚拟语气，后跟动词的一般过去式，表示“是某人做……的时候了”或者“是某人不做……的时候了”
2、It is time to take the advice of ... and to put special emphasis on the improvement of ... 该是采纳……的建议，并对……的进展给予非常重视的'时候了。
去掉一个"high"，画风完全不一样，不用过去式，只需用"to do"来替代。
3、There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of ... 毫无疑问，对……问题应予以足够的重视。
"there is no doubt that"+被动还是蛮经典的组合。
4、Obviously,.... If we want to do something... , it is essential that... 显然，如果我们想做某事，我们需要……
这句有些老生常谈，稍微不“常”的就是"essential" 替代了"important"。
5、Only in this way can we... 只有这样,我们才能...
Only+倒装，经典万能句式，还能看出点水*呢。
6、It must be realized that... 我们必须意识到...
——大学英语六级作文 (菁华5篇)
英语六级作文题目：
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topicCan Money Buy Happiness? You should write no less than 100 words and you should base yourcomposition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 有人认为金钱是幸福之本 (source of happiness)
2. 也有人认为金钱是万恶之源 (root of all evil)
3. 我的.看法
英语六级作文范文：
Can money buy happiness? Various people have various answers. Some people think that money is the source of happiness. With money, one can buy whatever he enjoys. With money, one can do whatever he likes. So, in their minds, money can bring comfort, security, and so on. Money, as they think, is the source of happiness.
But there are still a lot of others who think that money is the root of all evil. Money drives people to steal, to rob, and to break the law. A lot of people became criminals just because they were in search of money. And in the Western countries, there is nothing that can’t be bought by money. Many people lose their own lives when hunting it.
I think that money is essential to life and we cannot do without money. But even though money is necessary to life, it can’t buy happiness. Happiness is not something that can be measured by money. It is a state of mind. One can have plenty of money, with which he can buy whatever he wants, and at the same time he is not happy because he is never satisfied or he is troubled by various kinds of problems. Therefore, although money is necessary for a happy life, it can’t buy happiness.
Dear David,
I’m glad that you've noticed our efforts directed towards environmental protection. Thank you for your concern. As too much use of plastic bags has caused serious white pollution, our govenment encourages us to use environment-friendly shopping bags. These bags are made of a variety of material that can be easily treated when they become rubbish. Besides, they can be reused. More and more people in China have realized the advantages of such bags and started using them. I believe that the wide use of these shopping bags can greatly improve our environment. This is one of the many steps we are to make our country an even cleaner place.
Yours, Li Hua
亲爱的戴维，
我很高兴你已经注意到我们的努力对环境保护的努力。谢谢您的关心。过多使用塑料袋已经造成了严重的白色污染，我们的*鼓励我们使用环保购物袋。这些塑料袋是由各种材料制成的，它们可以在垃圾变成垃圾时容易处理。此外，他们可以重复使用。在*，越来越多的人已经意识到了这些袋子的优点并开始使用它们。我相信这些购物袋的广泛应用可以大大改善我们的环境。这是我们为使我们的国家更清洁的地方之一。
你的`，李华
a number of+复数，谓动用复数;the number of+复数，则用单数。
neither…nor…连接两个并列主语时，以第二个名词为准。
more than one+复数名词，谓动为单数。
kind，form，type+of+名词，以kind，form，type的数为准。
a series/species/portion+of+名词，用单数。 many a+单数，谓动用单数。名词+and+名词表示一种概念时，用单数。
neither of+复数，谓动用单数。
从句做主语，谓动用单数。
an average(total)of+复数后用复数，the average(total)of+复数后用单数。
a body of+复数，谓动用单数。
这些规则只是其中常考的一部分，其他的还有待于大家进行总结。总之，熟练地掌握这些规则，应付主谓一致类的考题就会很容易了。
D.动词错误的发现与解决
我们首先来看20xx年1月的第80题：But perhaps we should look at both sides of the coin before arriving hasty conclusions.本题中所考查的是短语动词。英语中有许多的短语动词，是很难从字面上判断其意义的。其中与介词构成短语的动词是最常见的。例如本题中的arrive，必须与at搭配成为短语动词之后才能与conclusion搭配。我们在分析题目的时候，发现有动宾搭配的时候，应该考虑该动词是否是一个短语动词，并进而分析构成该短语动词的介词有无遗漏。对于短语动词的熟悉是一个长期积累的过程，需要随时总结与记忆。以下是六级考试中常见到的短语动词：
account for, add up to, back up, break down, break away from, bleak out, break up, break in, break off, bring about, “bring up, bring out, bring down, build up, call off, call for, call on, carry out, check in, clear up, come off, come around, count on, cut down, cut off, do away with, dwell on, fall back on, fall out, get over, get out of, get at, give out, give up, give off, hang on, hold back, keep back from, keep up with, lay off, lay down, live up to, look into , look forward to, look over, make up, make out, pass away, put up with ,role out, run out of, set about, take over, take up, take in, take off, turn up, turn out, work out等。
还有一种常考的动词的用法就是语态。如20xx年1月第79题：One is surely justitied in his concern for the money and resources that they are poured into the space exploration.在本题中，由于从句的主语they与pour的关系是主动的，因而不可以用被动语态。在所分析的文字中包含谓语动词，那么应该分析是否是这方面的问题。其中应该重点分析主语与谓语动词的关系是主动还是被动。
E.连接词错误的发现与解决
我们首先来看20xx年6月的第73题：However.a second person thougt that this was more a question of civilized behavior as good manners.本题所考查的就是比较连接词的用法。从前文的more我们就可以看出，下文的as是不恰当的，正确的答案应是比较连接词than。一般来说，比较连接词所考查的重点集中在88与than的用法上。句意中是否还有比较意义是很容易辨别的，我们一旦觉察到句子有比较的意思，就应考虑是否是as与than的用法混淆。
此外定语从句的连接词也是要特别注意的。我们看 20xx年6月的第74题：Instead，this other person told us a story，it he said was quite well known.在这里，句子的后半段很明显是一个非限制性的定语从句，所以应将it改为which。非限制性的定语从句的连接词在*几年的考试中反复出现，应该引起我们的重视。解决此类问题的方法是。凡是发现有复合句的.分析对象，首先就要考虑从句的连接词。首先看是否有连接词，其次看连接词是否正确，尤其是which与 that的不同应用。 F.语言环境类错误的发现与解决
从历年的考题来看，语言环境类的错误是最有章可循
的。这类错误一般是一行中的关键词与上下文所体现出来的意思完全相反。例如20xx年6月第72题：A well—man. nered person…walks down a street he or she is constantly un-aware of others.本句的文意是一个有礼貌的人在街上走的时候是不会旁若无人的。而句中的unaware明显与句意是不符的。此类题的解决也较简单，那就是将不符合文意的词改为它的反义词即可。
对于这六种以外的其他题型的特点和解决方法，我们就不在这里讨论了，如前所述它们考到的机会较少，同时也缺乏技巧性，解决它们的关键就是在*时的训练中对它们的熟悉程度了。
The undergraduate, who is on his way to a job interview, is stunned after hearing a ridiculous condition: the position is only for the man born in the year of dog. More ironically, a dog is eager to try. Conspicuously, that is a horrible depiction concerning the discrimination in job market. Over the past years, all kinds of discriminations(改为discrimination,它是一个不可数名词) have (has) been condemned or made illegal, but one insidious form continue to thrive: some harsh conditions some employers imposed when recruit new,(句子成分不清,建议改为some harsh conditions are imposed on the employers when a company recruit new) ranging from height to household registration. So, what cause(改为causes) these problems? Firstly, thetremendous number of graduates- still mounting each year- make organizations powerless to screen out right candidates. (本句话说服力不够强) For which(改为this) reason, numerous bizarre approaches have come out to find “the right person”. Moreover, the current state of affairs may have been encouraged by lack of severe penalty and punishment to those arrogant organizations who(改为which) shrink the obligation of selecting eligible staff. A good case in point is one of my roommates, with excellent performance in the job interview, failed to obtain the occupation(本句话可改为who performs excellently in the job interview, but fails to obtain the occupation,若要按作者的写法,应该在failed之前加but,用来连接两个简单句,且将failed改为fail) as a consequence of inadequate height.The clear message is that we should get moving to launch a war against those irresponsible companies. Just as rejecting those duty-shrinking corporations, making complaint to administrator as long as we meet this situation.(整句话没有谓语动词,且administrator使用不当,本句话可改为:To reject the duty-shrinking corporations, we should report the situation to the relevant authorities) More significantly, the authorities should charge with the obligation of laying down associate-effective discipline which seems appropriate in the light of current situation. By these methods, we will surely get through this tough period before long.
With the gloomy prospect of returning to school, many students could suffer from post-holiday syndrome,which refers to a general feeling of depression before returning to campus life, which is caused by irregular lifestyles during the holiday.Symptoms include fatigue,lack of appetite and concentration,irritability and a feeling of helplessness.
Various reasons can account for it.But most important of all,a large number of students tend to overindulge themselves in eating,merrymaking and playing around during the holidays,which makes it difficult to adjust to their routine study schedule and life pace on the campus.
My suggestions to deal with this syndrome are as follows.First,exercising and sticking to a normal schedule over the holidays will make a difference and nip post-holiday syndrome in the bud.Besides,it pays to return a few days earlier before the semester starts.The early return seems to have kept the holiday blues at bay.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Post-holiday Syndrome Among Students.You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
——大学英语六级考试技巧 (菁华3篇)
1、词汇的积累和熟练
词汇是参加任何英语考试的基础，特别是作为全国大学英语级别考试中初级水*的六级考试。其实对于六级大纲词汇所要求的4700个单词，大家没必要全部都记，要坚持两个原则：去掉你已经掌握的单词，重点记忆核心词。
词汇书大家可以根据自身情况选择，因为现在一些真题会送高频词汇小册子，那个其实是完全够用的，比如我当时用的巨微英语《六级真题逐句精解》，就赠送了2000个高频词汇小册子。更重要的是，书籍的6套逐句精解逐句注释真题文章中的核心词汇，包含音标、词性、词义拓展，甚至每个单词后面都有例句，就用这个记单词，完全不需要查字典，效率很高。
词汇记忆一定要“精”，做到“四到”：手到（拼写），口到（朗读），心到（专心）和脑到（分析构词法，成串记忆，考点）。我当时将巨微英语送的词汇小册子一直随身带着，有时间就会拿出来看。要抓住一切零碎时间，早点儿把单词吃透，单词掌握了才能进行后面的复*。也要注意在*时的阅读，听力，练*，甚至生活中用心捕捉和六级单词和相关单词，特别是某些六级词汇的搭配，这些词汇很可能出现在你的六级试卷中。
2、在阅读中掌握语法
尽管现在单独作为考试题型的语法结构越来越少，可是在任何一个六级和六级的考试题型中，语句的理解还是以语法结构为基础，比如说阅读题，光知道单词意思不知道语法结构，理解起来也是很困难的。此外翻译和写作这两个主观题，也很考验大家对语法的掌握，但是语法到底应该怎么复*呢？在备考六级的时候再来看语法书是不太恰当的，一是时间很紧张，你来不及看那么厚的语法书；二是语法书里面的语法结构，你考试中只会遇到一小部分，这样复*会白费很多时间。
我的建议是用真题来掌握语法，具体怎么做呢？通过精读阅读文章，把阅读文章中出现的语法句型全部吃透然后掌握，这个过程是很费时间的，我当时用的巨微英语《六级真题逐句精解》，里面特别好的一点是，6套逐句精解一句一句分析句子语法结构，难句还是图解呢。
3、注意剖析试题答案
在做阅读过程中，不能只注意正确选项，也要找出错误选项的错误原因，这样才能掌握做题技巧，防止下次再出现类似的错误。做完题后，要把选项在原文中出现的位置标记出来，这对了解六级阅读的出题思路和特点也会有一定的帮助。巨微英语六级真题·逐句精解一书的12套真题解析，答案分析绝对劲道。
一、词汇还是记不住，怎么办？
首先，如果到现在还没办法消化老师的词汇记忆法或者觉得没有效果的同学，应该果断地选择按照自己的方法来，方法没有好不好，只有是不适合自己，即使是死记硬背，就抓紧时间背单词，反复记忆。
其次，每天的时间和精力花费在单词上的不宜过多，一个小时足矣。
第三，这个时间段应该开始做真题练*，真题阅读是记忆单词非常好的材料。毕竟四六级对单词量的考察主要就是集中在阅读上。所以直接攻核心的东西，将阅读真题作为巩固单词记忆的主要工具，第一遍阅读时遇到不会记不起的单词都标注出来，查出意思记熟背牢。第二轮阅读真题时回忆单词，记不住的查看上轮的标注。这样重复回忆和记忆，真题中常出现的高频词汇也就掌握了。注意：标注时最好不要在原文上，这样有助于回忆的效果。
二、考前30天，如何选择练*题？
第一、时间充足，有余力的同学可以做些模拟题，预测题，然后进行真题的训练，真题为主，注意好时间的分配。
第二、时间很紧的同学就集中攻克真题，选择至少*六年的真题，好好安排每天练*的数量和时间，争取把真题都吃透练烂。当然，新东方在线课堂上有各单项的练*班，建议大家可以根据自己的薄弱项进行选择性报班，多听课多练*肯定帮助很大。
第三、考前可以用模拟题来找感觉，对错不重要，注意分配时间，速度和过程中的自我调节。
三、考前30天，如何高效利用真题进行复*？
第一、可以将真题分类，比如有10套真题：
A）可以拿出其中的6份来，拆开，进行各部分的练*用，比如听完阅读课程后，就做真题阅读部分；真题听力部分拿来做每天的听力练*材料。作文部分进行写作练*，对答案，背模板，背范文等。
B）另外四份留着完整的做，严格按照考试时间来完成。错误的地方要弄明白，查漏补缺。
第二、建议同学们完整做完一套真题后，就是用彩色笔在原文中标记出答案出处，然后，需要做的工作是：
1、答案是如何进行同义替换，是名词、动词还是副词等
2、错误选项是从哪个角度设计的，能否在原文找到错误选项的出处。你会发现错误选项往往是拼凑，或是在定位处的其他地方，或是原文中根本没有出现，或是歪曲原意，例如胡乱比较等。
3、原文出现的这句话具有什么特点：是含有转折词but，yet，however；还是比较句；或是结论句、因果句等。
4、看一下每个题目都固定在那一段落出题，并且是段落的那个位置。
5、*几年都会考什么题型的题。
6、每个题型所对应的解题方法是什么
7、原文结构是否明白，中心是否突出
8、作者用的写作手法是什么
9、文章还有没有难词或难句子。
一、审题立意
大学英语六级作文的题型一般是标题作文、主题句作文或情景、图表作文等等，去年六级作文考试有书信和记叙文，但基本都属于命题作文范畴。对于命题作文，审题立意是写好作文至关重要的一步。所谓审题，就是要看清题意，确定文章的中心思想和主题，并围绕中心思想组织材料。也就是通过分析作文题给出的标题、主题旬或情景，找出关键词或中心词，明确写作要求，是写哪方面的内容，既包括题材上的要求，也包括体裁上的要求。如果不审题就随便下笔，想一句写一句，内容离题，即使再好的再华丽的再精心构思的词句表达也无济于事。另一方面，六级写作的目的是测试学生用英语书面表达思想的初步能力，并不是测试你母语创作能力，而且为了便于作文评卷有一尽量统一的标准，出题方式无论怎样变化，六级作文都可以归纳为三段式，有的甚至给出三段的段首句。其目的就是让学生们在统一主题下的写作要点、思维和方式尽可能地同一化和统一化。鉴于此，我们应清楚六级写作没有太大的自由发挥空间。在构思段落之前一定要仔细斟酌标题、主题句和段首字，找出关键词从而确定写作的方向和范围，而且还应记住要尽量缩小这个范围，不能脱离要求任意展开，那样属于跑题。
二、段落构思
文章的段落，是文章的基本组成部分，一篇好的文章需要精心的段落构思和合理的段落安排，根据不同的题材确定不同的段落写作顺序。六级作文从结构上看，一般由三部分组成：引言部分（introductory part；展开部分（bodypart）；结尾部分（ending part），而且每段往往只有一个主题，段中各支持句围绕明确的主题，层层展开论证并服务于主题句。整篇文章也是层层推进，环环相扣，条理分明，完整统一。下面进一步说明每一部分的具体写作技巧与要求：
首先，引言部分introductory part
文章开头很重要，关系到全篇文章，一定要认真考虑好如何写好第一句。一般紧扣主题，开门见山，直接入题。如果已给出段首句，则要考虑如何跟开头连接好。在实际写作中，主要有以下几种开头方式。
定义法：即用一句话或几句话来**说明题中的关键词，给出关键词的定义。多用于给出一简单题目的标题作文。直接切入主题。也就是直截了当地揭示文章的主题或写作原由，如已给出每一段的中文提示，可直接翻译提示中每一段的中心思想，作为开头。
提问法：用疑问句或设问句开头，紧接着提出自己对这个问题的看法或直接点明主题，这种方法如果使用得当，能够激起读者往下读的兴趣，以便找出答案。以故事背景开头，交待时间、地点、人物及背景，然后在这个背景下引出正文。这种方法多用于记叙文，使读者一开始就产生鲜明视觉形象。引用法。即引用名人名言或谚语等作为文章的开头，指出阅读的内容范围。
其次，主题部分body part
篇章写作不仅应层次清楚，而且主次也要分明i任何文章都有主体部分，即文章的精华部分。学生在这部分的.写作错误五花八门，或者段落内容缺乏统一性，或者句与句之间缺少连贯性，层次混乱，信息的表达经常是跳跃式的想到什么写什么，内容空洞，言之无物，缺乏严密的逻辑性。针对这些错误，写主体段应注意以下几点要求。要紧扣开头段提出的主题思想，突出中心。围绕主题句用一组意思连贯而且完整的句子展开文章，切记各展开句是能起到说明、支持或阐述主题的句子并服务于主题，全文保持统一性，也就是我们通常所说的“切题”。主体段取材必须精练典型，系统而完整。根据内容需要和字数的规定，确定要点的详与略后，选择正确的、典型的、具有说服力的事实、例子、数据和论据等说明解释并扩充主题。主体段要与开头段和结尾段有内在的必然归宿，要顺其自然地过渡，使用好承上启下的连接词或句子，防止突然转折。另外，主体段的句与句之间也要逐步展开，通顺连贯，符合一定的逻辑关系。最后，结尾部分ending part
文章如何结尾关系到写作的成败。好的结尾不仅在形式上起到面龙点睛的效果，而且在内容上读者明其宗旨，解其寓意。一般结尾段的写法有以下几种；总结式，即在上文所述事实和论据的基础上，对全文进行归纳、总结得出结论，使读者对文章的主题或作者的观点有个更完整而清晰的理解。首尾呼应式，即对引言段所提出的同题给出解决方案，作到首尾呼应，主题突出，结构匀称，使读者对提出的问题有了明确的答案。提问式，这种结尾形式可以引起读者的思考。并起到强调主题的作用。展望式，也就是要提出作者的希望、号召或表示信心和决心，使读者受鼓舞。引语式，引用名人名言，谚语俗语做文章的结尾，使文章更具说服力
三、语言表达
六级作文评分的原则之一就是要从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内容和语言是一个统一体，作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而而内容要通过语言来表达。因此这项测试不仅考察学生所学的英语语言知识，更是考察学生综合运用所学语言知识来正确地表达思想。许多学生词汇、句型知道的确实不少，但却不能熟练自如地运用到写作中，特别是让其在规定的时间里写出一篇象样的文章，不是难以行笔，就是落笔错误百出。分析其原因主要体现在以下三个方面：
（一）词法层次
英语词汇一词多义和同义词现象非常普遍，外延相同而内涵不同的词数量很多。许多学生只知其表面意思，不了解词语的深层的文化以及感情色彩等，出现用词不当的错误。
（二）句法层次
句子中语法错误太多，包括时态、语态、语气以及主谓一致等，如果这些成份的一致关系弄错会使句子逻辑混乱，意义含糊不清。
（三）语言的连贯性
文字连贯，语言流畅是写好作文的基本要求，会给人以美的享受。而内容充实，意思完整是文章连贯流畅的基础，达到这一目标要求学生有较强的语感和语言功底，需要一个长期积累和大量实践的过程。通过对以上写作方法与技巧的探讨，我们不仅了解到其重要性，更应付诸实践。尤其是教师在实际教学中，要加强学生的语言基本功的训练，将阅读教学与写作培养相结合。因为写作是一种语言的输出，阅读是一种输入，只有大量的输入才会有输出。同时也要强调写作技能的训练和实践，采用多种方法调动学生的写作积极性。
——大学英语六级作文400字 (菁华3篇)
现象说明型
要点提示：
1、第一段，描述存在的现象，引起话题。
2、第二段，承上启下，解释这一现象的`原因(原因一、二、三)
3、第三段，给出自己的观点(观点一、二、三)，总结结论。
In recent years / Nowadays / Recently, 描述现象，引起话题 has been brought to public attention. What amazes us most is 表现较为典型的一个方面 .It is true that 对于现象做出的评论 .
There are many reasons explaining 承上启下，解释这一现象的原因 .The main reason is / to begin with 说明原因一 ，What is more / Moreover, 说明原因二 ，Thirdly / In addition, 说明原因三 .As a result / Finally, 讲述导致的结果 .
Considering all these, as for me / in my view / in my opinion 作者的态度/观点/建议 .For one thing, 观点一 For another, 观点二 .In conclusion/In a word / In brief 总结结论 .
一、评分强调一致性
大学英语四、六级考试的作文部分不是自由作文，而是有规定命题的作文。对考生写什么内容有比较明确的要求，用各种明确的方式如提纲、图表、关键词等加以限制，但提纲常用中文给出，以避免考生将提纲中的文字直接抄录进作文。采用有控制的作文也有利于提高评分的一致性。
对作文评分影响最大的是评分过程。同一篇作文，不同的阅卷员可能给出不同的分数。只有保证评分的一致性，才能提高作文阅卷的信度。这个一致性包括阅卷员本人的一致性、阅卷员之间的一致性和阅卷点之间的一致性，要采取一定的`质量控制措施，尽量减少和滤除阅卷员评分的主观性对分数客观性的影响。
二、作文题的评分通常有两种方法
一种是综合法，一种是分析法。分析法是把一篇作文分解为若干要点，如内容、结构、文章连贯性、语法、词汇等，不同的要点也可作不同的加权处理，各要点得分的总和即为全篇得分。综合法是凭阅卷员通读一遍的总体印象打分。综合法的优点是能从总体上把握全文，评卷速度比较快，效率高。
此外，为了提高阅卷的信度也有采用“两读”的方法，即每篇作文由两名阅卷员各自独立评分，若分数差两档以上，由第三名阅卷员重判。考虑到大学英语四、六级考试规模太大，不可能进行两读，因此，通常采用综合法和“一读”的评址椒ǎ然后根据考生的客观题得分进行调整，尽量减少系统误差?
一、评分强调一致性
大学英语四、六级考试的作文部分不是自由作文，而是有规定命题的作文。对考生写什么内容有比较明确的要求，用各种明确的方式如提纲、图表、关键词等加以限制，但提纲常用中文给出，以避免考生将提纲中的文字直接抄录进作文。采用有控制的作文也有利于提高评分的一致性。
对作文评分影响最大的是评分过程。同一篇作文，不同的阅卷员可能给出不同的分数。只有保证评分的一致性，才能提高作文阅卷的信度。这个一致性包括阅卷员本人的一致性、阅卷员之间的一致性和阅卷点之间的一致性，要采取一定的质量控制措施，尽量减少和滤除阅卷员评分的主观性对分数客观性的影响。
二、作文题的'评分通常有两种方法
一种是综合法，一种是分析法。分析法是把一篇作文分解为若干要点，如内容、结构、文章连贯性、语法、词汇等，不同的要点也可作不同的加权处理，各要点得分的总和即为全篇得分。综合法是凭阅卷员通读一遍的总体印象打分。综合法的优点是能从总体上把握全文，评卷速度比较快，效率高。
此外，为了提高阅卷的信度也有采用“两读”的方法，即每篇作文由两名阅卷员各自独立评分，若分数差两档以上，由第三名阅卷员重判。考虑到大学英语四、六级考试规模太大，不可能进行两读，因此，通常采用综合法和“一读”的评址椒ǎ然后根据考生的客观题得分进行调整，尽量减少系统误差?
——大学英语六级作文汇总二十篇
题目：
Self-help Traveling
1、越来越多的大学生选择自助游
2、也会带来一些问题
3、我的看法
范文：
Self-help traveling enjoys great popularity among college students today. The reason may be that they can save a lot of money by arranging the routes, booking cheaper hotels and deciding cheaper transportation tools all by themselves.
Convenient and economical as self-help traveling sounds, they still have some potential problems. Perhaps the most important one is the safety problem. Being alone without a group or a tour guide, a traveler may be helpless in face of danger, i.e. robbery, wild animal attacks, etc. In addition, they are more likely to be at risk of getting lost when traveling alone in a city strange to them or in the remote countryside.
In my view, self-help traveling can be exciting and challenging and is worth trying. However, before setting out alone, travelers should make good preparations.Besides, they should bear safety and security in mind all the time and keep in touch with their friends or relatives.Thus, they can enjoy both safety and pleasure of exploring different places.
The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. In order to "seize" a seat, I go there very early every morning. Just because of this, a special story happened to me one day. I learned a lesson in the reading-room that I will remember all my life.
It took place on a Monday morning in October. After occupying a seat in the reading-room, I went to fetch a bottle of boiled water. When I returned to the reading-room, I found that a girl student was sitting on my seat. Immediately I ran to her and shouted at her angrily, "Why have you taken my seat? Go away.!" Everybody in the reading-room looked up from their books at me unfriendly. At once I brushed with shame. I rushed out of the reading-room with my book. I can never forget those "eyes".
This is the lesson I've learned in the reading-room: I shall respect other people.
我们学校阅览室里的座位不是很多。
为了“抢”座位，我每天早晨很早就去阅览室。
正是因为这个，我经历了一件很特殊的事。
我在阅览室里学到一个终生难忘的教训。
这件事发生在十月的一个星期一的早晨。
占了一个座位后，我就去打瓶开水，回来时却发现一位女生正坐在我的位置上。
我立即跑了过去，生气地嚷道：“为什么坐我的座位?让开!”阅览室里所有的人都抬起头，异样地看着我。
我很羞愧，脸一下子就红了。
我拿起书，冲出了阅览室。
我永远都不会忘记那些眼睛。
这就是我在阅览室里得到的教训：一定要尊重别人。
At present, some colleges and universities permit their students to select lecturers of some courses by themselves. After all, some teachers are very boring and some required subjects are probably not very practical.
Several fundamental factors are considered when students selecting their lecturers. First and foremost, a good instructor should be able to interest and motivate their classes. Students will learn more quickly and thoroughly from a teacher who makes the subject matter come alive for them. What is more, an outstanding tutor should spend time and energy organizing and preparing the lessons.
Good as selecting lecturers is, it also has its own disadvantages. On the one hand, if students can choose their own curriculum, they can generally do better in subjects that interest them. On the other hand, given the high pressure to make good grades, many students will misuse the opportunity and naturally choose the easier subjects rather than the harder ones. It is high time that we attached importance to this issue.
第一段
I assume that you are familiar with the words of sb, who once said, “谚语.”
Definitely, 对谚语的解释. (记得最好用not only…but also…)
It is obvious that……中心句
第二段
Simple as sb’s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of sth.
why does sth play an indispensable role in our life ?
sth enables us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly.
……the more…the more…(自己扩展一句)
Quite a few examples can be given to prove the importance of sth, however, I can think of no better illustration than the following one: how could 例子人物 do … if he failed to do sth ?(反问句，如果谁不做sth他就不可能成功之类的)
第三段
From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of sth.
Accordingly，we should …… and always bear in mind that sth can ……(我们应该怎么样并且记住sth可以怎么样)
“自己编个谚语。” A famous philosopher also once said.
It has long been accepted that a smile is the best language.The truth of a smile is that it is like a seed that can grow into a towering tree and at long last it has deep and profound effect on people’s lives.
At the moment we get in trouble,get misunderstood or give thanks,a smile is more helpful than any other expression.Many daily incidents can probe the strength/power of smile.To begin with,we should always smile to ourselves,so as to keep optimistic when in difficulty.At the same time,smiling to others is necessary,too.Sometimes,we may face misunderstandings that are hard to explain clearly sim*** bu words.Then, a smile can show them the genuine sincerity to win their trust.Besides, smile is a worldwide language to say “thanks” and can bring pleasant feelings to others.
In a word,perhaps the best example of universally understood body language is smile.As the old saying goes,smile to others,and sooner or later they will smile back to you.
one evening, my mother called me into the kitchen when she was preparing supper. i saw blood dripping from her cut finger. i immediately bandaged her, and it was then that i noticed my mothers hands――the hands, which had brought up three children.
her hands like the dry bark of an old oak tree, wrinkled, rough and hard. i could not believe that they were the hands of a lady in the early thirties. they looked like the hands of a woodsman.i knelt beside her and usked her how her hands got like that. she told me that it was the fault of the war. when the japanese invaded our city, she and father fled inland. they were wretched with no money, no job, no friends. mother had to do all kinds of hard work: washing, knitting, and sewing. yet deuth was ulways hovering over them. the surrender made mother and father end their long suffering.
after mother finished her story, i had a mied feeling that i could hardly control my tears from falling. i hated the japanese invaders. i hated war. but on the other hand, i liked my mother all the more. i kissed her hands with u deep feeling.
表示事实、现状
1）We cannot ignore the fact that．．．
2）No one can deny the fact that．．．
3）There is no denying the fact that．．．
4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in．
5）However，that’s not the case．
例如：
We cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings with it the problems of pollution．To solve these problems， we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution．The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment．
8．表示比较
1）Compared with A，B．．．
2）I prefer to read rather than watch TV．
3）There is a striking contrast between them．
例如：
Compared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable．Firstly，they do not consume natural resources of petroleum．Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem．Last but not least，they contribute to people’s health by giving them due physical exercise．
表示数量
1）It has increased（decreased）from．．．to．．．
2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000．
3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15％ compared with that of January．
例如：
With the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of people’s income spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased．
再如：
From the graph listed above，itcan be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 20xx．
注：“From the graph listed above，it can be seen that”见句式12。考生将句式9和句式12结合在一起，便可较好地写出20xx年6月CET －4、6短文写作的第一段。
表示看法
1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth．
2）People have different opinions on this problem．
3）People take different views of（on）the question．
4）Some people believe that．．．Others argue that．．．
例如：
People have different attitudes towards failure．Some believe that failure leads to success．
Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor．However， others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers．
再如：
Do“lucky numbers eally bring good luck？Different people have different views on it．
注：一个段落有时很适宜以问句开始，考生应掌握这一写作方法。
表示结论
1）In short，it can be said that ．．．
2）It may be briefly summed up as follows．
3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ．．．
例如：
From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved．
注：例句1可用于任何一个段落的'结论句；例句3则多用文章结论段的第一句。
套语
1）It’s well known to us that ．．．
2）As is known to us，．．．
3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about．
4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that ．．．
5）As aproverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way．
例如：
As is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world outside campus．
The reason for this is obvious．Nowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an“ivory tower‘s college students，we must get in touch with the world outside the campus．Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we graduate．
再如：
Does it pay to be honest？This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.
中心句放开端
文章中心句是整个文章的主题和写作围绕的中心，通常应该放在段落的.开端，这样一方面能够让阅卷老师一眼看出文章表达的主旨意思，起到开门见山的作用;另一方面可以使文章条理层次更加清晰，逻辑性强，文章的整体结构合理。中心句在作文中可以起到承接上下文的作用，放在段尾也可以起到总结全文的作用。这一方法对于写作初学者来说还是有一定困难的，因此在六级考试中，为了减少不必要的错误和损失，大家尽量将中心句放到文章的开头以保万无一失。
关键词要具体
文章的中心句一般是通过关键词来表现和限制文章的主旨思想的，所以为了突出主题，关键词需要尽量写得具体些。这里对“具体”的要求主要体现在两个方面：一方面是要具体到能限制和区分文章段落层次的发展;另一方面是要具体到能说明段落发展的方法。精确仔细地突出关键词是清楚地表达文章主旨、写好段落中心句的重要前提之一，这对考生来说有一定难度。
设问扩充内容
中心句及关键词确定后，文章的大概框架已经清晰了，这时候就需要选择和主题有关的信息和素材来填充这个框架。实质上，针对关键词测试每一个所选择的素材就是一个分类的过程。有一种常用的行文方法就是句子展开前加以设问，然后解答，即设问-解答(why-because)的方法，利用问题引出自己需要的话题再加以解答表现自己的观点，同时紧紧围绕主题。
所以，要想写出一篇高质量的六级英语作文，就要从中心句、关键词以及设问扩充内容三方面出发，当然还不要忘记词汇量和语法上要有一定的积累，把技巧运用于文章中，你的文章必然会让读者眼前一亮。希望上述的内容对你备考六级英语作文写作有所帮助。
彩票
Why Do People Like to Buy Lotteries?
Nowadays, there exist all kinds of lotteries in our society, such as welfare lottery, sports lottery, computer lottery, and so forth. Anyone, whether men or women, the young or the old, may buy lottery tickets. But why do so many people like buying them?
——大学英语六级的作文(精选5篇)
A smile is the shortest distance between two people Mark Twain once said, The human race has one really effective weapon, and that is laughter.A smile will unconsciously pull short distance between hearts, which is the charm of a smile. So never stop smiling, even when you are sad, for someone might fall in love with your smile.
Undoubtedly, it is smile that keeps us continually shortening the distance among people. When you fall down, a smile from others will bring you the power to stand up. Besides, smile is a name card which will make the people around you feel comfortable and pave the way for you to make good friends. When you feel disappointed with the life and get heartbroken with the love, just smile, its a good medicine for your hurt soul. Were there no smile, never would we taste a happy and healthy life.
Consequently, from what has been discussed above, it can be safely concluded that a smile is beneficial for us bridge gaps of social interaction and sweep disorders of human communication.
Ever since the birth of it, the computer has largely changed human being’s life and there has been a hot debate about its effects on humans. Undeniably, computers have taken the place of humans in many areas and it seems that computers begin to think like man, but this does not necessarily lead to the danger that man will think like computers.
The reasons, in my opinion, are as follows. Firstly, when computers release human from repetitive tasks, humans themselves can spend more time on creative works, such as scientific research, which require imagination and cannot be completed by computers. Meanwhile, thanks to computers, humans get more spare time with their friends and family, which enhances their happiness. Moreover, even though computers can work automatically, the premise is that the program, which is written by humans, has been installed in it.
In conclusion, humans, unlike computers, have creative ability, emotional desires and social bounds. Thus, I don’t think that there will be the danger that man will begin to think like the computer.
Online Learning
Perhaps there is something you don't know how to doTTn the past, you might turn to a friend or a relative, attend a night class or go to the local library to find the answer. But at present a lot of websites are springing np to offer free practical advice on these subjects aod actually anything else you can imagine.
Why is online learning so popular among people? The answer is obvious: online learning is nuich more convenient. In the past, you perhaps had to spend pienp of lime learning m a night class or going to the library to look for relevant materials. However, now when you run into a problem, yotijust need to click the mouse, then a lot of related websites will appear in front of you.
However, not all the materials on the Internet are correct; sometimes they are false. Thus, if you want to lcam something from the Internet, you should make sure what you will leam is completely correct.
The seats in our school reading-room are not enough for all the students. Many people get there very early to "seize" a seat every day. So do I. One day a "special" thing happened to me. And I learned a lesson that I shall never forget.
It happened on a Wednesday morning last January, just before our final examation. I got to the reading-room very early to occupy a seat. I put a book on the desk and then went to have breakfast. But when I hurried back into the reading-room, I found someone was sitting on the seat which I had occupied in advance. I ran to him immediatly and shouted at him angrily, "Go away. It's my seat." Everyone raised their eyes and stared at me unfriendly. My face turned red and I felt ashamed of myself. I took my book and fled helter-skelter before so many eyes.
I dared not go to the reading-room for several days. I learned a lesson in the reading-room. Since then I have been keeping the lesson in mind: To be polite to everyone.
我们学校阅览室里的座位不多。
每天很多人都很早就去“抢”座，我也是如此。
一天，我经历了一件特殊的事，并从中学到了令我终生难忘的教训。
这件事发生在去年一月份一个星期三的早晨，就在期末考试之前。
我很早就到阅览室占了一个座位，然后去吃早饭。
但当我匆忙返回到阅览室时，却发现一个人正坐在我占的座位上。
我立即跑过去，对他生气地嚷道：“走开，这是我的`座位。”阅览室里所有的人都抬起头来，异样地看着我。
我的脸一下子变红了，我为自己的行为感到惭愧。
在众目睽睽之下，我拿起书狼狈地跑了出去。
一连好几天，我都不敢去阅览室。
我在阅览室里得到了一个教训。
从那以后，我一直铭记着这个教训：礼貌地对待每个人。
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the use of robots. Try to imagine what will happen when more and more robots take the place of human beings in industry as well as people’s daily lives. You are required to write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
【参考范文】
With science and technology developing, an increasing number of people prefer to study online instead of attending school. Indeed, e-learning has become a common phenomenon.
There are two factors leading to this condition. For one thing, with the speeding up of modern life rhythm, the internet, to a large degree, plays a dominant part in our daily life. Thus, there is no doubt that it offers us many advantages and makes our life more convenient and efficient, ranging from online meal booking to reading online. Additionally, it is a more advanced approach to access to essential and useful information. By clicking the mouse , any stories and information what I want at any given time and site can be accessed. Consequently, that’s the reason why a large number of people prefer to choose the way of studying online.
Admittedly, much useless and false information abounds on the internet. It is advisable for us to reading more carefully and critically.
