雅思写作优秀(10)份

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  雅思写作优秀 1

  Just over the hot summer, we ushered in the cool autumn.

  This Saturday and my mother to the country's grandmother to play. We sat in the car, bursts of cool wind blowing, I can not help but hit a chills.

  To the grandmother, I looked up at the blue sky, looked a lot higher than in the past. To the left to see a large field endless, rice becomes golden golden, from afar like a golden ocean. A gust of wind blowing, that endless rice field will play a golden wave, the ear seems to hear the sound of rustling. I walked forward, the red sorghum raised the black and red black and red face, like the joy of singing, I continue to move forward to see the piece of cotton, this cotton can not wait to come out from the shell , Like a white and fat kid.

  I walked slowly on the ridge, next to the ridge with a lot of white wild chrysanthemum flowers, those wild chrysanthemum some budding, and some just blooming shame like a little girl. Fields with eggplant, corn and so mature.

  Ah! Autumn is really busy, it brings people the joy of harvest!

  雅思写作优秀 2

  Autumn with a golden, walked the pace of light, quietly came to our side.

  The sky is blue and blue, blue is like a sea of water, like a just washed sapphire. A blossoming white clouds like a small fish in the swimming, really like a beautiful ink painting.

  We came to the orchard, the apple grinned, as if to welcome us to taste the fruit, the pear fragrance to our feet hooked, pomegranate grinned mouth exposed a ruby.

  We came to the field, the autumn girl has been here into the golden yellow, the whole field into a golden ocean. Corn exposed a grain of yellow gems, sorghum laughed waist, farmers uncle in the harvest of rice, rice seems to say: "farmers uncle to raise our small, thank them for their parenting,

  Now we can finally repay the peasant uncle, and the farmer uncle is also proud of their own results.

  Autumn is really beautiful! I love this charming fall.

  雅思写作优秀 3

  Task:Discuss the advantages and disadvantages that pocket money brings for the growth of children.

  思路解析:

  好处:

  1. 支付日常所需。

  2. 培养理财能力。

  坏处:

  1. 培养懒惰和啃老思维。

  2. 购买垃圾食品,影响健康。

  3. 购买娱乐和玩具,影响学*。

  4. 携带金钱的小孩容易成为社会犯罪袭击目标。

  参考范文:

  In a fast-paced age full of intense competition, parents have become used to giving children pocket money for supporting daily life, and whether the children are considerable enough to make correct use of these money or not has been an heated social issue. Some people think money spending can build up some positive personalities like self-reliance and economic mindfulness. Others, however, hold an opposed view that money abuse might be very risky. In my opinon, I am in favor of the former, and I will explore possible reasons as below.

  Firstly, Pocket money provides more opportunties for children to be engaged in real-world socilaztion. For example, when paying for bus fares, food, stationery and books, students would consciously observe, compare and learn basic social products and services, as well as talk and listen to bus drivers, shop clerks and other customers. These experience by spending money helps to foster independence of students, from self-care conciousness to decision-making ability to interpersonal skills. Moreover, using small money process imparts students to manage money,learning making budgeting, calculating and significative investing——in short, obtaining financial knowledge in advance. It will also give children a certain freedom to select what they want, make them aware of the rules about the equivalent exchange. Without pocket money for students, they may ignore banking knowledge, have no sensitivity of economy and might fall into unbalanced budget planning, deficit and even credit crisis.

  However, the potential demerits caused by money misusing should never be ignored. For one thing, there is always a big concern that by money, children with lack of self-control or mature mind can have an easy access to fastfood, soft drinks and candy, all of which containing high-level fat, calories and sugar. The comsuption of these junk traps children into chronic physical problems like obesity, high-blood presssure and heart disease. Besides, the most worrying aspect is that children are very likely to misspend money on movies, concerts of pop music, and Video games like Nintendo or Playstation, these entertainment will distract students from the aim of studying.

  In conclusion, I believe it is reasonable to give limited amount of money to children, because it can teach them social skills and finance-planning mind. However, much pocekt money beyond daily basic costs is problematic, for it might result in health problems and an amusement-oriented mind.

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  雅思写作优秀 4

  In the last few years, with the development of society, working in a place all along has already become history. People can choose their job freely, so, people have different expectation for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, and some people rather than change the job frequently. This dispute has brought our attention.

  First of all, the free choice of the job is the inevitable outcome of the social development. People can give play to their different ability in different work positions. To a person gifted in many ways, it is very challenging to often change the job. For example, a person has very outstanding ability, in the specific field. He can change his job after working some time in one place, in order to seek kind development. Moreover, a person has very good ability in many aspects, then, He can often change and work, in order to seek the feeling of freshness or raise the quality of life.

  However, to some people or some specific posts, it is impossible to often change the job. For instance, an accountant, he only grasps the knowledge and experience of accounting, he can work perfectly within the specific limits, and then changing job is unnecessary to him. Furthermore, in order to make the scientific payoffs, some scientists dedicate themselves to the scientific undertaking.

  So, I think whether people should change the job frequently, should depend on their personal situation or their working position. As a saying goes, it is one-sided to treat the question in isolation.

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  Some information in films, books and on the Internet has bad influence on

  young people and even on society. Some people think such information should be controlled. Give your opinion on both sides of view use your own experience and examples.

  雅思写作优秀 5

  The pursuit of happiness has long been the dream of generations of human beings. They have always been puzzled Get Word ("puzzled"); by the essence of happiness. What is happiness? Is it closely related to one’s economic success? Will one’s financial success lead to happiness directly? Personally Get Word ("Personally"), I don’t agree that one’s economic success is the only prerequisite of one’s happiness in life.

  对幸福的追求一直都是人类世世代代的梦想,尽管人类一直困惑于幸福的真谛。幸福是什么?幸福和经济的成功有密切联系吗?个人经济上的成功能够直接带来幸福吗?就个人而言,我不认为经济上的成功是人类幸福的唯一前提。

  Happiness may fall into different categories Get Word ("categories");. An old saying goes like this: “One man’s meat is another man’s poison”. Happiness may mean being a successful and respected leader of a company, or a stable and comfortable job in a large international company, or a big flat downtown, a fantastic set of furniture, etc. However, happiness can also be a harmonious and peaceful family, or a hospitable and considerate friend, or just a smile, a gesture, a hint. In fact, happiness may be composed of anything you could ever think of. At least, we may have two types of happiness: [wv]spiritualGetWord("hospitable and considerate friend, or just a smile, a gesture, a hint. In fact, happiness may be composed of anything you could ever think of. At least, we may have two types of happiness: [wv]spiritual"); happiness and materialistic happiness.

  幸福有很多种。俗话说得好,“一个人的美食可能是另一个人的毒药”。幸福可能意味着成为一个成功的受人尊敬的领袖,或是一份稳定舒适的大型跨国公司的工作,又或是市区的大房子、一套漂亮的家具等等。然而,幸福也可以是一个和谐*静的家庭,或是一个体贴热情的朋友,或者只是一个微笑、一个手势、一个暗示。事实上,幸福可以是你能够想到的任何事情。至少,我们可以有两种幸福:精神幸福和物质幸福。

  One’s materialistic happiness is dependant on one’s economic success, though not completely. Without a strong and steady economic background, one could never imagine an easy and simple life, let alone an affluent and luxurious one. If you aren’t able to afford a house, a car, or even a book, anybody would be horrified at the mere mention of this kind of life. Definitely, some people will feel happy right away if their basic demands for life are satisfied. However, we have to admit that these people still need to be successful materialisticallyGetWord("materialistically"); to some degree.

  一方面,一个人的物质幸福依赖于经济上的成功,尽管不是完全依赖。没有稳定的经济后盾,很难想象如何过上轻松简单的生活,更不用说富庶奢侈的生活了。如果买不起房子、车,甚至是一本书,任何人提到这种生活都会害怕。当然,有一些人只要基本的`生活需求得到满足就可以立刻感到很幸福。但是我们仍然必须承认,这些人也需要某种意义上的经济成功。

  On the other hand, one’s success in economy may not necessarily lead to one’s spiritual happiness. As we all know, money doesn’t get you everything and some even say that money is the root of all evilsGetWord("evils");. One’s financial success may be built on the sacrifice of time, health and love, which are the three most essential elements of spiritual happiness. All of us are not new to this picture: a successful business man tasting loneliness alone with a broken heart.

  另一方面,个人经济上的成功不见得能带来精神层面的幸福。众所周知,金钱不能带来一切,甚至有人说金钱是万恶之源。经济上的成功可能就是建立在牺牲时间、健康和爱情的基础之上,而这三件事情是个人精神层面幸福的基本要素。我们对于这个画面并不陌生:一位职场成功的男士带着一颗破碎的心独自品味孤独。

  In my point of view, one’s economic success is only one of the key factors of happiness, but never the only one. To be happy, one needs to be both spiritually and materially satisfied Get Word ("satisfied"); though each of us may have a totally different picture of happiness.

  雅思写作优秀 6

  Autumn came, the beautiful autumn sister gave us a picture of the autumn.

  Autumn wind sister brought a box of colorful pigments. She gave the blue sky, blue sky like a shiny sapphire. She gave the yellow ginkgo tree, yellow leaves like a small fan, they use the strength of the autumn wind sister, fan ah fan ah, to help farmers uncle left the summer hot. She gave the red maple, red maple falling, like a small butterfly, twisting the beautiful wings dancing. She put the golden yellow rice, a piece of golden rice, like a golden ocean. She gave the orange red orange, persimmon, like a lanterns hanging branches. She gave more colors to the chrysanthemum, yellow, white, purple beautiful.

  Autumn wind sister also brought a variety of perfume. She will pear spray fragrant, apple spray sweet, provoke passing the children, could not help but run to the orchard.

  I really like the painting of the autumn wind sister.

  雅思写作优秀 7

  Autumn is here, autumn is here!

  Autumn came to the fields, and autumn mother hurried to the fields and put on a golden dress. Rice, autumn wind blowing, Kingnet tumbling. Pods in the autumn wind acpanied by crashing singing the song of harvest.

  Autumn came to the orchard, the apple smiled red face, pear, you squeeze my touch, just waiting for people to pick it! Persimmon trees are hung with persimmons like small lanterns. A string of grapes more attractive, sparkling like crystal clear Pearl agate.

  When autumn es to the garden, chrysanthemums bloom, red, white and yellow...... A riot of colours, bright and colorful flourish, very beautiful!

  雅思写作优秀 8

  Hear the voice of wind. Ah! Autumn is finally here!

  Garden, chrysanthemum competing opened! There are white the light yellow of ... .... Colorful chrysanthemums flourish in light wind, as if greeting them with people! Sweet-scented osmanthus trees out of the light yellow flowers. A wind blowing, a fresh wind into the nose, ah, really incense!

  Orchards, the apple red, like little brother's face. Aunts and uncles are tiptoe with apple picking. Thunk! A ripe apple from the tree fell down. Persimmon tree, hanging on a persimmon tree, far from looking like a red lantern! Grapes on a channeling channeling a , as one finally purple beads, purple was black, people really want a bite it.

  Fields, the endless golden rice, just like the earth covered with a layer of gold to the carpet. Farmers are busy on the busy man under, while cutting rice, while rice into basket. Face expression of joy and happiness.

  Autumn is a season of charming scenery, it is a harvest season. Ah! The fall, you really beautiful you!

  雅思写作优秀 9

  The weather came and the weather became cool. There was a swan of geese in the sky, and they were in a row for a while.

  There are three colors in the tree next to the road, green, orange, and red. In the field, the farmer uncle is busy harvesting corn. Small green vegetables wearing grass green uniform, look very air. Orchard, fruitful, red big apple like crowded with a fat doll, clawed green leaves look out. The red persimmon is like a small lantern hanging on a tree. Purple Yingying's grapes are like purple gems. Go to the park to play the children are wearing a long sleeves.

  Autumn is colorful, he gave the red maple, maple leaves like a stamp in the air falling down. It gives the yellow ginkgo tree, ginkgo tree leaves like a small fan. Grandpa plays tai chi under ginkgo tree.

  Autumn is the colorful season, is the harvest season, I like the fall!

  雅思写作优秀 10

  Autumn girl walked the silent footsteps, the beautiful autumn to the world.

  She waved a magic wand, the green rice fields into a golden. Far from the field, the field like a golden carpet; field, the channel side, a small river, that tree green cypress, is embroidered on the carpet on the green side; ridge, grass, grow all kinds of Colorful flowers, is embedded in the carpet on the color of pearls. The cool autumn wind blowing, blowing on the rice, the rice thrown the golden waves; blowing in the trees, leaves fluttering leisurely fall, like butterflies dancing in the fields. I stand on the ridge, you listen, the wind blowing rice "rustling" sound, between the grass, the insects "tweeted" sound, the branches, the bird's "grumble" sound, with our children's laughter Sound, merged into a ensemble; like a symphony, played the harvest of the movement.

  I love autumn, more love the field of autumn. Because she is full of joy, full of hope, full of vitality.


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——5月雅思考试写作优秀3篇

5月雅思考试写作优秀1

  Nowadays, many people argue against the government putting money on building theaters and sports stadiums. They have claimed that medical care and education would benefit the citizens and the country much more.

  However, I believe it is worth building more theaters and arenas.First, stadiums and arenas provide ideal places for people to have physical xercises and entertainment. After a whole week’s hardworking, people can

  enjoy a wonderful football game in the weekend, and refresh themselves with a good relaxation there. Moreover, the physical exercises are good for people’s health, which will ease the pressure of medical care.

  Second, theaters and museums can be used as base areas of culture and his ory education. The British Museum, which is the largest one in the world, provides visitors with knowledge about the world culture and the arts. The visitors to the museum are all overwhelmed by the magnificence of the ultural and historical displays featuring mankind’s achievements. In addition, the performances shown in the theaters will also greatly enrich the lives of citizens. People can enjoy ballet, symphony, and Peking Opera in a theater,which contain the soul of Chinese and western cultures.

  Third, running theaters and stadiums can earn much money.And this amount of money can do great contribution in other fields, including medical care, and education. After winning the Olympic 2008,Beijing made a plan to spend 160 billion RMB building an Olympic Village. This will surely attract many sports fans to China, which would be much rewarded, not only in economy but the whole society.

  You can tell form my commentary above,since building theaters and stadiums benefit not only individuals but also the state, it is very worthy of these expenses.And the government should speed up the pace of the constructions.

5月雅思考试写作优秀2

  An argument often heard these days is that whether or not the government should put money on building theaters and stadiums. Some believe that instead of spending money on this area, Medical care and education, both of which are basic developing factors of one country should be spent more money on. After weighting the pros and cons, I disagree with this opinion.

  Firstly, theaters and stadiums are best choice for people relaxing. Most of workers, especially white collar who often feel nervous after one day’s hard work, need to relax both mentally and physically. Compared with staying at home, it is much better way to stay in comfortable theater and listen to a wonderful concert.

  In addition, going to theaters and stadiums affect the same effect as education and medical care. Having more chances to go to theaters can help them mold character. There is no better way to keep healthy than doing proper sports in the daily. In this way, the culture and health will be improved greatly, which plays the same role of education and medical care.

  Moreover, theaters and stadiums are basis essential facilities to a developed city. Take holding an Olympic games as an example, it is no doubt it will take millions of money to build stadiums. Why the winner country is proud of that. Because this is a confirmation given by whole world.

  Of course I don’t mean that the more theaters and stadiums, the better society will be, after all, nothing can take the important place of medical care and education.

  In summary, the key point is to keep both of this two part developing. Only in this way, can all people live better in future.

5月雅思考试写作优秀3

  Some people said the government shouldn't put money on building theaters and sports stadiums; they should spend more money on medical care and education. Agree or not agree?

  Recently, a criticism often heard is that the government tends to put too much money on building theaters and sports stadiums. They maintain that medical care and education would benefit the citizens and the country much more. However, I advocate building more theaters and arenas. Numerous circumstances lead to the worth of building theaters and arenas, but here are two main reasons:

  What strikes me most of all is that theaters and sports stadiums provide ideal places for people to build up a world of relaxation. After five days of hardworking, people can refresh themselves by taking physical exercises and enjoining a football game there. Meanwhile, exercises is to health what water is to fish. The physical exercises can benefit people’s health, which will surely ease the pressure of medical care. Moreover, it provides people a good opportunity to enter into communion with each other, which will benefit people’s mental health.

  Beyond this, it is also of paramount importance to use theaters and museums as the “social classroom” of culture and history education. The Sydney Opera House, which is the mother and father of all modern landmark buildings, has come to define not only a city, but also an entire nation and continent. The opera house shows the concept of modernism and the never properly finished inside provides visitors with a story of its creator Jorn Utzon. In addition, the performances which contain the soul of human civilization shown in the theaters will also greatly enrich the lives of people from all over the world.

  Certainly, medical care and education both play dominant roles, but building theaters and sports stadiums will benefit not only the individual both mentally and physically, but a nation and continent permanently.


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——雅思考试写作优秀优选【五】篇

  雅思考试写作优秀 1

  Which element between nature and nurture plays the major role in children’s personality and development is always a controversial problem. Of course, which you prefer depends on your own experience, life style and emotional concern. Here, I would like to illustrate my point of view about it.

  Admittedly, different nature determines people have distinguished starting points in their lifetime. To beginning, in light of medical research, a person’s blood type has considerable influence to his character. General speaking, for example, a person whose blood type is A means that his personality is amiable and tender probably. Besides, the physical condition, even appearance may influence a person’s development. Statistics shows that beautiful people are more confident than others, because they do not need to worry about the prejudice from public. Obviously, some parts of our personality have been decided when we born.

  On the other hand, although nature is important during the course of shaping personality, we cannot ignore another essential element, nurture. There are many factors which affect the development of children, both parental support and education being vital influence. It is reported that the kid whose parents are divorced is more likely has psychological troubles than those with a harmonious family. By contrast, as we all know, good education will positively cultivate a person’s personality and improve his self-restraint in a big way.

  In summary, from what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that partly because of different nature, partly because of different nurture, people have their unique personality.

  雅思考试写作优秀 2

  People living in big cities face problems; government should encourage people to move to small towns. What are these problems? Do you agree government should encourage people to move to small towns?生活在大城市的人面临许多问题,**应该鼓励人们搬到小城镇。请问这些问题是什么?你认为**应该鼓励人们搬去小城镇吗?

  People who want a modern life style, with a focus on luxury, convenience and accessibility, will choose city life. Advanced technological appliances to better job opportunities, better wages and extensive product ranges are some of the attractions of city life. But nowadays people living in big cities face a variety of issues. Some citizens advocate that government should encourage people to move to small towns as population density in cities increases, it leads to overcrowding.

  In 2007 the United Nations estimated the total world population at 6.6 billion were living in urban areas. Roughly 80 percent of the U.S. population, for example, lives in urban areas. This happens because the demand for housing is more than the sup*** of housing.

  Moreover, increased movement of people from rural to urban areas puts a strain on the city's infrastracfture. As more people join the commuter rush each day, roads and freeways become crowded. New construction adds to the chaos as it struggles to keep up with demand. Ambulances and emergency vehicles sometimes find it hard to navigate the bumper-to-bumper traffic during rush hours. This can put seriously ill or injured people's lives at risk.

  However, from the point of my view, cities have many benefits over villages for them. As a matter of fact, children growing up in small towns do not have as much access to education as children in cities. What's more, villages may not have enough children to create a school that goes all the way through high school. Cities on the other hand have multiple forms of education such as colleges and universities. Libraries and museums are available in cities. Meanwhile, entertainment is readily accessible in cities in the form of movie theaters, amusement parks and restaurants. More importantly, living in the city provides people with thousands of career choices.

  Encouraging people to move to small towns is totally an unwise suggestion. Governments can further encourage the trend by funding education projects and ways to inform the populace about the costs of raising more than a set number of children. By using the carrot instead of the stick, people will be more inclined to choose to have smaller families.

  雅思考试写作优秀 3

  Some people think governments should introduce laws assessing what nutrition and food choices to improve public health. Others think it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有些人认为**应该颁布法律规定选择何种营养或者食物有利于健康,而另一些人不这么认为。请讨论双方的'观点并给出你自己的观点。

  Some people think governments should introduce laws assessing what nutrition and food choices to improve public health. Others think it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

  Food is the paramount necessity of people. However, in recent years, we are appalled by the frequent outbreak of such incidents as milk powder adulterated with melamine, lean meat powder and a spate of food contamination cases. In response, a growing number of people call for the government to take decisive actions to tackle food safety hazards by introducing laws assessing food nutrition.

  People in favor of such practice believe that customers have the right to find out everything about the food to make sure that what they eat is safe. If this information is transparent, then customers can feel free to choose the food they like without worring that this food can be harmful to their health. Besides, by keeping the information about the nutrition of food transparent, it can also discourage food producers from behaving irresponsibly for the food they make since it puts them under the scrutiny of customers. By this means, food producers will be more careful about the materials they add into the food.

  Nevertheless, some people hold opposite views, believing that releasing such laws fails to solve the food safety issues at its core. They maintain that this law can only result in food producers fabricating their nutrition labels instead of truly reflecting ingredients in their food. What's worse, this cosmetic work can lead to the dereliction of duty by government officials since they may loosen their monitoring on the food with such nutrition labels.

  In my opinion, it is necessary to issue laws assessing food nutrition since they can hold food producers accountable for what they make by putting them under the scrutiny of customers. However, releasing the law does not mean that law enforcement officials can sit back and relax. Without those people's efforts, laws can only be a piece of paper, having no actual effect. Therefore, it takes both the law and people's action in implementing the law to deliver tangible results in our efforts to ensure food safety.

  雅思考试写作优秀 4

  Nowhere in the world has the issue of competition and cooperation been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays,the competition is more and more furious between different groups, but many people think that parents teach competition to children that it will be bad for their growth,let them learn how to cooperate that is the most important. Above point is certainly true; thisessay will outline three reasons.

  The main reason is that children’ intellect is not enough capable to ***yze right and wrong competition. If children do not have correct teaching, the competition easily leads children to a wrong way. For instance, children usually pay attention to match their clothing and toys; in fact, it is really worth competing thing that their study is being ignored.

  Another reason is that if children work together,they could easily find out and sup*** their gaps. Because of limit of age,in order to children’s knowledgeis limited so that they have the different strongpoint. When they work together, they can learn the merit from others, and quickly correct their mistakes.

  Last but not the least reason is the cooperation means common progress. A people’s ability is limited, but group’s power is unlimited.Lots of things are really difficult to complete by personal power. Nevertheless, people work together to solve problems that will become really easy and simple. Thus, it is important to let children get to know signification of cooperation.

  In conclusion, children ought to learn signification of cooperation and how to work together, in order to their better future.

  雅思考试写作优秀 5

  nowaday,people constantly found themselve exposed variety of imformation, imformation is indeed nessasy to people's life.it bring great benefit to all of us.

  their is no denying that information bring a great convinience to people.Sitting at home,all we have to do is to press the button,then we can lattest information about what peple;s life is like in other country.since we have internet ,we can research our information need only by doubling the mouse.it open the fantastic world to us.in our school library.we can check the catelogue of congress to the team paper for it.information has became an indispensable part of human being.without it,we would act like blind,and could not step forward.

  Despite the positive infludence the information plays,their passive aspect cant be neglect.the young people are not support to variety of imformation.they dont have enought experience to tell good from bad or right from wrong.for examaple,books with much discription of violence and sex will tempt the children to fight and commit sex crime.

  some tv programm are also contamination.there are a lot of pronolograghy things which bring bad impart on children.for instance.if a person on tv get what he or she want by stealing it.children maybe copy this behaviour.therefore,they gain the unacceptable values,which will be harmful to their further development.

  To sum up,we should take action to control the increasing the neglected influence on the young people.for one thing.instruction and advise is nessasary to their education.young people who receive the proper instruction will be more likely to became the frendly social members.for another ,the strict law should be issued to keep them under control.i am sure,information will play more and more function in the future.


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  在拼写和构词法上有错误,但这些错误不至于影响交际;能使用简单和复杂句子结构;语法和标点出现一些错误,尽管这些错误很少导致交流障碍。

  雅思写作评分标准

  雅思写作9分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:完全满足任务的所有要求;

  连贯与衔接:对于题目的回应清晰而完整;不露痕迹地使用衔接手段;分段得体;

  词汇资源:词汇使用广泛、自然而老到;极少出现小错误如“笔误”

  语法结构的范围和准确性: 语法结构的使用广泛、准确而灵活;极少出现小错误如“笔误”

  雅思写作8分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:充分涵盖题目的所有要求;

  连贯与衔接:清晰而又得体地呈现并说明核心信息 信息和观点的安排有序而富逻辑性; 衔接性的各个方面安排得体; 分段充分、适当

  词汇资源:能流畅、灵活地使用多样词汇来准确表达思想;能巧妙使用较不常见单词和*语,尽管偶尔有词汇选择和搭配上的不准确; 拼写和构词法错误极少。

  语法结构的范围和准确性:灵活使用多种结构; 大部分语句无误;极偶尔情况下出现错误或不准确

  雅思写作7分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:涵盖题目要求;

  学术类:清晰概括主要趋势,差别或阶段;

  普通培训类:清晰表达写作目的,语气一贯、得体; 清晰呈现并说明核心信息,但可以进行更加充分的扩展

  连贯与衔接:信息和观点组织有逻辑性;文章从头至尾有延续性; 衔接手段使用合理,虽然可能有一些使用过少或过多

  词汇资源:词汇使用丰富、有一定的准确性和灵活性; 能使用较不常见词汇,对语体和搭配有所了解;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:在词汇的选择、拼写和构词法上偶尔有错误 使用多种复杂结构; 多数语句无误;语法和标点掌握较好,但可能会犯一些错误;

  雅思写作5分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:基本上回应题目要求;格式可能有时不准确;

  学术类:机械描述细节,缺少清晰概括;可能缺少数据支持;

  培训类:提出写信目的,有时不清晰;语气可能多变,有时不得体; 呈现核心信息,但涵盖不完整;可能有过于注重细节的倾向; 信息有一定组织但缺少总体延续性;

  连贯与衔接:衔接手段不充分,不准确,或过度使用; 缺少指代和替换,显得重复过多;

  词汇资源:使用有限词汇量,但只是在最低层面上满足题目;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:拼写和构词法上可能出现明显错误,造成读者的某些阅读困难; 只能使用基本句子结构;试图使用复杂句,但复杂句的使用准确性不如简单句; 语法错误较多,标点有误用;错误造成读者的某些阅读困难

  雅思写作4分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:试图回应题目要求,但没有涵盖所有主要信息;格式不得体; (普通培训类)没有能够清晰解释写信目的;语气不得体;

  连贯与衔接:混淆核心信息和细节;有的部分不清晰,不相关,重复或不准确; 提供信息和观点,但安排不连贯,也没有清晰的连续性; 使用一些基本的衔接手段,但可能不准确或重复

  词汇资源:只使用基本词汇,可能重复,可能使用不得体; 构词法和拼写掌握有限; 错误导致读者理解困难;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:只使用有限的句子结构,从句很少见;有的结构准确但错误较多,标点经常错误;

  雅思写作3分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:没有能够回应题目,可能完全误解题目;

  连贯与衔接:观点有限,可能大部分都是不相关或是重复; 没有逻辑性地组织观点; 衔接手段的使用非常有限,不能表明观点之间的逻辑关系;

  词汇资源:只使用非常有限的单词和表达,对于构词法和拼写的掌握很有限; 错误严重干扰信息的传递;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:试图写出句子但语法和标点错误非常多,扭曲了意思

  雅思写作2分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:回答几乎和任务要求无关

  连贯与衔接:对组织结构的掌握极少

  词汇资源:词汇使用极其有限;基本没有掌握构词法和拼写

  语法结构的范围和准确性:除了背诵的短语以外无法使用句子

  雅思写作1分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:回答完全和任务要求无关

  连贯与衔接:无法交流任何信息

  词汇资源:只能使用一些零散单词

  语法结构的范围和准确性:完全无法使用句子

  雅思写作0分评分标准:

  缺*考试; 交白卷;

  完全抄袭背诵好的范文

  雅思写作标准 2

  写作包括两篇作文题目,Task 1和Task 2,前一篇150字,后一篇250字。原则上建议考生前一篇作文用20分钟,后一篇用40分钟,因为后一篇文章分值更高。

  A类写作部分,全部1小时时间,分2大单元(Task 1&Task 2);

  (Task 1)通常考题以图片、表格坐标、曲线图为基本形式,考生根据所给的资料,写出150个字以上的文章来叙述主题,组织并探讨主题,提出比较支持的论点。

  G类的(Task 1)考生多以写一封信来应对考题中所给予的模拟状况或问题。

  (Task 2) A类与G类非常类似,考生就考题的主题,用250字详加发表意见,通常考生被要求用几种方式之一来做为架构解决问题、表达自己的意见、支持或争辩考题所给予的讯息。

  雅思写作标准 3

  雅思考试全程考试时间为2小时55分钟。其中,写作在听力、阅读部分之后出现,是笔试的最后一项。雅思写作考试要求在60分钟内完成两篇作文。写作中,以移民为主的培训类和以留学为主的学术类试题类型有所不同。

  Task 1要求考生在20分钟内完成150字以上的文章。G类要求考生针对题目要求写一封信来询问某方面信息或阐释某种状况。到目前为止,出现较多的书信种类有投诉信、请求信、建议信、寻找失物信、邀请信等。而A类则考核图表为主。考得较多的有曲线图、柱状图、饼状图、表格等。也有可能考到两种不同种类的图。另外,流程图和示意图也偶尔考到。

  Task 2 要求考生在40分钟内写作一篇不少于250字的议论文。A类和G类在Task 2方面非常相似。考生可能需要对某个观点发表支持或反驳意见,或者讨论针锋相对的一组观点,或者解释某种问题出现的原因并提出相应的解决办。

  雅思评分按9分制。基本上,移民或读语言学校起码要5分。留学需要6分以上。如果读的是法律、传媒、管理等名校的研究生的话,写作最好达到7分。但考生最后写作成绩并不是Task 1和Task 2的简单*均,而是以Task 2为主。

  雅思写作标准 4

  G类雅思写作评分标准是怎么样的:

  雅思写作0分评分标准:

  缺*考试;交白卷;完全抄袭背诵好的范文

  雅思写作1分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:回答完全和任务要求无关连

  贯与衔接:无法交流任何信息

  词汇资源:只能使用一些零散单词

  语法结构的范围和准确性:完全无法使用句子

  雅思写作2分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:回答几乎和任务要求无关

  连贯与衔接:对组织结构的掌握极少

  词汇资源:词汇使用极其有限;基本没有掌握构词法和拼写

  语法结构的范围和准确性:除了背诵的短语以外无法使用句子

  雅思写作3分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:没有能够回应题目,可能完全误解题目;

  连贯与衔接:观点有限,可能大部分都是不相关或是重复;没有逻辑性地组织观点;衔接手段的使用非常有限,不能表明观点之间的逻辑关系;

  词汇资源:只使用非常有限的单词和表达,对于构词法和拼写的掌握很有限;错误严重干扰信息的传递;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:试图写出句子但语法和标点错误非常多,扭曲了意思

  雅思写作4分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:试图回应题目要求,但没有涵盖所有主要信息;格式不得体;(普通培训类)没有能够清晰解释写信目的;语气不得体;

  连贯与衔接:混淆核心信息和细节;有的部分不清晰,不相关,重复或不准确;提供信息和观点,但安排不连贯,也没有清晰的连续性;使用一些基本的衔接手段,但可能不准确或重复

  词汇资源:只使用基本词汇,可能重复,可能使用不得体;构词法和拼写掌握有限;错误导致读者理解困难;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:只使用有限的句子结构,从句很少见;有的结构准确但错误较多,标点经常错误;

  雅思写作5分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:基本上回应题目要求;格式可能有时不准确;学术类:机械描述细节,缺少清晰概括;可能缺少数据支持;培训类:提出写信目的,有时不清晰;语气可能多变,有时不得体;呈现核心信息,但涵盖不完整;可能有过于注重细节的倾向;信息有一定组织但缺少总体延续性;

  连贯与衔接:衔接手段不充分,不准确,或过度使用;缺少指代和替换,显得重复过多;

  词汇资源:使用有限词汇量,但只是在最低层面上满足题目;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:拼写和构词法上可能出现明显错误,造成读者的某些阅读困难;只能使用基本句子结构;试图使用复杂句,但复杂句的使用准确性不如简单句;语法错误较多,标点有误用;错误造成读者的某些阅读困难

  雅思写作6分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:根据写作任务要求作文;学术类:进行了概括,信息选择合理;普通培训类:写信目的基本清晰,语气可能有不够一贯之处;呈现并说明核心信息,但细节可能不够相关,不适合或不准确

  连贯与衔接:信息和观点组织连贯;文章有延续性;衔接手段使用有效,但是句子内部和句子之间的衔接可能有误或过于机械;指代关系可能不能总是清晰、合理地使用

  词汇资源:使用适当范围的词汇;试图使用较不常见词汇,但有一些不准确;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:在拼写和构词法上有错误,但这些错误不至于影响交际;能使用简单和复杂句子结构;语法和标点出现一些错误,尽管这些错误很少导致交流障碍。

  雅思写作7分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:涵盖题目要求;学术类:清晰概括主要趋势,差别或阶段;普通培训类:清晰表达写作目的,语气一贯、得体;清晰呈现并说明核心信息,但可以进行更加充分的扩展

  连贯与衔接:信息和观点组织有逻辑性;文章从头至尾有延续性;衔接手段使用合理,虽然可能有一些使用过少或过多

  词汇资源:词汇使用丰富、有一定的准确性和灵活性;能使用较不常见词汇,对语体和搭配有所了解;

  语法结构的范围和准确性:在词汇的选择、拼写和构词法上偶尔有错误使用多种复杂结构;多数语句无误;语法和标点掌握较好,但可能会犯一些错误;

  雅思写作8分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:充分涵盖题目的所有要求;

  连贯与衔接:清晰而又得体地呈现并说明核心信息信息和观点的安排有序而富逻辑性;衔接性的各个方面安排得体;分段充分、适当

  词汇资源:能流畅、灵活地使用多样词汇来准确表达思想;能巧妙使用较不常见单词和*语,尽管偶尔有词汇选择和搭配上的不准确;拼写和构词法错误极少。

  雅思写作9分评分标准:

  完成任务情况:完全满足任务的所有要求;

  连贯与衔接:对于题目的回应清晰而完整;不露痕迹地使用衔接手段;分段得体;

  词汇资源:词汇使用广泛、自然而老到;极少出现小错误如“笔误”语法结构的范围和准确性:

  语法结构的使用广泛、准确而灵活;极少出现小错误如“笔误”

  雅思写作标准 5

  1从整体上看

  文章是否有主题句,主题句是一篇议论文的灵魂,分论点是围绕主题展开的,不可偏离主题句,与之无关的内容不应该在文章中出现。另外.注意各段之间的有机联系,这一点尤其要在各段的连接中体现出来.要注意各段的自然连接。融会贯通。

  2从细节上看,检查要细致

  句子与句子之间,段落与段落之间是否有恰当的连接词,来保证思想能够连贯而流畅地表达。

  单词的拼写。在作文中,不可以写单词的缩写式.另外,文章当中的单词不可既有英式英语的拼写,又有美式英语的拼写。正确的处理方法应是行文中统一地使用某一种,而不是两者的混合。

  语法是否正确.包括名词的数、动词、时态、主谓一致以及介词的搭配等。

  以上两点就是关于雅思写作练*自我评分的一个标准,有了这个标准之后,其实大家也可以把写作互相批改,这样就可以从更为客观的角度来看究竟写的怎么样。而且这也可以作为大家在写作时候的一个自我要求的标准。最后,雅思预祝大家在雅思考试中取得好成绩!


雅思写作优秀(10)份(扩展4)

——雅思口语满分 (菁华6篇)

  I want to describe a toy in my childhood.Actually,it was not a girly toy.It is a model car.

  When I was a kid,I acted like a boy and I was very interested in car models and guns.But my mother didn’t know that and she bought many dolls for me.To tell you the truth,my father found that I liked model cars,so he bought me one as a little present.

  It’s as big as a book and the color was very bright,it was red.I think the car was cool and I liked it very much.I would always take it out and study it.I figured out many functions of the car.I felt it was amazing that people could invent this tool for transportation.

  Since it was the gift that my father gave me,I kept it very carefully.Even now,it still looks like a brand new car.I think it’s very meaningful for a kid to own something that they like.

  I’d like to describe a skill I learned,which is to edit songs on com*r by using the software,called cool edit.

  I love singing,so a skill to edit songs is very practical and important for me.I first heard about it when I was eleven years old.When I was surfing the internet,a net friend told me about this software.I began to learn how to use at once by watching many online classes about it.Soon I can record my voice on the com*r and after a lot of practice; I can edit many audio files perfectly.For example,I sang a song named “take me away”,after being edited,it sounds just like the original singer’s singing.It is amazing,because I can even change a girl’s voice into a boy’s voice.

  I like to play with it in my spare time,so my skill has improved a lot.When I told my friends about it,all of them were really impressed.

  I think the most interesting subject in my high school is geography.I have a dream to travel around the world since I was a child.At that time,I would always wonder where exactly some famous cities were on the map,such as London,New York,so I am really interested in geography.

  I had a great geography teacher in my high school.

  She was knowledgeable,hard-working and devoted to the students.I always felt very excited when I had geography classes because I couldn’t wait to learn more about the world.Besides that,I also liked reading atlas and other books about geography during my spare time.I would always have good marks/grades on geography throughout my high school years.

  When I talk about geography with my classmates or even parents,I can always impress them with my knowledge.I still like geography and hope I can travel around the world in the future.

  No one can have failed to notice the fact that psychological problems are becoming serious among college students.Reports are often heard that some collegians committed * or murdered their roommates.Typical examples include the case of a Chinese student named Ma Jiajue and that of a Korean student studying in the U.S.

  Then what are the causes of these problems among college students? The following might be some of the sources of these young men and womens troubles.First,as young *s,most of them are at the stage of personality formation and are quite sensitive to their surroundings.Secondly,they are at a critical point of personal development and are facing pressure from various aspects:love,academy,job-seeking and so on.To make things worse,most of them are living off home and without their parents care and supervision.

  If Pandora's box is to keep hope at the bottom of the box,then my four years of good memories are engraved on the time scrolls.When the flawless time,to open the time scrolls,review the University bit by bit,ups and downs,may be able to find life comfort.

  The best life in college life will never stop,and over time,become memories.In the long road ahead,college life will be my forever good memories.It is a milestone in my life,a record of my most beautiful and precious life.July,I will travel,with a deep attachment to his alma mater and the infinite vision of the future,bid farewell to my student era.Now turn around is the wind and black hair,maybe looking back,is the snow over white! Yesterday,after all,short,tomorrow is forever,in front of the road there will still be a lot of thorns,the future may not be sunny day,but I firmly believe that the sea with wide diving,high-day bird fly,let us look forward to tomorrow will be more Well,look forward to his alma mater better tomorrow!

  The Spring Festival is a great occasion to the Chinese people.It lasts about the first four days of the year,during which people do not work except for the workers on duty.Students do not go to school,and shops are closed.

  Several days before the new year,people begin to prepare.Farmers kill pigs,sheep,cocks and hens.City dwellers buy meat fish and vegetables.Houses are cleaned; coupletsare posted on the doors.Colourful lanterns are hung at the gate.

  On the eve of the new year,each family has its members gatherd together and eats a family reunion dinner.After the meal they watch TV until the clock strickes twelve.Then every family sets off long strings of small firecrackers and other fire works to wele the new year.On the first day of the new year,almost everyone is dressed in his or her best.When people meet on the way,they say to each other "Happy New Year".Friends and relatives pay new year calls and gives presents to each other.Children indulge themselves in games.


雅思写作优秀(10)份(扩展5)

——雅思写作必背经典句子 50句菁华

1、An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation. 越来越多的人开始意识到教育不能随着毕业而结束。

2、Time and tide wait for no man. 岁月无情;岁月易逝;岁月不待人。

3、We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我们应该不遗余力地美化我们的环境。

4、from. . . to. . . the rate of decrease slow down. 从. . . 到. . . ,下降速率减慢。

5、the graph, presented in a pie chart, shows the general trend in. . . 该图以圆形图形式描述了. . . 总的趋势。

6、the situation reached a peak(a high point at) of[%]. . . . 的情况(局势)到达顶(高)点,为. . . 百分点。 35. the figures/situation bottomed out in. . . 数字(情况)在. . . 达到底部。

7、as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table. . . 如图所示. . .

8、Many people in the countryside migrate into big cities, resulting in an increase in the demands for accommodation, food and services in urban areas. (表达什么因素或现象会引发什么后果)

9、An investigation shows that many older people express a strong desire to continue studying in university or college. 一项调查显示许多老人都有到大学继续学*的愿望。

10、People seem to fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation. 人们似乎忽视了教育不应该随着毕业而结束这一事实。

11、An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will exert positive effects on construction of city. However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crime and prostitution. 越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。然而,越来越多的城市居民却怀疑这种说法,他们抱怨民工给城市带来了许多严重的问题,像犯罪和卖淫。

12、as can be seen from the graph, the two curves show the fluctuation of. . . 如图所示,两条曲线描述了. . . 的波动情况。

13、high/low/great/small/percentage 高/低/大/小比例

14、Experience is the father of wisdom and memory the mother. 经验是知识之父,记忆是知识之母。

15、That's always the case.*以为常了

16、Get over yourself. 别自以为是

17、I'm really in a bind. 我左右为难。

18、One should love animals. They are so tasty. 每个人都应该热爱动物,因为它们很好吃。

19、You've gone too far!你太过分了!I can't take it anymore. 我受不了了!

20、In theend, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years. 到头来,你活了多少岁不算什么,重要的是,你是如何度过这些岁月的。

21、You may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind. 你也许已走出我的视线,但从未走出我的思念。

22、When the whole world is about to rain, let's make it clear in our heart together. 当全世界约好一起下雨,让我们约好一起在心里放晴。

23、Cut it out. 省省吧。

24、No matter how bad your heart has been broken, the world doesn't stop for your grief. The sun comes right back up the next day. 不管你有多痛苦,这个世界都不会为你停止转动。太阳依旧照样升起。

25、a short fuse(俚)脾气火爆

26、It slipped my mind. 我忘了

27、I'll think of you every step of the way. 我会想你,在漫漫长路的每一步。

28、Don't nag me!别在我面前唠叨!I feel terrible!我觉得遭透了!I guess so!我想是吧!

29、Watch out!(口)当心!

30、Accept what was and what is, and you'll have more positive energy to pursue what will be. 接受过去和现在的模样,才会有能量去追寻自己的未来。

31、a knock out(俚)美得让人倾倒

32、He is an operator. 他是个老油条。Don't get on my nerves!不要搅得我心烦

33、Happiness is a way station between too much and too little. 幸福是太多和太少之间的一站。

34、Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation. 现在,人们普遍认为没有一所大学能够在毕业时候教给学生所有的知识。

35、Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at the arguments on both sides. 在给出我的观点之前,我想看看双方的观点是重要的。

36、Who but he would do such a thing?除了他谁会做这种事?

37、We have lots of confidence in our ability to solve any problem. 我们对自己解决问题的能力有足够的信心。

38、What I really want to know is whether he will go abroad next month?我的确想知道的是,他是否会在下个月出国。

39、In2008, you will see Beijing as beautiful as a garden, with cleaner water and clearer sky. 到2008年,我们会看到北京像花园一样,有着更加清澈的河水和碧透的天空。

40、I’m looking forward to meeting you in no time. 我期待与你早日相见。

41、If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. 如果你有什么问题和请求只管跟我说。

42、No matter what you do in the future, English will always be important. 不管你将来做什么,英语都是最重要的。

43、Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有什么比接受教育更重要的事了

44、Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中,他一直很用功。

45、In conclusion, the advantages of studying abroad outweigh its disadvantages 总之,出国留学的优点要大于它的缺点。

46、The talk will be given at the Lecture Hall on Oct. 12th, starting at 3:30p. 报告将在10月12日3:30在报告厅举行。

47、I’m very satisfied with what we have achieved so far. 到目前为止,我对我们取得的成绩很是满意。

48、I’m writing to request more information about the day tour to London. 我写信是为了了解更多去伦敦旅行的信息。

49、Recently, our class have had a heated discussion about whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school. 最*,我们班展了开一场讨论,是关于中学生是否有必要带手机去上学。

50、We can’t imagine what the world is going to be without purified water. 我们无法想象没有纯净的水,这个世界会变成生么样子。


雅思写作优秀(10)份(扩展6)

——雅思学*计划汇总10篇

  寒假即将来临,准备出国的同学们千万不可以浪费了这宝贵时间,一定要利用寒假包括前后的六周时间大干一场。然而究竟要如何计划时间,安排复*计划,很多同学顿时陷入迷茫之中,一筹莫展。

  首先,需要声明的一点是:听力,阅读,写作和口语这四部分是一个统一的整体,不建议用单独的某一段时间集中复*某一个单项,相反,四个部分综合复*,则会相互补充,达到事半功倍的效果。

  听力:

  如果想在听力方面拿高分的话,首先一点是必须要有较强的拼写能力,也就是对词汇的熟悉度。这是因为雅思考试听力中的大头填空题,地图题和标签题等都对考生的单词拼写有严格要求,因此,建议大家在前两周的时间内,有意识地去强化自己的基本词汇量。而听力的词汇量要求不想阅读对词汇量的要求那么高,大家只要掌握使用频率最高的基本词汇就可以了。建议大家研究一下机经上的常考听力单词,尤其是同类场景中重复出现的单词,并把它们进行归纳整理,这绝对很有帮助的。

  接下来的三周时间内,则需要进行正式的听力训练。建议大家听“剑桥真题”4至8中的语段,这个时候先不要求多,也不一定要按照考试的速度来,关键是反复听,确保听懂大意。之后,可以对某一段落,尤其是自己听得不太好的语段,进行逐字逐句的听写。经过反复训练,可以大致体会出连读、略读、省音、失爆等英语发音特点,从而跟上语段节奏,熟悉雅思读音腔调!做完Dictation的最后一遍,建议考生跟读录音,这既可以加强对听力内容的理解,又能模仿老外原汁原味的语音语调,练*口语。这种“磨耳朵”式的听力训练,看似枯燥,效果却很神奇,考生只要不偷懒,每天坚持一个小时,每周如此,一个月后定能见效。

  最后两周的时间,强烈建议严格按照考试规定的时间内完成《剑桥雅思真题》听力部分*题,找到考试的感觉。每天一套题做完,之后要对照答案,再查看自己的答案,分析错误总结经验,这很重要。

  阅读:

  谈到阅读复*,很多同学就会想到要大量的做题,其实还有更为重要的一个方面,那就是从另一个角度去阅读文章,去体会出题思路。不注意出题思路,做太多的题也不会有太明显的进步。此外,从词汇量上也要有一定的提高,因为阅读部分对词汇量的要求还是很高的。

  在阅读复*过程中,前三个星期每天只需要练*两篇文章就可以,这里说的练*还是指的是剑桥雅思真题。做练*的时候,严格规定二十分钟时间完成一篇文章,做完对完答案不可以就放一边,而要好好分析,精读一下。精读的概念就是把文章从头到尾每句话、每个词的意思都能搞清楚,尤其是和题目对应的文章部分。精读完后就要仔细看下做错的题目,总结一下是什么原因导致做错。然后,要把文章中不认识的一些生僻单词记录下来,只是要每天坚持,都要花一到两个小时去看阅读,培养一种感觉,这样积累一个月会把自己的状态调整到最佳的。

  之后的两个星期可以找时间做几次阅读模拟,也就是一个小时内完成三篇阅读文章。这种自测的作用就是能体会到考试时时间紧迫的感觉,了解到自己时间把握上的薄弱点,在最后的心态上进行调整。当然做完练*后的主动分析也是必不可少的。这段时间要保证每天都看英语文章,最好是和雅思考试题材有关的,科技、经济、社会、自然等等,比如21century, ecnomic等网站,这样可以帮你积累词汇,熟悉语感,提高阅读速度。

  最后一周建议大家把以前做过的题目拿出来看,尤其是做错的题目,然后把一些常见的词汇整理一下,把前几个星期自己分析过的内容再看一下。如果上过培训班的同学可以把老师讲过的内容尤其是做题方法再温*一下,然后保持一种稳定的心态去面对考试。

  补:如果说机经对于听力复*很重要的话,相比而言,对阅读的作用则微乎其微了。因为阅读只能回忆出大致内容和题型,具体的文章和题目是很难回忆出来的。所以建议大家利用机经看看最*常考的题型是什么,题材是什么,然后去网上看看相关题材的内容,但是背机经就一点用处都没有了。

  写作:

  要想提高雅思写作水*,最主要的是有扎实的语言基本功。而雅思写作的一个评分标准就是Lexical Resource(词汇的多样性)和Grammatical Range and Accuracy(语法句式的准确性和多样性)。因此,大家要注意写作词汇的积累。

  具体来讲,建议大家先拿出第一个星期的时间,熟悉历年真题。一来可以了解雅思写作的难度,要求及常考话题,二来雅思的.出题有一定的重复性,幸运的同学完全可能遇到旧题或是类似的题目。

  然后,在第二到第四个星期,建议大家将重点放在词汇的积累上,以便提高用词的准确性。大家可以精读一些常考话题的文章,把相应的词或短语摘录下来随时背诵。也可以参考一些与雅思写作主题相似的文章以及剑桥雅思系列上提供的考官精彩范文等。另外,还有一点很重要,那就是准备一些写作常考topic需要的词汇。例如,经常考到与环境有关的话题,那么可以准备ecological balance(生态*衡)、ecological system(生态系统)、environmental protection(环境保护)、environmental damage(环境破坏)、chemicalwaste(化工废料)、endangered species(濒临灭绝的物种)等等。

  最后两周则是练笔时间,主要是训练写作思路的拓展,主题观点句的表达。这段时间,主要通过接触多个写作话题,能够迅速地理清自己的观点,列好提纲。其实最有价值的还是论据部分的表达,就是首段和尾段的主题观点句和主题段落的分支观点支持句,大家在*时的训练中要注意此类句子的积累。

  在练笔的时候,建议大家对照自己的文章和范文,看看区别在哪里。这种对比分析还是很有帮助的。此外还可以背诵考官的范文,精读单句,精读单段,掌握连接词,段与段的逻辑,以便运用到你自己的作文当中去。同时要上网查看考试的预测,按照作文类型整理出适合你自己风格的写作模板,并且要考虑到范文类别的丰富性。

  口语:

  口语和写作一样,都是英语输出的形式。其复*策略跟写作差不多,也需要前期的输入过程,将输入的语言进行内化,然后再输出。对于口语常考话题,如果这些核心词汇不具备的话,恐怕会出现无话可说,或者想说说不出来的情况。因此,建议大家在前几周的时间,还是要将重点放在常见话题词汇的积累上,从了解和理解口语考试评分标准着手,熟悉考试形式,开始接触雅思口语的各类话题,进行有针对性的词汇积累和中级语法的构建。这时考生比较容易入手的是考试的第一部分,可以进行更多的练*;后两部分也可以有所涉及,如对第二部分人物事物的简单描述,能够锻炼清楚表达自己观点和看法的能力。积累的过程重在持之以恒,且不可操之过急。

  当然,在这一过程中,也要注意及时纠正自己的语音错误,从音标开始改进和规范自己的每一个发音,打好口语最基本的语音基础;从基本的问候开始训练自己开口说话的胆量;从日常对话开始,将简单时态、人称和数等基本语法及问候语、个人情况的表达等相关词汇熟悉和正确运用起来。如果能够知难而进地“熬”过这最初的一段日子,养成良好的学**惯,以后的备考就会更加顺利。

  最后两周的时间,要加大每天说英语的强度,甚至可以把自己完全沉浸在听说读写英语的氛围中,内化自己所积累的知识,以保持较好的考前状态。将口语的话题归类备考,每天练*其中的两到三个。对一些常考话题,要多加练*,有条件的话,可以找朋友或者同学一起练*,没有条件,自己跟自己练*,同时可以录音。听自己的录音,是一种最好的发现错误的途径。发现错误之后,马上改正,然后再讲一遍,这样反复不断地练*,过一两个星期之后,必定获得可喜的效果。

  最后,预祝大家有个愉快而充实的寒假,同时把雅思考试复*得很充分,顺利通过考试!

  确定需要完成的任务之后,根据复*的天数,制定好每天的雅思学*计划。学*时间是要分部分的,这个在学校称为课时,需要注意的是:

  (1)并不是每天学*的内容和强度都必须一样,而学*新的内容最好放在白天,晚间留给复*和休息,否则千篇一律和庞杂的学*内容依旧会把人带入枯燥乏味的学*困境中从而使计划失效。比如第一天上午第一节练的是听力,第二天第一节可以换成阅读,而第一天练过的写作,可以在第二天休息第三天继续进行,因为没有人可以每天什么内容都顾及一遍,只要不会顾此失彼,严格按照计划执行,效果会非常明显。

  (2)对于雅思学*计划的问题,并不是每一门结束的日期都相同,比如阅读1你需要一个月完成,听力1只需要3个星期完成,就没有必要把听力1拖到一个月的时间或者阅读1压缩到3个星期之内结束。每一门学科能保证在考试之前具备达到理想水*的任务量就可以。

  (3)除了正常的学*以外,每星期都可以根据情况给自己安排一个或者几个下午或者全天的休息时间,但是一定要是事先规定好的,保证不会放松之后心收不回来。

  (4)每星期也应该安排半天做模拟测试,以检验自己一个星期的学*成果。这样一来,美联英语相信大家对于雅思学*计划要怎样安排的问题是不是也一清二楚了呢?在我们明确了这些学*方法之后,慢慢的我们的生活也会朝向光明笔直的大道了,所以大家好好加油吧

  雅思考试复*计划(必读)

  考雅思,就好象做一道菜一样,需要上层的材料,经验丰富的师傅,还有自身的 努力,再加点运气。

  给大家推荐一些材料,是在雅思考试前2个月你要准备的。

  新东方系列:

  1.学术类阅读理解 30.00

  2.学术类阅读理解辅导 35.00

  3.高分作文 35.00

  4.学术类全真模拟试题(包括听力与口语全真模拟试题) 书:30.00 第4如果你觉得没必要就不要买了, 磁带:23.00

  北语系列:

  1. IELTS考试技能训练教程。听力 29.00

  2.中级听力(磁带和书) 120.00

  其他:

  1.吴建业的写作 35.00

  2.101 helpful hints for IELTS 39.00

  3.202 useful exercises for IELTS 39.00

  4.剑桥雅思考试题型透析 49.90

  5.how to prepare for ielts 30.00

  6.剑桥雅思考试1/2 19.90x2

  雅思复*进度表:

  彷徨的你们在刚开始的时候做什么呢?

  改掉晚睡晚起的*惯呀,还要告诉自己现在世界上只有雅思和你了!

  接下来就是刚开始的时候如何打基础,俗话说万事开头难,很多考友面对一大堆资料,头都痛了,合理的安排时间和劳逸结合很重要,一味死读,过于放松都不会取得好的效果的,以下是一些建议,广大考友可以结合自己的实际情况参考。先讲在最初的复*阶段关于听力的复*方法(是集百家之长,运用之,~~~~)

  1.泛听与精听结合

  材料:中级听力(新东方强烈推荐,接触发现确实不错)

  优点:杂音极其多,语速快。听完中级再听其他雅思模拟题有一种语速好慢 呀,全部都听到了的感觉。

  缺点:题型与雅思考试不太接*,取材广泛,生活各方面都有涉及

  建议:运用的时候,不要去做题目,以免有误导作用

  大家的评价:新东方老师强烈推荐,声称北语除了这个之外,其他都不太行。IELTS考试技能训练教程。听力(黑眼睛)

  优点:对于没有接触过雅思考试的考友,帮助比较大,因为他把各个题型都归

  类练*了。

  缺点:念的那几个不会变的,不是第一个跟第二个搭配,就是跟第三个搭配, 难度比较简单,对后期冲刺的考生其实作用不大。

  建议:做的时候要极其注意收集听力词汇,归纳。准备考的考生基本不用理它 大家评价:环球雅思强烈推荐,声称黑眼睛囊括了85%的听力内容。

  注:大家应该先听中级听力的,把睡意驱除,一个小时后,再拿出黑眼睛,精听之~~~~

  2.阅读一定要注意词汇量的积累

  材料:学术类阅读理解 学术类阅读理解辅导

  优点:帮助记忆单词,是我发现至今最有效的背单词书籍

  缺点:出题思路跟雅思不太一样,错又多,而且够简单,拿这本书做阅读题的话,大家会死得很惨。。。

  建议:数过了一共有大概8000个单词,足够应付雅思考试,拿来背,结合课文 好背着呢!

  大家评价:没有人说好,除了新东方自己,不过背单词是绝佳的材料,大家不要再去 买什么单词书了,效率低,又坚持不下去,很痛苦的,经验教训呀。

  3.阅读速度的提高

  材料:21cn

  优点:信息量大

  缺点:一个星期出一次,不够看啊!!

  建议:去书店去买21cn的科技版,不过10.00,归类了*期的科技文章,要练*到一 分种200个字才行哦!

  大家评价:大家都让你去买,因为china daily太政治化,广州英文早报文章写得太差。

  材料:海外英语

  优点:里面包括了雅思经常找出题点的《探索》,文章难度及长度相当,帮助你了解当今雅思的难度。

  缺点:太包罗万象了,其他均对雅思没有太大帮助。

  建议:如果能直接买到《探索》原版英文的朋友,就不要买了。

  大家评价:还没有看到有人注意这个杂志。纯属个人推荐。

  材料:网络

  优点:免费嘛!

  缺点:看到头都晕,长期对着电脑,哪里看得下去??除非你是计算机专业的,呵呵

  注:在最初期的时候阅读就是积累词汇量,因为现在雅思考试用技巧已经少了,什么scaning呀,skimming呀,都是帮助你去理解句子,如果单词搞不懂,就算读到了也读不懂,很打击的~~~ 还有提高阅读速度,刚开始的时候可能大家做不到一分种200,不过最后是要达到一分钟300,这个速度才行!!

  4.写作

  材料:.吴建业的写作

  优点:很好!内容够全,套句够多,包罗万象

  缺点:想拿高分别买。。。

  建议:把这本吃透,写作问题真的不大。

  大家评价:吴建业强烈推荐,呵呵。

  注:大家不要再背范文了,实验证明是记不住的!!不是打击,我认为现在流传的范文,质量都一般般,顶多6分,而且大家都抄,后果可想而知啦~~~有人自己基础不太好,却 希望考试通过背所谓外国网站的优秀优美的句子,可实践证明是背不下来,因为外国人的思维跟中国人不一样,如果大家很有时间,当然可以背,有高中生写作文,就拿了8分,他介绍全部句子来自外国网站。时间表:

  8:00-9:30 中级听力

  9:30-11:00 黑眼睛

  11:00-12:00 报纸,杂志,提高速度

  3:00-6:00 新东方单词

  8:00-10:00 总结作文

  10:00-11:00 看网站咯,聊QQ咯。网友交流时间呀,人多力量就大,实践证明的!

  在中期复*要用的书籍和复*方法。在这个时候大家都会产生一种没有自信,沮丧,害怕的感觉,觉得好象读了这么多都没有进展的??这种感觉是很可怕的,很多人说考完以后,反馈说现在的练*都比较简单呀!!

  5555,都不知道怎么办才好~~~离考试就只有3个星期,真的可以吗??在这里想说的是,大家一定要沉得住气!!不要放弃呀,因为你离成功就差一点点了,只要再坚持一天,两天,就能提高了,千万不要放弃呀~~怎么招也要对得住咱爸咱妈的钞票和希望呀!!

  中期复*资料:

  1.要开始接触模拟题了

  材料:学术类全真模拟试题

  优点:难度逐渐增强,靠后的两篇跟考试难度相当

  缺点:自己录的,所以人就几个,第一个跟第二个说,第一个又跟第三个说 建议:每天听一套。

  大家评价:没有喔~~新东方老师推荐买,还可以

  材料:环球雅思的听力材料(内部)

  优点:把世面上的雅思题都找来,抄到自己的里面了


雅思写作优秀(10)份(扩展7)

——英语写作作文优选【10】份

  In my hometown, the scenery is very beautiful, as I am so close to the nature, I can see the scenery clearly. The house I live in is in front of the mountain, so I can see the sunset every day, that is the scenery is like to appreciate most. When the dusk comes, the sunset is going down the mountain, I will stand in my garden, watching the sunset going down. The sunset will become more and more red as it goes down the mountain, when the dark comes, the sunset will disappear. I like to watch the sunset, I feel I am so close to the nature and I blend myself in it.

  在我的家乡,景色非常的优美,由于我是如此的接*大自然,因此我能清楚地看到景色。我所住的'房子就在山的前面,因此我能每天看到日落,那也是我最喜欢欣赏的风景。当黄昏到来的时候,太阳就会下山,我会站在花园前,看着日落下山。日落在下山的时候会变得越来越红,当天黑了,日落就会消失。我很喜欢看日落,我觉得自己是如此的接*大自然,也融进了大自然。

  As the saying that it is never too late to learn, people are advocated to learn all their lives. Today the world is changing fast, if we get satisfied and stop to improve ourselves, then we will be kicked out soon, so self-improvement are in need of. Reading is the most effective way to get improved. Books provide us all kinds of knowledge, we can know better about the world and make ourselves the smart persons. Another way is to go to the gym. Doing exercise not only makes us look perfect, but also helps us live the healthy lifestyle. So many people work in the office and don’t have the time to exercise, so they get sick easily. Only the strong body can make people live well. Reading and taking exercise are the best ways to get self-improvement, it also cost less.

  俗话说活到老学到老,人们提倡终身学*。今天世界变化得很快,如果我们因为满足而去停止提高自己,那么我们很快就会被淘汰,所以自我增值是迫在眉睫。阅读是增值的最有效方式。书给我们提供了各种各样的知识,使得我们可以更好的了解世界,让自己成为聪明的`人。另一种方法是去健身,锻炼不仅让我们看起来完美,同时也帮助我们拥有健康的生活方式。很多人在办公室工作,没有时间运动,所以他们很容易生病。只有强壮的身体可以让人过得好。阅读和锻炼是自我增值最好的方法,也是最便宜得方式。

  A dream is to a man what wings are to a bird. With a dream in the deep heart's core, a man is spontaneously driven to hitch his wagon to a star. A dream is an inexhaustible source of energy that keeps our enthusiasm burning, and kindles our desire to enhance our spiritual cultivation, refine our character, and upgrade our quality of life. A life without a dream is like a bird with broken wings, confined to a cage and oblivious of what lies beyond the range of its vision. On the contrary, a man with a dream is like a warrior armed with ambition, foresight and gallantry, daring to step into an unknown domain to make a journey of adventure. It is dream that adds fullness, variety, and spice to our life and makes it worth living.

  I have a dream. It is a dream that is dee*** rooted in human nature. I dream that one day people of all origins can live in harmony and peace without being discriminated against or persecuted. The bounty of the earth can be shared by every single human being. Mutual respect will guarantee the existence and continuation of the diversity of customs and cultures. Love, sympathy, and cooperation will alleviate the sufferings and disasters inflicted upon our fellow men. Respect for basic human rights will put an end to social injustices and evils.

  about football stars such as the English football player Beckham. Some like the young man in the photo express their enthusiasm by writing his name on their faces, while others, like the one in the hair studio, spend as much as 300 yuan for a hairstyle modeling on that of Beckham. In fact, that kind of star-worshipping is not uncommon nowadays among the Chinese people. For example, the so-called "Super Girls" became fashionable almost overnight, with fans chasing after them in a kind of blind worship. It seems as is people are badly in need of someone to whom to pay their respect and to realize their own aspirations of an immediate success or stardom. Famous football players won our favor and earned our respect by their hardwork and excellent performance on the football field. What, then, deserves to be worshipped, their diligence and perseverance, or their hairstyle and ways of living? The answer seems self-evident: what we should learn is their spirit, not the superficial styles of living. Fashion is often short-lived, but the ever-lasting memory of a courageous, undaunted and skillful football player is what inspires us in our pursuit for better life and brighter future.

  During the May Day holiday, my parents and I climbed Mount Tai. We were lucky that it was fine that day and we were able to see the sunrise.

  At 4:30 in the morning we were already,on the top, waiting for the sun to rise.First a bit of pale ray appeared in the east, then it became brighter and brighter. An orange top of a cap rose little by little from the sea. Suddenly, the sun sprang out of the seawater, looking like a large elliptic ball, and the sky in the east became red. Later, the sun was hidden behind a piece of cloud. When it appeared again, the sun changed from red to bright red, then to golden. AS it rose it became silvery white and shone out. The light was so strong that we could't look at it directly.At that time,the whole mountain was in the golden sunlight.

  Every year, the world is keeping their eyes on the Nobel Prize in literature, the winner will gain the fame and fortune and making his writing career reach the top. Chinese culture has more than 5 thousand years’ history and there are many great works that famous around the world. So why Chinese writers have such a long way to win the Nobel Prize. The most obvious factor is the language. English as the international language is accepted by the world and Chinese great works need to be translated into English, so as to be read by the judges. But the bad thing is that during the translation, the artistic conception has loss in some way and only the main meaning is left. So we don’t need to question about our literature, it is excellent and some day the world will see it.

  每年,全世界都在关注着诺贝尔文学奖,获胜者将获得名誉和财富,让他的写作生涯达到顶峰。中国文化有5000多年的'历史,有许多伟大的作品,闻名于世界。为什么中国作家在获得诺贝尔奖这条路上走了那么久。最明显的因素是语言。英语作为国际语言被世界所接受,中国的伟大作品也需要翻译成英文,这样评委才能看得懂。但糟糕的是,在翻译的'过程中,意境在某种程度上受到损失,只剩下的主要意思。所以我们不要质疑我们的文学,它是优秀的,总有一天世界会看到。

  Autumn, cloudless, the autumn wind stroke.

  Migratory birds are eager to fly to the south. Geese for a while in "people" glyph, neatly flew through the air, so, don't listen to the migratory birds that ringing the songs and calls of. The sparrows chirp to busy looking for food, the frog to dig holes, ready to sleep comfortably, such as spring up!

  The orchard, a row of fruitful. Round apple like children face; Pear yellow, like a small bottle gourd; Red hawthorn like a small lantern; A purple grapes, like pearls were shining brilliantly.

  In the field, the sorghum like drunk, nodding; Corn is sleeping in the yellow clothes; Soybean small slope in the belly, also jumped out; Chinese cabbage as soldiers lined up neatly arranged in in the vegetable garden. Farmers are busy reap the fruits of the year, from time to time heard gales in the field...

  Ah, the autumn scenery is beautiful!

  Drunken Driving

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Drunken Driving. You should write no less than 150 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

  1.醉酒驾车增多的原因

  2.醉酒驾车的危害

  3.如何减少醉酒驾车

  Drunken Driving

  Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that drunken driving has been a grave problem with which we are confronted. Generally speaking, there are several reasons accounting for /behind this phenomenon. Firstly, recent decades have witnessed the rapid development of people’s living standards. As a result, cars gained ever-increasing popularity and have found their way into our everyday life. Secondly, people participate in more activities or banquets than ever before, where they will drink liquor/strong wine. Then, they may get drunk but continue to drive.

  Drunken driving is bound to generate severe consequence if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firs and foremost, this behavior will directly threaten the safety of drivers, passengers and pedestrians/goers, resulting in traffic accidents, injuries and even deaths. Besides, treating the injured and repairing broken cars mean a grievous waste of money, time and resources. Last but not least, this irresponsible driving will make the road a nightmare, and thus, it will causes serious losses of faith in governments and the society.

  In view of the seriousness of this problem, effective measures must be taken before things get worse. First, it is essential that the supervisory role of laws and regulations should be strengthened to punish those performing drunken driving. Secondly, the public, especially drivers, should enhance their awareness of public safety. With stringent laws and alert public, it will only a matter of time for drunken driving to become things of past.

  The Most Beautiful Scenery

  Today, when I walked home after school, I found the sunset was very beautiful, so I stopped at the park and sat at the bench to appreciate this scenery. There were so many people at the park, most of whom were old couples and they went for a walk. There was a special couple that caught my attention, they were hand in hand. The old woman couldn’t walk well because there was something wrong with her right leg. The old man took care of her carefully. They set a good example to the young couple, showing what the true love is. Under the sunset, they made up the most beautiful scenery.

  今天,我放学后走回家时,我发现夕阳很漂亮,于是我在公园停了下来,坐在长椅上欣赏这风景。很多人在公园里,他们中的大多数是老夫妇在散步。有一对特殊的夫妇引起了我的注意,他们手牵手。老妇人不能走快,因为她的'右腿有毛病。老爷爷细心照顾她。他们给年轻夫妇树立了一个好榜样,告诉我们真爱是什么。在夕阳下,他们最美丽的风景。

  Recent years, on November 11th, which is believed to be the Singles’ Day, has become the carnival for Chinese people, because the online products have the great discount. On that day, the computer system will be challenged because numerous customers are fighting for the trade. Chinese market potential is infinite.

  *年来,11月11日,这天被认为是单身节日,已经成为中国人的嘉年华,因为网上产品有大的折扣。在那一天,计算机系统将会受到挑战,因为许多客户在进行交易。中国市场的潜力是无限的.。

  The Singles’ Day day had become shopping day a few years ago. The single persons played the joke that shopping online could console their lonely hearts, and many slogans online advocated them to buy products. As more and more manufacturers joined the team to show the on sale products, the day November 11 th is admited to be the online shopping day.

  单身节在几年前已经成为购物节。单身的人开玩笑说,网上购物可以安慰他们孤独的心,许多网上的口号提倡他们购买产品。随着越来越多的厂商加入了这个队伍团队,出售打折产品,11月11 号成为了公认的网购节。

  When the media reported the turnover of Single’s day, which surprised all. It reached the top of a year, what’s more, every year the turnover increases. Chinese business market is booming, while for foreign countries, they have the hard time. So more foreigners have come to China and seek for cooperation. The world is watching us and we are so proud that our country is stronger.

  当媒体报道光棍节的营业额时,大家都感到惊讶。销售额达到了一年的顶峰,而且,每年营业额都在增加。中国商业市场正在蓬勃发展,然而国外,他们在经历着艰难的时刻。所以越来越多的外国人来到中国,寻求合作。全世界都在看着我们,我们非常自豪,国家变得越来越强大。


雅思写作优秀(10)份(扩展8)

——雅思小作文实用五份

  题目给出的是流程图,就是以图示的方法把一个过程或流程清楚地显示了出来,现在要求考生做的是把该流程图还原成说明文。由此可见,我们实际上要做的就是看图作文。而大家都知道,看图作文是我们在小学最初学写作文时的入门做法。照着图来写,省却了要自己想象和构思的过程,这自然比起写议论文的挑战度要低一些。所以,大家应该更有信心去对付流程图作文,毕竟实际上所做的是“看图作文”。

  流程图写作基本原则

  流程图作文是以对流程的描述为主的。全文的安排通常分为两个主要部分:引言段和主体部分。引言段是用来作简介的,介绍该流程图表示了一个什么什么的过程,常用的句型为主语+谓语+宾语模式。然后视情况可以多加一句说整个过程可以分为若干个阶段。引言段只需一段,通常就是这么一二句话。

  主体部分是文章的核心部分,主要是说明该流程,所以是说明文式的行文。主体部分可依照整个流程分成几个阶段而大体相应地分为几个自然段。主体部分的写作原则如下:

  1.把图看懂

  这是首要前提,理解了流程图表示的是什么以及是怎样的一个过程,才谈得上用文字表达出来。能否看得懂图取决于几方面的因素:词汇量,知识面,生活经验和常识等。考生*时要有心地做一下这些方面的积累和准备。一般来说,流程图是不难看懂的。万一有些什么地方卡住了,也要大胆地合乎逻辑地去猜测,推想,判断,要灵活机敏。

  2.按图示的顺序写

  流程图会表示一个过程的流向顺序。因此,不难按照图示的顺序来写。若是分成几个阶段的,就按顺序逐个阶段来描述,通常就相应地分成几个自然段落。

  3.将图所提供的词扩展(或串)成句子

  流程图中会提供一些关键的说明性的词,比如步骤或环节的名称,怎样做,添加什么原料,去掉什么,输送到哪儿等等。我们就可以直接利用这些关键词写成句子,方法有两类,依照图的情况而分别采用之。如果流程图比较简短,用扩展的办法,就是以一个关键词为核心词,扩展成一个甚至两个句子,以达到字数的要求。反之,若图比较长而复杂,就采用串的办法,一句话把两个甚至三个步骤串起来,这样可以把较长的过程压缩得短一些来描述。无论用哪一种方法,都要利用流程图上所给出的词,这是图提供给我们的方便,要充分利用。在读懂图的基础上,再有这些关键词的帮助,这篇作文就不难写出来了。整篇文章字数要求是150字,图中给出的词往往就占了将*三分之一,考生要写的就只是余下的三分之二左右了。

  4.主体部分的句子多用被动语态

  流程图说明文的特点是多用被动语态,主要是指主体部分对过程说明性的句子采用被动语态,这样会显得比较客观和学术性一些。

  5.注意连接词和转折词的运用

  流程图说明文是按照一个流程的顺序来写的,上句和下句之间往往存在着先后次序的逻辑关系,或者意思转折的关系。因而,两句之间经常需要用到有关的连接词或转折词。考生要注重这两类词或短语的使用,而且要用得自然,合理和圆润,这样才能使全文读起来清晰流畅,一气呵成。

  6.尽量避免用词重复,做到变化,多样化

  这一点其实对于所有英文写作都一样的,流程图作文当然也不例外。写作英文时要带着这个观念,善于运用同义词语。不光是同义词之间的转换使用,还要扩展到同义的词和短语,短语与句子之间的变换。养成这个*惯对写作很有益处。

  当然尽量避免用词重复,并不是说绝对不可以重复,只是尽量避免。有时有些专有名词是难免重复的,但即使要重复用到,也尽可能拉远一点距离,不宜靠得太*重复。

  考生在雅思写作考试时有两种常见写作顺序,雅思考试时应该先写小作文还是先写大作文?。一种是先写大作文,另一种是先写小作文。到底哪一种更为可取呢?

  如果先写大作文的话,由于大作文在写作中得分的比重大,所以可以先攻克难关,有充分的时间来写大作文,可以避免由于花过多时间在小作文上而导致大作文写不完的情形。但如果大作文的时间花得太长了,小作文没写好的话,也是很可惜的。而且,考生在刚提笔写作的时候,通常需要一段时间来进入写作状态,这样一来,大作文的前半部分可能写得就会不如人意。

  反之,如果先写小作文,虽然可能有大作文还等在后面的心理压力,但好处更多。首先,小作文比较简单,套话多,结构容易,表达法也更加固定,所以写起来比较顺利,可以增强自信心,托福英语《雅思考试时应该先写小作文还是先写大作文?》。其次,进入写作状态是需要时间的,先写小作文可以让自己的笔头越写越顺,等到20分钟后开始写大作文的时候,正好进入最佳状态,来面对大作文。

  总之,我个人认为,还是先写小作文,然后再写大作文更为可取。当然,如果考生*惯了先写大作文的话,也是完全可以按照自己的步调来进行的。但无论先写大作文还是小作文,都需要分配好时间,那就是小作文20分钟左右,大作文40分钟左右。

  Which plays the major role in children's personality development, nature or nurture?

  Over the past few decades there has been an ongoing nature-versus-nurture debate about the causes of children’s personality. To the best of my knowledge, there are many influences on the development of a child’s personality, but the main causes are his genetic makeup, environment, and behavioral genetics.

  There is evidence that both genetics and environment affect children’s personality. Studies have shown that the tendency to acquire some personality characteristics �C including activity levels, anxiety, aggression, and independence �C can be inherited. Although one’s genetic makeup does not determine one’s behavior, it provides a child strong tendency to behave in a particular way.

  Personality is also influenced by environment. Thus, a child with particular personality characteristics is more likely to show them if the home environment reinforces them. For example, harshly punishing a child who has a genetically based tendency for aggression contributes further to the child’s aggression.

  Major advances have been made through behavioral genetics, the field concerned with the relative influence of genetic and environmental factors on individual behavior. For example, if we study the personalities of identical twins who have been separated since birth, we may find that the twins have the same genetic makeup but differ in the environments in which they are reared. Similarities and differences can help reveal the relative importance of genetic and environmental influences.

  To sum up, the shaping of a child’s personality is attributed mainly to the role of specific social experiences and environmental events, his genetic makeup as well as the behavioral genetics. (250 words)

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